Create Justice in the World of Pirates

This book is probably not cool. The first one, which crazily suppresses the protagonist, can end the war between the Sandians and the aborigines, but cannot defeat the little pirates at sea? ? ?

It would be better if the main character was more involved, but now it's a bit lazy

Hurry up and cut it. I don't know what the logic of this book is. Are you trying to force the protagonist or just want to poison? Inexplicably well written, don't write it next time

Archangel

😅😅😅Age is a flaw! The Navy still has restrictions on the age of enlistment. Zefa joined the army at the age of 14 and did not participate in actual combat for the first time until he was 18 or 17 years old. You are just 10 years old doing the work of an 18-year-old! Every time I see the age, my head explodes... The navy is not a pirate! There are also many bugs, such as the navy walking up the upside down mountain. Nine out of ten fans make such low-level mistakes... The author writes well, please come on, there are a lot of bugs in One Piece, try to avoid them!

The main characters in this book have problems, whether they are bad puss or good mothers, whether they are calculating or ruthless. You must have a character that stands out and is easy for readers to remember. What is the character label of the protagonist of this book: silly boy + green teenager?

I'm really speechless. It's nothing to be thrown off an empty island. It's not shameful to be unable to defeat Roger, but why did he become a beggar? This is too inferior, right?

I just saw that for the first time, I didn't use my combat power, but I had to get beaten before using it. Are you talking about Ultraman beating monsters?

I don't know if that's a typo. Porusalino could be written as Sakaski, otherwise it could be written as Weiran, etc. It's so outrageous in every sense that I know it's wrong, but I can do it for you without even knowing what to do with intracranial correction. It is uninterrupted from beginning to end and it affects reading at the same time. I have to read your book for a while and then quit and use Macabaka to let the brain cool down.

Are there any conflicts in these recent chapters?

It's an angel