Traveling Through the Terrifying World, but I Am Shi Jian

You, Shi Jian, are a bit incompetent. The guy next door studied under Shi Jian. Shi Jian can already produce super electromagnetic bubbles, and even created electromagnetic body refining and so on.

Hey, let me tell you how I feel. The author likes conspiracy theories very much, and re-creates the original story line. Although re-creating the story can make the story more exciting, it is boring to always bring the final villain to Xiaoli. How can Xiaoli be so powerful? I couldn't stand it after reading two or three articles. Can't you create an original evil organization? Do you have to turn it to Xiaoli?

Let's talk about AI writing, it's a bit different! It's not AI, but I really like Rory. It's a lot of nonsense It's the kind that feels good, but not completely good It's like wearing a ten-layer condom during sex

It looks sloppy

Sister Pomegranate Back then

How can I put it this way? I really like the subject matter. As for the writing, I just feel like I feel good but not happy at all.

This time-traveling happens in the underworld, but how can it travel to someone else? It's okay to say it's about awakening memories from past lives or replacing concepts. Are you really the founder of the local government?

If you don't have the writing style, I wouldn't recommend writing about a protagonist who is already in a mature stage from the beginning. Not to mention the way he speaks and speaks like a Taoist, does he look like a person who is several decades old? Traveling through the past for so long is a waste of time, right? Author, just look at yourself. The person you are now is the same person you were more than ten years ago. Can you speak, act, and be the same person? You will always be a primary school student. A college student's body contains the brain of a primary school student. Is this appropriate?

Less secondary creation and more character description. Try to minimize interactions with ghosts and evil spirits. This will reduce the scary atmosphere. Carry out in-depth development of the character's original skills.

You senior brother is too weak. Look next door.

The author is not afraid of writing too much and can also add one person to the story. The protagonist and the Heavenly Master are in the same era. The relationship between Ximen Chuixue and Ye Gucheng can be that they are both competitors and confidants.

That Bai Rourou is very good. She has strength, looks, and a figure. She is suitable for being a Taoist companion. She is not a flower vase. She can help when encountering problems and does not hold her back. The most important thing is that she has an inheritance, a sect with a background, and the interoperability of Taoism and Dharma. She understands everything.

What's the point of posting so many pictures of beauties? You're the old version of Shi Jian.

I'll give you two monthly passes, and please let Uncle Jiu and Sister Pomegranate live together for a long time.

The subject matter is okay, but I don't know how the writing is.

It was a bit boring and too bland. After watching it, I remembered to use the stick that I used to beat Qiu Sheng.

The idea is good, but the details are not polished well enough.

Are there any real photos of Shi Jian? They are not impersonations of time travellers.

Can you please write more happily and not be depressed and suppress your fighting power?