A Ninja Career That Begins with the Flying Curse

It started out very well. It was well written considering the status of the protagonist at the time. Goldfinger was neither too big nor too small and the design was good. But the reason why I gradually dislike reading it is that the author blindly brings the ninja world into realistic logic in writing, but the ninja world is an extraordinary world, and personal strength trumps everything. Why don't I read urban literature when I'm always engaged in workplace culture and politics?

The end of spreading flowers🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸 The early stage is very, very amazing, whether it is the name of the move or the direction of the protagonist's struggle, there are traces to follow. The protagonist's interpersonal relationships are also well arranged, and the master is indeed a master, not some careless scarecrow (I'm talking about you! Kakashi!), Or the medieval apprenticeship system (am I being exploited in another world after traveling through time?). As for the female protagonist, the main female characters are all unique, each with their own behavioral logic, and they are all "people", not just a collection of cute points that are born to be revealed to the protagonist. As for the male protagonist's lover, it's normal to have no lovers in the early stage. After all, no normal adult male with a mature mind would want to fall in love with JC JS. As for the rest, the ending can be regarded as an explanation. The miko is the wife of God (?). It's okay to become the mastermind behind the scenes in the middle period. There are too many things that the author wants to express, but as a novel, it should be subtracted. The main conflict is the fight against aliens. The remaining political systems and geopolitics are secondary. It is better to mention them in one stroke, such as uniting positive and negative. If you really want to write about this kind of subject, my suggestion is One piece (will you write this in your next book?). As a heart-eating boy, I do feel oppressed (I don't think he is a good person). The part about the Kingdom of Sand and the Puppet Master was really well written. Especially the naming of moves is very rigorous and thoughtful. Talk about the shortcomings. There is no need for a didactic paragraph. It is up to the reader to judge whether the protagonist's behavior is good or bad. Post-stage, there is no post-stage, it can only be said to be a little better than Outline Dungeon. Admittedly, the most important thing is the meal. However, if there are few readers, it must be that the story is not exciting enough. This is the author's problem. If you want to express yourself but also want to be precise, if you can do it, you are a master. If you can't do it, you have to focus on it. You need to balance what you want to express with what the readers want to see. For example, although "Kingdom of Deliverance", "Mount and Blade", "Total War: Medieval Times", and "Crusader Kings" are the same subject matter, they have different emphases and will become games with different audiences. The strength of the protagonist and the strength of the worldview determine the importance of Zheng Zhi. If the protagonist is invincible, then the others are no longer important. For details, please refer to "Sea Tiger". Only when gathering people is meaningful can we have the foundation of Zheng Zhi. In my opinion, this is also the reason why the protagonist disappears in the middle and later stages. The author particularly likes the key (I also like it), but the protagonist is too strong. As a god, it would be unconventional to participate in mortal affairs. So what should I do? Not writing is the solution. So essentially, life level conflicts with Zheng Zhi. "Gundam" solved the conflict between the strength of the fight and Zheng Zhi. The body is a product of technology, which is the basis for Zheng Zhi's role. If you really want to write about this, you should refer to historical texts. The last one is the end of the story🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸 Continue to support the next book, but don't let it be like this time (pointing).

The plot writing, the IQ of the main and supporting characters, the discovery of the golden finger, the rhythm of the plot and the completion of the original conjectures are all very online. It can be said that it is one of the few sources of food for Naruto fans. If the quality can be maintained at a stable level and the length of updates can reach millions without tj, this book will definitely become the new fairy grass!

According to the settings, everyone can share experiences, exchange ninjutsu, solve problems together, iterate a lot in a short period of time, rapidly improve various technologies, and collaborate efficiently. The improvement of personal combat power is second, and the improvement of collective combat power is simply incredible. Only from the perspective of personal combat power: Taking the start of the riot as an example, the "two Yamanakaya responsible for the infiltration work" used the hydration technique to counter the shielding signal technology of the barrier, and hijacked the barrier through loopholes in a short time. This is how a large group fights. The large group can provide each access user with a large amount of experience, and the combat consciousness will be immediately improved to the jounin level; various techniques will be improved to the master level; it can be said that everyone is a small ninjutsu doctor. And the greatest ninjutsu is sneak attack.

