Pirates: Establishing the Dragon King Family

For the Dragon King family, the easiest way is to survive. At the beginning, Ghidorah has already surpassed many phantom beast species fruits, and there is no back-up plan for the gods of One Piece. Except for some superhuman types and natural types that can serve as energy sources, the animal type is no longer of much use to the protagonist The top-level protagonist's children have blood factors and artificial devil fruits The middle-level may be able to produce gene seeds with IQ, turning half-dragons into dragon-blooded forbidden troops and the protagonist's children's degraded dragon-blooded forbidden troops, dragon-blooded monks, to govern the country with supermen Classic centralized power system, it is also good to be a classical centralized tyrant. Barbarians don't need enlightenment, not everyone is the sun

The subject matter is good, the writing is average, and the sentences are long-winded.

Did you forget that the protagonist is Ghidorah?

Author, how about you go back to writing Game of Thrones?

There is a lot of writing and ink about Ghidorah but it is not used. The general wants your life. He will not care if you seriously injure someone. You are such a good person. Rocks was not going to die at that time, he was just injured. In this world of pirates, this injury is nothing. There is also a lot of verbosity, a long and long verbosity.

After I finished writing, I tried listening to the book myself. The writing was terrible and verbose.

The plot is second-rate and the writing is third-rate, but it's pretty good if you dare to try.

Many authors nowadays pursue explosive points too much and like to give the protagonist big hooks. The problem is that big hooks can easily collapse because the protagonist improves too quickly and has no potential for growth. The plot and combat effectiveness will be exhausted before the middle stage.

I never thought of this angle before, it's too strong.

This kind of money-costing gimmick usually doesn't end well.... Chapter 1 is not finished yet. Retreat first.

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So early, does the heroine have Lingling?