A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: The True Spirit Heavenly Phoenix
凡人之真灵天凤
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- Completed
- Length
- 1.1M Words
- Genre
- Xianxia
- Subgenre
- Cultivation Civilization
- Updated
- 3y ago
- English
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The title is wrong! It shouldn't be called "The Mortal's True Spirit Phoenix," it should be called "The Mortal's Born Old Demon"!
The common problem with all mortal fanfiction is that there are too many overpowered abilities. At the rate you continue writing, you'll likely abandon the story before it's even published.
The protagonist can now stay in the mountains, doing absolutely nothing. Just based on his recent breakthrough to Foundation Establishment, he already has a lifespan of over 1000 years, and he'll probably reach the Divine Transformation stage in 1000 years.
Poisonous It includes a lot of personal touches and some rather strange secondary settings. Those who haven't read the original work might find it worth checking out. The overhang is huge, but the actual performance is... Emmm. They also created a primordial spirit similar to a clone. Cold-blooded and ruthless, he used people to refine weapons, and the first weapon he used was Mo Fengwu.
The protagonist is too overpowered, so there's no real enjoyment in watching it. There are no difficulties, it's a smooth ride, and nothing really happens. It feels like I didn't watch it at all.
The protagonist is too cold-blooded. Even people with normal values can't accept him draining Mo Fengwu dry to refine weapons. He had a bright future even without practicing that demonic art, so why did he have to practice such evil things?
The Heavenly Bottle, the ultimate cheat in the mortal world, I feel uneasy if I don't collect it.
While I strongly dislike overly saintly characters and prefer novels with a touch of cold-bloodedness, I personally dislike protagonists using non-enemies for weapon forging. I find it a bit too cold-blooded! I hope there will be fewer similar plots in the future!
I think that writing a "Mortal's Journey to Immortality" fanfiction doesn't actually require any system or cheat codes. Authors can simply give the protagonist exceptional talent in array formations, talismans, and pills, along with a special physique, or even the complete five elements of spiritual roots.
They directly took in your master's three daughters. Since you can transfer spiritual roots, they wouldn't even know if they had them. It's said that Mo Caihuan was reincarnated as Zi Ling, so she must be very beautiful. The other two sisters aren't bad either.