Starting from the Story of a Mortal Cultivating Immortality, Traveling Through the Heavens

Is the fifth-ranked strange fire in Doubo too useless in the hands of the protagonist? Has it been reduced to the point where it can only ripen the elixir? No matter how bad he is at fighting, he is only weak compared to the same strange fire. And the protagonist can't figure out the plot? The same bloody forbidden land, the same second-order monster, the same banging

What is the use of extracting elixir recipes from other worlds? The medicinal materials required for the original elixir recipe may not be available in the mortal world. Without the materials, it is impossible to make an elixir. I feel that it is better to get some theoretical knowledge such as "Detailed Explanation of Basic Alchemy Principles" and "Methods for Identification of Medicine Properties". It is better to let the protagonist study the elixir recipe by himself.

All I can say is that it is a daily guide to poison.

Mortals are not suitable for writing about the heavens, especially those that have plots that are many years in advance. First of all, if you can travel through the heavens, there will be a lot of resources available, and the protagonist will improve faster and faster. Maybe the protagonist has already become an immortal before Han Li's plot is reached. If it is written too slowly, it will collapse.

I don't dare to subscribe now. After so many chapters, the protagonist's cultivation level has not improved a bit. He is sitting in the Immortal Palace of Creation, the Flame of Creation, and the red lotus and golden lotus. He can't use up all the spiritual medicine. As a result, he is still in the early stage of elixir formation. How can you convince others?

After only reading a few of them, I feel like the logic doesn't make sense. The protagonist has the flames of life that can ripen elixirs, and he can make elixirs, but he doesn't have any spiritual stones to buy magic weapons? Is it the author or do you think the readers are stupid? Doesn't the protagonist usually make elixirs when he has nothing to do? Sell ​​these elixirs when you go out. Do you want any magic weapons by then? You can be stupid,

The author has a golden finger that can accelerate the elixir of ripening, but he still wants to enter the forbidden area just to fill the plot with too many words. It's very unreasonable. If you say you plagiarized the plot line, it's fine. If you still want to plagiarize the plot, then it's a rubbish novel. For example, is it reasonable for a billionaire to pick up trash to eat?

If you write about the heavens, it is best to write about the heavens of mortals. The world of mortals cultivating immortality is not limited to the human world. Within mortals there are heavens and worlds

It's a little bit toxic. In the second chapter, there are inconsistencies. And then you have to worry about the setting. You said which of the different fires in Doupo cannot be used to make medicine. How about you add a setting saying that the realm is low and can't be used. It's better than saying that the different fires can't be used to make medicine.

Seeing that the flame of life cannot make elixirs, I will give up immediately. What about wool? Alien Fire can't make elixirs, and he's not good at fighting. But if you say he can't make elixirs, I just laugh out loud.

It's pretty good. I suggest you write less about the protagonist's inner drama or self-pleasure. You wrote before that you can get luck by fighting and you can arrange it occasionally. If there are small battles, you can install various plug-ins for the protagonist reasonably. If you get luck, you can get rich, gain combat experience, and grow quickly. It is recommended not to always mention the luck value. This thing is unstable and easy to collapse, which is annoying and thankless. For example, if you can't destroy Han Li, you can't destroy the Qixuanmen. Han Li went to Qixuanmen when he was born. Elder Mo and Master Jinguang all gave him a way to start his cultivation. Whether he can enter the Yellow Maple Valley has become unknown. He used the teleportation array in advance or destroyed it. He did not contact Han Li or hang around in front of him. People related to Han Li were kept away. If the opportunity came, grab it two steps in advance. The luck value will come, otherwise, it will be the same as the luck value. There is no difference between being a nanny under the guise The protagonist Goldfinger is even better than Han Li's little green bottle. Your thing can extract items from other worlds, and can travel through the heavens to see the cultivation methods of different worlds and obtain different resources. It would be funny if a proper carnivore was written as a herbivore.

That forbidden area should end soon. So many fans have written about it. I'm tired of reading it. Unless you can write something new, it's all the same, boring. The first chapters are sparse. I only bought seven or eight weapons after buying two weapons. I guess this forbidden area can be filled with more than ten chapters, right?

The author is constantly suppressing the protagonist and the seven factions of the Yue Kingdom! Hongfu Jiedan is about thirty years ahead of the protagonist, no more than fifty years at most. As a result, Hong Fu is at the peak of the middle stage of forming an elixir (he formed an elixir a long time ago. I took a look and it seems that the protagonist has just formed an elixir. Hong Fu seems to be in the middle stage). Now that the protagonist has been forming an elixir for 20 or 30 years, it is still in the early stage. Where does the protagonist have so many spiritual herbs? Didn't see any effect at all. The reason why Han Li is one hundred and thirty years old in forming pills is because of his San Gong practice, but Yuanying is in his early two hundred. The protagonist's skills are better than Han Li's, and his qualifications are better than Han Li's. But he can't become a Nascent Soul before he's 200 years old? Do you still need to try your best to push the Red Buddha up? Obviously both of them can become Nascent Soul. The protagonist I am writing now is like a pig, and he still needs cash to get the Red Buddha Yuanying, for fear that he will not be able to Yuanying before the seven sects invade. . And if I don't remember, taking drugs will quickly improve your cultivation. As long as the power of the pill formation is sufficient before the late stage of pill formation, the protagonist can take drugs quickly. Thirty to fifty years is enough to reach the peak of the middle stage of pill formation. After all, your current Red Buddha has reached the middle stage of pill formation so quickly. The protagonist's current cheats (no more lottery and additional cheats) are enough to get Yuanying two hundred years ago, and get a little something else. One hundred, fifty or sixty years is enough. In addition, how much trouble has the protagonist set for the seven factions, especially Huang Maple Valley? There are Qi Yang Dan for Qi training, Jing Jing Dan for foundation building, and Jin Jie Dan for knotting elixirs. For a person with ordinary qualifications, at this rate, one hundred and twenty to thirty years would be enough to form an elixir.

Brother, don't write about Qi Hao too well... Zhu Xian readers are the senior sister who can't get over it. Qi Hao was at least a hundred or two hundred years old and wanted to kill Zhang Xiaofan with a sword. Back then, he wanted to hack him to death! It's okay if you don't mess with him. If you don't believe me, just ask...

The new world is an original world. Because I really couldn't decide which world to write about, I used the mortal system to create an original one. If you have any worlds you would like to recommend, please leave a comment and I will consider it.

Change Chapter 8. After a fight, I fell to the ground and fainted. The casual cultivators passing by for a day are not like you. This seems unreasonable and very poisonous.

No matter what kind of strange fire it is, it must have at least a certain temperature. Why can't you make elixirs? Just like mineral water can be drunk but sea water cannot be drunk, you just say that mineral water cannot drown people.

Don't add some self-righteous settings randomly, it will only be thankless.

It's almost 100 chapters, and I can't beat any casual person. If it weren't for the golden finger to save my life, I would have died twice. The writing is not good, and I keep making internet memes.

I hope you can give us your opinions, some treasures, exercises, magical powers, etc.

Don't want a harem, don't want a harem, don't want a harem, that's it, I'm tired of it

After raising it for three months, three chapters will be updated.

The last book also reached this point and suddenly ended.

I was a eunuch twice, once my father hurt his eyes, and once my father and my cousin made sacrifices to heaven.

The monthly pass is about to expire, so I'll give one to the author 🤭