A Ninja Life Starting with the Flying Curse

The author does use logic when writing. Many Naruto fans tend to push conspiracy theories if they can't write well. It's so disgusting. Everything must be done with motives and interests, and impulses are only temporary. Long-term arrangements must have their own interests. The third generation can be a politician, but he cannot engage in mindless conspiracy, harming others and not benefiting himself. Why did the Third Generation promote the Will of Fire? This was something he practiced himself. After the Second Generation asked everyone to sign up, the Third Generation raised their hands without hesitation, so he is the Third Generation. He practiced this and then promoted it. Those who say that the Will of Fire cannibalize people should first think about why the First and Second Generations wanted to do Konoha Village.

First of all, I read this book after reading the reviews. I read about twenty chapters. I'm not saying that the author's writing is not good, I just found it boring and the first twenty chapters did not attract me. I came here for the HP magic golden finger in the title of the book. In Naruto, a world where great power belongs to oneself. The male protagonist behaves like a smooth middle-aged man. He is a student who talks to everyone but keeps his mouth shut. Most of the dialogue has the tone of a state-owned enterprise. Office politics started here at Hokage Medical. He is not strong and has no motivation to improve himself. I sincerely recommend the author to write a historical article. The dialogues in this book would not feel out of place in the story of a scholar becoming an official. Everyone who has watched Naruto probably knows that although the third generation likes to play politics, he plays very rubbish. Most people don't come here to see Konoha politics. Perhaps the author wants to create a new style in the poorly written Naruto. I hereby wish this book a great sale!

There is too much political nonsense and it seems a bit tiring, but everything else is good and the writing is good. I guess I want to build a rich character and world view.

To put it simply, this book is a pity for the author. The writing is clear, well-founded, and logically orderly, but it is really difficult to become popular. If the audience is wrong, it will be really difficult to save. I have read more than 80 chapters in this book. First, the protagonist is not talented enough as a ninja (that is, the chakra is too low), the status is too low (not related to Otsutsuki), and the golden finger pulls the crotch (the chakra is tied to death, and there are too few magic spells). Second, the time travel point is before World War II (not the third and fourth wars, which are the focus of popular events), that is, decisive power must be obtained before the third or fourth wars (otherwise the book will end). Due to the first reason, it is impossible to closely interact with popular characters, and because the war is approaching, you must be close to the group forces and tie your thighs to survive the war. Therefore, when your own strength is insufficient, you must use political means to obtain benefits as much as possible Third, based on the above reasons, only Tsunade appears in more scenes, and a large number of scenes are original works Or the sharing of unfamiliar characters and the struggle for political interests, which completely dilutes the elements of Naruto (the struggle of popular characters in Naruto, the new ninjutsu secret techniques and even plug-ins) It is recommended that you go to the historical area or urban area or even the fantasy area to write about it (if you really like it and are good at it) Long story about the political struggle between characters and forces), Japanese comic book fans are not very suitable for writing about political struggle (the original author barely understands politics and Japan's feudal remnants are too heavy, etc.). You can fill in bugs, but you can't spend too much time on it (you can do it through combat exploration)

Don't be fooled by the title, this is not a HP story with Naruto skin, nor is it a Naruto story with HP skin, this is a military and political story in the skin of a fan.

The power struggle in this book is very exciting, but the problem is that Kishimoto's politics can be said to be difficult to explain in one sentence. Even Nabekage can be the Darkness of the Ninja World... This caused me to have a very strong sense of disobedience while watching it. This is not Naruto at all! What are the politics of Naruto? A short dialogue in my eyes Sandai: My Shadow Danzo: You regret it End

It started out very well. It was well written considering the status of the protagonist at the time. Goldfinger was neither too big nor too small and the design was good. But the reason why I gradually dislike reading it is that the author blindly brings the ninja world into realistic logic in writing, but the ninja world is an extraordinary world, and personal strength trumps everything. Why don't I read urban literature when I'm always engaged in workplace culture and politics?

What kind of writing style does Naruto have? He is passionate. What kind of writing style do you have? It is Machiavellian. There are a few people who like Naruto who like Machiavellian tactics.

There is too much content to discuss, and it's a bit unbearable... There is almost no role for the protagonist at the end, it is all long paragraphs of theoretical research... It is not like a novel, but like a narrative, written entirely from the perspective of a bystander...

After reading the recent comments, I wanted to write a long article to refute those people who read a few Naruto fan articles and have their thoughts solidified, and even regard secondary creations and conspiracy theories as truth, but after thinking about it, I decided to forget it. It is difficult to reconcile with everyone. I hope that the author will be like me, forget it after reading the comments, and don't let the comments squander the passion for creation. Go away when I was writing the first and second novels, there were a lot of people who criticized me, and the comments were extremely unpleasant. However, I don't know if I read the comments or not, but he never replied to the comments. You comment on yours, and I'll write mine. His attitude is, you If you like it, keep reading it. If you don't like it, read other people's books. If you don't like it, read other people's books. Don't give it away if you like it. Two updates a day, a steady batch. In this way, I slowly accumulated a lot of fans through two books. The third one became popular. The second one he wrote was really good, but the results were average. It's not that I praise this novel. For now, this novel has imagination, writing style, no noobs, no harem, no running accounts, and self-consistent logic. When I was weak, I didn't pretend to be pretentious or take risks. I can still grasp the curse. The length of developing the curse can be almost the same as the battle of wits. The strength is steadily improving. Hanzo can influence Hanzo's decision-making at the age of 13. Before the protagonist Naruto is born, he can predict the big boss behind the scenes who can fight with Madara and dance together.