Does the author have any other books? It's too painful to follow this one 😭

The author does use logic when writing. Many Naruto fans tend to push conspiracy theories if they can't write well. It's so disgusting. Everything must be done with motives and interests, and impulses are only temporary. Long-term arrangements must have their own interests. The third generation can be a politician, but he cannot engage in mindless conspiracy, harming others and not benefiting himself. Why did the Third Generation promote the Will of Fire? This was something he practiced himself. After the Second Generation asked everyone to sign up, the Third Generation raised their hands without hesitation, so he is the Third Generation. He practiced this and then promoted it. Those who say that the Will of Fire cannibalize people should first think about why the First and Second Generations wanted to do Konoha Village.

First of all, I read this book after reading the reviews. I read about twenty chapters. I'm not saying that the author's writing is not good, I just found it boring and the first twenty chapters did not attract me. I came here for the HP magic golden finger in the title of the book. In Naruto, a world where great power belongs to oneself. The male protagonist behaves like a smooth middle-aged man. He is a student who talks to everyone but keeps his mouth shut. Most of the dialogue has the tone of a state-owned enterprise. Office politics started here at Hokage Medical. He is not strong and has no motivation to improve himself. I sincerely recommend the author to write a historical article. The dialogues in this book would not feel out of place in the story of a scholar becoming an official. Everyone who has watched Naruto probably knows that although the third generation likes to play politics, he plays very rubbish. Most people don't come here to see Konoha politics. Perhaps the author wants to create a new style in the poorly written Naruto. I hereby wish this book a great sale!

There is too much political nonsense and it seems a bit tiring, but everything else is good and the writing is good. I guess I want to build a rich character and world view.

To put it simply, this book is a pity for the author. The writing is clear, well-founded, and logically orderly, but it is really difficult to become popular. If the audience is wrong, it will be really difficult to save. I have read more than 80 chapters in this book. First, the protagonist is not talented enough as a ninja (that is, the chakra is too low), the status is too low (not related to Otsutsuki), and the golden finger pulls the crotch (the chakra is tied to death, and there are too few magic spells). Second, the time travel point is before World War II (not the third and fourth wars, which are the focus of popular events), that is, decisive power must be obtained before the third or fourth wars (otherwise the book will end). Due to the first reason, it is impossible to closely interact with popular characters, and because the war is approaching, you must be close to the group forces and tie your thighs to survive the war. Therefore, when your own strength is insufficient, you must use political means to obtain benefits as much as possible Third, based on the above reasons, only Tsunade appears in more scenes, and a large number of scenes are original works Or the sharing of unfamiliar characters and the struggle for political interests, which completely dilutes the elements of Naruto (the struggle of popular characters in Naruto, the new ninjutsu secret techniques and even plug-ins) It is recommended that you go to the historical area or urban area or even the fantasy area to write about it (if you really like it and are good at it) Long story about the political struggle between characters and forces), Japanese comic book fans are not very suitable for writing about political struggle (the original author barely understands politics and Japan's feudal remnants are too heavy, etc.). You can fill in bugs, but you can't spend too much time on it (you can do it through combat exploration)

Don't be fooled by the title, this is not a HP story with Naruto skin, nor is it a Naruto story with HP skin, this is a military and political story in the skin of a fan.

The power struggle in this book is very exciting, but the problem is that Kishimoto's politics can be said to be difficult to explain in one sentence. Even Nabekage can be the Darkness of the Ninja World... This caused me to have a very strong sense of disobedience while watching it. This is not Naruto at all! What are the politics of Naruto? A short dialogue in my eyes Sandai: My Shadow Danzo: You regret it End

What kind of writing style does Naruto have? He is passionate. What kind of writing style do you have? It is Machiavellian. There are a few people who like Naruto who like Machiavellian tactics.

There is too much content to discuss, and it's a bit unbearable... There is almost no role for the protagonist at the end, it is all long paragraphs of theoretical research... It is not like a novel, but like a narrative, written entirely from the perspective of a bystander...

