Start Slaying Evil Spirits from the World of Uncle Jiu

As long as a monastic novel has a female protagonist or a harem, it will be doomed.

The protagonist has some bad views. In the beginning, the couple was killed and their family was destitute. The culprit was the village chief, who also condoned the gangsters. The protagonist actually said it was a small evil?

There are too many psychological activities and narrations, which affects reading

Alas, I don't know what to say. I'm not qualified to say too much. If I don't say it, I feel helpless. Because you write well and more people read it, you will continue to write. Only I can read it. But the past ten chapters are watery and bad. The Qiu Sheng you wrote is like this. Is it just useless? Stay for the plot later? It's better to let Qiu Sheng be like before, committing suicide together with Wen Cai and making troubles to hinder Uncle Jiu. You write like this, and Uncle Jiu is not a human being inside and outside.

Looking at the introduction, it is difficult to understand the disharmony among the three mountain Taoist traditions. This is impossible. They all have the same origin. There is no struggle for hegemony. Furthermore, in many novels there is harmony, but your sudden discord is strange.

How to deal with Qiu Sheng beating someone to death? Let's watch the follow-up, otherwise we will have to give up.

This introduction to the gods and Buddhas is a bit low-level, and the villain is not up to par either. At least he must be at the level of a creator like Chakravartin from the Wrath of Asura world, who only plays with the destruction of the river system and casually creates stars and destroys the universe, right? For example, the lower limit of the Tathagata Maharashtra must be the level of the planet's alaya consciousness, right? Gods and Buddhas have to look like gods and Buddhas, like a millennium centipede touching the porcelain Sakyamuni. However, if the position of gods and Buddhas at the Tathagata's enlightened level interferes with the form realm, they must at least be at the level of Asura's Wrath of World Chakravartin (not an infinite box system). Basically, most novels use gods and Buddhas to make fun of them, but gods and Buddhas are not real 🙂

It would look much better if there were fewer mental activities and narration.

After seeing Chapter 59 and abandoning it, I won't say whether it's good or bad. After all, everyone has different preferences. The author couldn't agree with the portrayal of Qiu Sheng and Ren Tingting and forced them to be wise.

Very good idea. It didn't look good at first when I saw the suspected heroine. Goodbye fire.

In the Jiu Shu series, the Maoshan Taoist priests all have three shortcomings and five shortcomings, and even Lu Ban Shu Neng wants to learn magic. Because it is stealing secrets. The same goes for fortune tellers. Most fortune tellers are blind.

The address of Xingkong Road is good, I recommend it.

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The creativity is good, but the writing technique is a bit awkward.

Can the author give you a happy word? Seeing that I have finished reading diligently, is there a heroine? Does the protagonist have any plans to expand the harem? Seeing that the protagonist accepted Ren Tingting and Dong Nvgui, is this the direction it is going?