The Autocratic Lord

I suddenly had the idea to write something myself. I don't know if I can even read a book I wrote myself. But I wrote it anyway. I personally like the kind of story where the lord asks questions. I've read many books where the lord is always at the forefront, which doesn't suit my taste.

Almost identical to a certain novel, it's set in a water-scarce desert where people recruit rat-people to build underground structures and sell water. Could it be by the same author?

The plot is too similar to that of a certain book. It's acceptable to borrow from it, but borrowing too much is a bit much. The same rats, the same fox merchant, only this time the recruits have changed from skeletons to people.

One young slave can be summoned for 1 gold coin, then sold directly to high-ranking nobles—it's limitless... I'm not exaggerating, without population limits and with troops this cheap, I could conquer an entire country in a year.

You wrote "killing" as "killing" (杀戳), which sounds really awkward.

Well, the early development was too fast, so it's easy for it to fall apart later. I've read up to chapter 175 now, and it feels like the protagonist's power is almost invincible.

Just finished reading Chapter 5, here are my thoughts... First, there are too many "Holy crap!" And "Awesome!" Comments like that, it's really distracting. Secondly, there are just too many loopholes in the beginning... Did you even check the map yourself before going to explore? You wrote a section where everyone rode horses together, but...

Your village-building game is way too blatant! Using sci-fi and fantasy elements to build villages with low-level weaponry. It's so addictive, it's almost unbearable.

That felt pretty good, breaking away from mindless clichés 😁

I think the most important unit in ancient times was the archer! Author, although I don't want to say anything, as a crucial part of tactical strength, archers were far more important than infantry and cavalry! And siege weapons too! So many other unit types are missing. Author, the world you've created is so pitiful.