Pirate's Seat of the Void

I'm afraid this author has never read the original work! Write based on guesswork? I haven't even read a few chapters and it feels extremely confusing. The timeline is confusing and there is no explanation of the background. You think he is writing about Rocks. He fights a group of big guys in the Valley of the Gods. He has just gone to sea and meets Roger who is ill and will not live long. Rayleigh, who is also the right-hand man of the Pirate King, is already so awesome that he can take Barrett's full blow with one finger. Big Mom, who was originally under Rocks, is already a boss and has the Charlotte family, and even held a tea party! When I saw the word "Auntie's Charlotte Family" appear, I didn't want to read it anymore! It's amazing. I originally thought that the protagonist's soul could pass through Rocks, because after all, Barrett with the fusion fruit also appeared, and it happened to be the war-torn country that Barrett was in when he was a child. Who would have thought that Big Mom's Charlotte family would suddenly pop up? Wasn't Big Mom the only Charlotte family that came into being after the Rocks Pirates disbanded? Then Roger came out and was already a big boss. Rayleigh was already so powerful that he could catch Barrett's full blow with one finger? He also confessed that Roger said he didn't have much time. Doesn't this mean that Roger is about to become the Pirate King? The Valley of the Gods is not here yet, how can we create big bosses like Roger and Big Mom? I was not in the mood for a moment. Is it so confusing? Even if you two just have the same name, and you were reborn when Roger was about to become the Pirate King, how do you explain the fusion fruit? In this world, is Barrett really not dead yet? Moreover, before the Roger Pirates disbanded, Barrett was still known as the Pirate King's right-hand man along with Rayleigh! Roger and the others would not be surprised at Barrett so easily when they meet someone with the same name and ability?

It's such a failed beginning, but you can't escape with others? If someone sends you a fatal mission, go for it. If others still have the energy to chase you, it means that others have the absolute ability to carry out the mission. So in fact, others don't need to send people to die. So people in One Piece think that they have too many people and are too powerful to send people to commit suicide?

Regarding the timeline, let me explain here. As mentioned in the previous article, when I first went to sea, I was 13 years old in 1489. Now I am 15 years old. Two years have passed, and now it is 1491. Also, the Rocks I wrote is not the Jibek, it just has the same name. Also about Barrett, because he has followed Rocks since he was a child, his experience is different. Also, just out of the sea, a full-strength attack was blocked by Rayleigh with one finger. That's because he was just out of the sea and not very strong. It took a lot of effort to fight Eredar at first, but of course it is impossible to defeat such a top pirate. After studying with the Roger Pirates for a period of time, that was the time when the strength of Barrett and Rocks skyrocketed. The current strength, in a nutshell, is the strength of a general candidate. A little weaker than the current generals, a little stronger than the lieutenant generals. If there is anything you don't understand, you can leave a message.

What a failure at the beginning! Why are you still carrying out a mission that requires death? You just ran away!

Ruth

It's become more and more boring recently, the main character has no role to play, and the main character's son is a reckless man, I don't know how to raise him. He is an unlikable character who follows the strongest in the world but does not have the vision of the strongest in the world. There has been no layout at all in ten years ←_←. You don't have to write about descendants if it's not easy to write about. It doesn't matter if you have pure gold descendants. Besides, I don't think Brother Ming dares to move. With his fighting power, the Empress of Thunder can play with him in seconds. Blackbeard is not so stupid as to think that he can defeat the protagonist by getting Devour and Darkness, right?

Why does the protagonist's son act like a fool? Has the author not wanted to write lately? If you really don't want to write, just forget about it. Stop being so disgusting.

Well written. There are also devil fruits. Come on.

I thought I could see the Valley of the Gods... It turns out it's just the same name... You'll know after reading a few chapters. It's meaningless to name it like this. Maybe if you change the name and write it down to earth, you can get more fans

I just watched a few pictures. The main character is a newcomer named Rocks. After meeting Pluto Rayleigh and Roger, they were not surprised at all, as if this name was rare and ordinary. This is not right, this name is not ordinary to them.

Damn it, I thought the heroine belonged to Yi Mu, I was looking forward to this in vain

The upper limit of such fruits is definitely the highest one! ! There are attack directions (thunder, hurricane, rain, hail, dense fog) 🤓 auxiliary directions (Island Cloud Fortress, produces cloud iron, and can also sell weather 😁😁😁)

To be honest, Im of the World Government has definitely manipulated all Devil Fruits. Except for the rubber fruit, because the rubber fruit was snatched from cp zero. The red hair went to grab it himself. He also deliberately concealed his identity. This is very suspicious.

That's the case with Pirates fandoms. The strength doesn't improve quickly enough and readers don't feel "enjoyed" by it. If the strength improves too quickly, there will be nothing to write about. Either the protagonist Shenyin will forcefully drag out the plot, or it will end early. I suggest that the author's fandom is better to write unlimited stories, and the author's "pirate" style writing is still acceptable.

If you don't know how to change the protagonist's name, what's the point of pretending? The combat power system has been messed up by you.

I would like to give the author a small suggestion. Many times, many things can be done by the crew. Nowadays, many novels recruit a bunch of powerful and incompetent crew members, but in the end, the captain will personally do the big things. In One Piece, the red-haired man wanted to stop Whitebeard and asked Ace to chase Blackbeard, which meant asking his younger brother to go and tell Whitebeard first. I feel that as a captain, you only step in if your subordinates can't handle it. It can also be seen in the comics that few captains always take action on their own.

Let's just say that there are not many good fan books in Qidian, and there are too many secondary settings. I guess the plot settings are all from other fans. I haven't researched the original work at all. I also said that I checked the original work, slapped the original work in the face, and said that it is a fan but not the original work. So please change the name of your book and don't use the traffic of the original work, because you are no longer considered a fan, it can be said to be plagiarism.

Is there something wrong with the last two chapters? The protagonist group will encounter trouble in the early stages of the Grand Route with their strength. They are a group of guys who don't even know how to be domineering. Is there something wrong with the author? ? I used to value this book very much, but it ended before it even reached its climax. Is there something wrong?

Rocks's weapon picture is probably the style of this Tang knife.

The latest information I have seen is that Jhin has been defeated by Zoro. Jhin's original name is Albert, and the name Jhin was given by Kaido.

When I read One Piece, I looked at the weird moves and the various developments of the fruits. It's okay for the author to use the fruits of the original One Piece. The main reason is that your moves are also original. I don't know if you will develop them later. It's not fresh at the beginning. I hope the author can refer to it. After all, there are too few writers of light novels. I hope the author doesn't give up, read more book reviews and discussion posts, and have a good attitude. You have to make sure that others can't find faults, so that your book will have good results and your life will be better.

This is another eunuch. You can change the ID if you write it later.

Are you still updating? I hope that even if the outline ends hastily, I don't want you to be a eunuch.

No, why should the new book you wrote be placed in the main text? Isn't it in a mess? Just bad money?

666, Just eat human flesh. This is Brother An's channel. I'll leave first.

If it were revealed in your introduction that Jim is a boy, your book would be in disgrace.

Aren't the Sand Crocodile's hands trying to see if Whitebeard has any success?

Hurry up and open a new book. If you don't open it, I'll kill you.

My mobile phone is dying. I have lags in typing, and I don't have money to replace it. I'm really frustrated. I'll save some money to replace it, nnd