The Immortal Old Recluse

This is anything but cheap, and the currency system is a bit of a mess. In the early stages, you get thousands or tens of thousands of spirit stones, it's basically water.

Chapter Six has no major flaws, but quite a few minor ones. First and foremost is the system, especially the proficiency system. Putting aside other aspects, defining spells is fine; it reduces casting delay, mana consumption, and increases damage. However, applying it to cultivation techniques causes problems.

Sigh, I hope the plot isn't driven by women!

He neither fights, nor develops his power, nor enjoys life; he just wanders around like a frightened bird all day long. There's no actual combat, yet you practice so many spells. You say those spells are powerful, but what makes them powerful? You don't even need to use them. It's not "" (gǒu), it's "" (shǔ).

Wearing clothes back and forth, it's all a mess, could you be any more sloppy?

Outrageous! Absolutely outrageous! A Golden Core cultivator's territory spanning over 100,000 miles? That's outrageous! If that were true, wouldn't a Nascent Soul cultivator be able to take off like a rocket?

Reaching the Qi Refining stage requires tens of thousands of spirit stones, and with a lifespan exchanged for one, it would take 250,000 years to destroy the Golden Core stage. Hehehehe.

You only write a few chapters for the beginning of each world; I really don't understand why you even bother writing it. Is it just filler?

Like a madman, and with his low level of cultivation, he's always worrying about this and that.

I got scared away by the poison and curse techniques after reading chapter 12. He's only at the Qi Refining stage, how could he know its effects on Foundation Establishment or Golden Core cultivators? (The previous users of this secret technique were most likely using it on cultivators of the same or lower level.