After reading the recent comments, I wanted to write a long article to refute those people who read a few Naruto fan articles and have their thoughts solidified, and even regard secondary creations and conspiracy theories as truth, but after thinking about it, I decided to forget it. It is difficult to reconcile with everyone. I hope that the author will be like me, forget it after reading the comments, and don't let the comments squander the passion for creation. Go away when I was writing the first and second novels, there were a lot of people who criticized me, and the comments were extremely unpleasant. However, I don't know if I read the comments or not, but he never replied to the comments. You comment on yours, and I'll write mine. His attitude is, you If you like it, keep reading it. If you don't like it, read other people's books. If you don't like it, read other people's books. Don't give it away if you like it. Two updates a day, a steady batch. In this way, I slowly accumulated a lot of fans through two books. The third one became popular. The second one he wrote was really good, but the results were average. It's not that I praise this novel. For now, this novel has imagination, writing style, no noobs, no harem, no running accounts, and self-consistent logic. When I was weak, I didn't pretend to be pretentious or take risks. I can still grasp the curse. The length of developing the curse can be almost the same as the battle of wits. The strength is steadily improving. Hanzo can influence Hanzo's decision-making at the age of 13. Before the protagonist Naruto is born, he can predict the big boss behind the scenes who can fight with Madara and dance together.

It is a rare masterpiece, but objectively speaking it is difficult to become popular. After all, most people who read novels come here for a sense of pleasure. If the author just wants to describe the fire shadow in his heart and write a novel, then it is okay. It is good now, as long as he completes it step by step. If the author wants to make a living from this, I can only say that he is overthinking it. Personally, I still hope that the author will not change his style due to various "cool articles" in the comment area.

The author's writing is very good, but the style is too incompatible with a hot-blooded anime like Naruto... After reading dozens of chapters, I didn't feel any fluctuations at all. Most people who like to watch Naruto probably didn't expect to encounter this kind of Naruto fanfic, and the results are probably not very good. Martial arts must be chivalrous, and Naruto must have hot blood. The author is too rational and calm. This is a Naruto fanfic that doesn't have the right taste, but is very thoughtful.

The third generation is the kind of person who does not have the abilities of the first and second generations, but they force themselves to do what others do. If they want combat power, they are just a so-called proficient in the five elements. If they want politics, let alone talk about shit. Everyone knows what he is after reading the original work. Konoha is getting weaker and weaker. As a second generation guard, he will be killed by these so-called guards. On the contrary, his life is even more outrageous, not to mention what he was trained as a disciple of the Kage. The second generation is still young and has not reached the age where he needs to sacrifice. He has a lot of time to train new people and Konoha is a village with many geniuses. It is not inferior to the third generation and others. The second generation is also awesome in political power, research ability and other abilities. He was comprehensive and awesome, but in the end, he was replaced by the third generation and several bad guys who were unhappy with them, not to mention the old man. Anyway, even if there were Sannin later, it was not necessarily the case at the peak of Konoha. They all relied on the original foundation of Konoha. Look at those secret arts families that have nothing to do with the third generation and them. They have been suppressing Chiha and they are incompetent. This situation It's not up to the older generation to oppose Chiha, so the third generation of Konoha's f4 is really a piece of shit and is not qualified at all. They rely on the leader to support them to make way for them. They are not necessarily very good. The strongest influence in the future is not based on bragging. Who doesn't understand? The reputation of these old leaders is not good. It's strange that Konoha can have a good impression of the f4 group.

The author's writing skills are indeed very powerful. Most novels will try to avoid this kind of political description, because the description will be slightly worse, which will greatly reduce the impression of the whole book, because it will involve the discord of three views. If the author is not capable but describes these things, he will only humiliate himself, making people feel like he is playing house, without any seriousness. The smooth logic alone is enough to outweigh any other shortcomings (the level of most Naruto fans is really poor)

If you write it like this, it would be meaningless if you still delay playing house until Naruto and Sasuke are born!

， The basis of his grand vision was an unknown magic. After defeating the aliens, will the magic backfire? Souji thought magic was his power, what if it wasn't? Since he is following conspiracy theories, he has been skeptical all the way to the end, not believing in either chakra or magic.         ，，，，

The author's plot is very good, but it is too conspiratorial and too many calculations to make it unbearable. However, it is still quite powerful. If it is converted into a historical text, it can be read, but Naruto really doesn't need to be so complicated.

