Bleach: a Leisurely Life in Soul Society

Most of the protagonists in Bleach fanfics are the same 🐢, who are inherently inferior to others. As long as you meet Aizen, Urahara Kisuke, Unohana Retsu, Yamamoto, Zero Squadron, etc., They will be like cowards, and they will not have the unique toughness of the Shinigami at all. It says that the protagonist has no skills and no talents. I wonder if this thing is not set by the author? As long as the author wants to, he can kill Aizen at the beginning. In the end, every author dares to write like this. To put it bluntly, the author does not have the spirit, and what he writes is timid.

I'm speechless. I really love inventions. Even civil science is not as good as that. I just kept talking nonsense and the main character was left. It's better not to challenge your own weaknesses when you write.

Seeing as the author has also written about Qin Shi colleagues before, have you ever thought about using some of the abilities in Tian Xing Jiu Ge and Qin Shi Mingyue on the protagonist of this book, such as Tian Zong's Heaven and Earth Eclipse, Yin Yang Family's Soul Xi Long You, Zong Heng Family's Hundred Steps Flying Sword/Across All Directions...

RT I just read chapters 28~33, come here and ask if it is right? 🤔 If so, it is very poisonous to me...

I hope that the heroine will be Inoue Orihime, Arizawa Ryuki, Tobamine Riruka, Shiba Kukaku, Ise Nanao, Shifouin Yoruichi, Zaihou, Kotetsu Yuune, Unohana Retsu, Hinamori Momo, Yagomaru Lisa, Kunan Haku, Matsumoto Rangiku, Nirvana, Rukia, Dia Harribel, Nellie... Du Odyssey Vanke, Bambietta Basta, Gadis Catnip, Minina Macarone, Litoto Lampado, Kujo Nozomi, Akane Shizuku, Aura Dowagen, Jus Boyka, Miyano Matsuri, Nine Spangkur, Noel Shimbashi, Moshi Barja.

I am speechless after reading this introduction. The Technology Development Bureau is a department under the 12th Division. If not the 12th Division, the entire division is the Technology Development Bureau.

First of all, this is definitely not a book written by AI, because AI can at least use pronouns How satisfied is the author with the name of the protagonist that he puts the name of the protagonist in every sentence Do you know how my ears were tortured when I listened to the page in the first chapter of the picture with an audiobook?

Haha, I feel like it's difficult to write about the protagonist revealing his identity.

Come on, come on, come on, come on

Now this Shinigami fanfic is really about seeking common ground and not being different. When the grandson traveled through Golden Finger and became a god because he was afraid of Aizen cheating on the harem, 9 out of 10 people wrote this.

I can't stand it at all. If you are so afraid of death, why do you want to become the God of Death? Isn't it okay to be a civilian?

Water, and the update is slow, You can only choose one of water and slow, otherwise it is normal to keep books and forget about them🙂

I would like to suggest changing the cover. Your Spongebob picture has been seen in no less than five books, and it doesn't match the Grim Reaper.

I really like the rhythm, at least it's not the same fast food, I hope it can continue

Although it is a "leisurely life", 21 chapters should not be just about ordinary daily life. Every few chapters include some exciting plot and eye-catching content, such as unfolding tavern customs, interactions with other women, etc. Even if you "hate fighting and are not good at fighting", you still have to have some battles every ten chapters. Such as the growth of discussions with teammates or other Shinigami, the dodge interaction with Hiyori's daily encounters, unexpected encounters with Kyū and travel accidents, etc. It's too bland. If there are few people watching, there will be no results. After reading through Chapter 21, I am still looking forward to the ability of the Zanpakutō. It has been a hundred years since I became an official and I have not yet begun to understand it. It is like a pig that has become a monster.

The subject matter is old, but new books are updated slowly. The pace is okay, but there is no passion. It just leaves readers with plenty to guess and it will get boring. Personally, I suggest that the pace should be improved.

This introduction looks a bit familiar. Have I seen it in other Shinigami fics?

This book... I thought it would be refreshing... I've been reading it for a long time, but it's not like killing, killing, killing... I can see the first thing at a glance, stepping on Aizen and punching Yuhabach. Or is it the kind of book that can always walk around Aizen and watch the fire from the other side because it is too good? It is boring. Not long after the game started, I got together with Aizen 😠 It's better to open up a little more. When in danger, Didi Dai goes online. As soon as Didi Dai goes online, he habitually wears a mask, applies hairspray to his hair, and changes clothes. After the agent goes offline, the protagonist then loses his memory, and then a group of people are curious to find the protagonist's little secret. Then there is a group of people who are crazy about burying your secret. The two groups are constantly fighting secretly, and Aizen is constantly suffering from you. Yohababach will mark you with special combat power, but depending on your self-sealing situation, lower your threat and give priority to Yamamoto. Who knows that the younger brother wants to make a contribution and kill the protagonist. The protagonist Didi Dai comes online to fight back and saves the old man Yamamoto. Before the old man is seriously injured and about to fall into coma. (Refer to the movie version of "The Legend of Shushan") The protagonist said, "All of you are asking me when I will awaken, but what about you, what are you doing?" In the end, the protagonist awakened and cooperated with Aizen to kill Yuha. In the early stage of the story, when inserting a lot of bits and pieces, the hero saves the beauty, and afterwards the story of the beautiful woman chasing her husband, the protagonist sheds a cold sweat and asks himself, "What on earth did I do when I lost my memory? Nani? Why should I be divided into several pieces? Is this fair?! No, I have to run! But where to run? Among the maggots? That's right! But how can I get in? Grab... The kid's lollipop, can I get in?" This is interesting to write.