Already Transmigrated, My Clone Fights to Survive the Apocalypse

If the author can't write an emotional drama, then don't write it. If my wife and grandfather die, just bury them in the woods? Is there anything you can do to be more indifferent? The grandpa is smiling with the protagonist as soon as he dies, so he is probably a fake grandpa.

The villains in it are all uneducated if they say anything unpleasant...

The writing in ancient times is too bloody and cliched.

I have just read a few chapters, and the author is not sophisticated enough. The protagonist has parents who care about him in time travel, and he is moved to accept it. I am speechless. Relationships take time to cultivate. How can adults with mature views accept strangers as their parents? The reality is not a TV series. There is a person around me who has been separated from his parents for many years, and he has no feelings after being reunited. , Only polite, the protagonist actually recognized his parents, unbelievable, and the protagonist actually killed a group of Zhang family members just a few days ago, I also think he has anti-social personality, modern ordinary people will not kill people even if they are threatened. This is determined by our country's education. Since we have to kill people, why not do something to Miss Zhang family? Is it possible for a virgin to do the sexy thing?

I can't stand it after reading more than 90 chapters. I said that the blood-sucking vine can absorb spiritual stones. If you get 4,000 spiritual stones, you won't need them. If you don't improve your strength, just let it go? In ancient times, when you knew about cultivation and martial arts, you didn't practice with secret books? There was no aura in ancient times, but isn't there a resurgence of aura in modern times? Both sides jumped sideways repeatedly, but neither of them knew what they were doing. The author is too forgetful, and his wife is pregnant. After leaving the pregnant wife, he ran out to practice. After getting the news about Zhentiansi, he ran back. Where was the promise of killing ghosts and increasing attribute points to break the bottleneck? Especially after I ran back and the child was gone! How bad is your memory? Write wherever you think of it? The first thing is that you want to live forever, the next thing is to enjoy life, and after that, you have to build a family, do you still need fertile land? Oh my god, you have the strength and fertile land before others can recognize you as a big family? It's just as funny as if you go out to cook and are very good at it, but you don't have a chef's certificate and the boss doesn't recognize you as a chef, isn't it? The subject matter is a good one, but it's a pity

The author jumped when he wrote about the interstellar book. The author has no knowledge about the universe and planets. Jupiter is a gaseous planet, but you still go there to mine. I am speechless.

After reading a few chapters, I went to the village to buy some skin to persuade me to quit. I feel arrogant even if I have some strength. The cool writing mode has been out of fashion for many years. Now who has the time and energy to watch you slowly polish the psychological changes of the protagonist, directly mature his mind and still have a sense of substitution...

When I started interstellar travel, I completely failed to write it. It would be quite interesting if I just switch between the earth and ancient times at the beginning. At least I can keep watching. Suddenly, the spaceship left the earth. Then I didn't understand what you were writing at all. I can't stand it anymore!

To be honest, it's a bit overwhelming. The article you wrote may have been popular 6 or 7 years ago. It's not rigorous. You don't have a good grasp of human nature. The advantage of force in modern society has been forcibly reduced by you.

Why doesn't the protagonist stop practicing? At the beginning, he practiced until his energy and blood were perfect, and then he never practiced again. It was fine if he never practiced the martial arts in the past. Later, his cultivation came out, and the cultivators were subdued, but he still didn't practice. Cultivation is obviously very simple. You have reached perfection after just starting to practice. After all, it is a strength. At least you can learn some skills. It is better than just playing blindly now. There is also cultivation later. Aren't various spells better than just hitting them with a stick? Still can live forever. The protagonist is like a dead person. He only relies on clones to improve his strength. He has not done anything else useful.