You are really a second-generation student. You are writing a thesis. Most ninjas operate in secret. You see, most of Naruto's plots are about spying on intelligence to complete tasks. There is no room for publicizing ninjutsu skills. Although there is a school, it is completely different from ordinary schools. It is a military unit. Do you think Orochimaru is in academic research?

After reading these political struggles, the writing is quite good, but it is unrealistic in the world of Naruto. No matter how much the mind is playing, it is not as good as the sword. In the real world, when warlords fight, you will see that many literati want to die in batches. How many people died in the Huangchao Millennium Family in the Tang Dynasty? This is still when the difference in force is not large. And what's interesting about Naruto is that chakra can be perceived by people. Unless you are very powerful, when you are weak, many people don't mind killing a low-level novice who doesn't like it.

Ah? You write about Machiavellian politics in Naruto? Is there such a thing in Naruto? All of them are childish. To be honest, if you have this kind of writing skills, you might as well go to the historical district to write?

Who is reading this fandom to watch the office struggle?

To be honest, this is the most deviant fanfic I have ever seen. It is rare to have a protagonist who takes a political route to climb up. It is much more interesting and reasonable than either making up the character's dark and disabled attributes or cheating.

This kind of little person's pursuit of power and profit, and the low-level plot surrounding the protagonist were described in too detail, which made me feel indifferent while reading it. I skipped large sections of text. I also like to read Naruto political articles, but it is not this kind of history of the hard struggle of a small person. The writing is good, but I really don't have the patience to read it.

It's all inner drama, the characters explain a chapter in one sentence, and the sea is you.

It's pretty good. I'm looking forward to the follow-up with more than 200 chapters. After all, Naruto fan fiction has been written badly for a long time, and there are only so many ideas. This subject is still rare. Unfortunately, I don't know if the author is not used to it in the early stage. Many things are written with a modern feeling. At least the part of the hospital is not as modern as Naruto Then writing the article may be to consider expressing For convenience, I directly used words or idioms that should not appear in Naruto theory. Of course, it may be for readers to see, but there are indeed some dramas There is also the performance of the protagonist. I am mainly puzzled that the protagonist does not seem to show personal attributes other than politics and spiritual practice. Taking the role of Naruto as an example, we all know that the second generation is political. Kage 90% of the character, but we also know that he is a man who is proud of his talents. He will be angry because Naruto said that the jutsu he developed is that of the fourth generation. We also know that he is a pervert in the third generation. Even the King of Pots has this kind of personality based on Tsunade saying that he was handsome when he was young. These all provide help for the human attributes of the character and appear more real But as far as the protagonist is concerned, what readers and characters in the book have always seen is his pursuit of interests. I have reached more than 200 chapters and even seen his daily practice, what he does outside of political operations, whether he likes sweet or salty food, what type of women he actually likes, and his personal attributes seem to have never been seen. Can this kind of political monster who is completely mechanized and only seeks to climb up really be considered a human being?

From about twenty chapters to now, I have nothing to do to mention why I like this unique Naruto fanfic. Office culture, workplace culture and the use of various power tactics are undoubtedly the biggest highlights, but for me, what I appreciate most is the logic of writing. The author takes the trouble to deconstruct and analyze the motivations of the actions of all the characters, covering almost every aspect without missing any details. As mentioned in the introduction, he treats people in the ninja world as people with normal IQs. Through powerful analysis, the underlying logic of the actions of all parties is presented to the readers in a simple and easy-to-understand manner. This is not to look down on the readers' thinking ability, but it is a manifestation of respect for the readers' dual intelligence. This kind of respect from the perspective of dual commerce allows readers to have an observation perspective closest to the protagonist, and readers can receive most of the information that the protagonist comes into contact with. Just like mystery novels give readers and detectives synchronized information, so that they can think together, the sense of immersion is greatly enhanced. After the addition of the sense of substitution, you will have a natural and natural feeling when facing the development of the story. It does not mean that there will be no surprises in the twists and turns, but it means that you will not feel out of place or unreasonable OOC. To borrow from what Wang Xiaobo said in his essay, the public perception of "(scientific) papers" is that the other party has completely told you the principles, conditions, steps, risks, and conclusions, and can support any practice for verification, so that people feel that "if you don't believe him, you will look too stupid."