In the Middle Ages, I Draw Cards to Rise in Rank

The author writes well, keep it up ... But the update is too slow! (Say it loudly)

From the current point of view in the article, accepting the request of Queen Mother Maria Komnenos and marrying Princess Isabella is a thing that has more advantages than disadvantages. Well, first of all, Princess Isabella can obtain the identity of a member of the past, and the identity of a member of the royal family can enhance the protagonist's own power, which is of great help. And, um, the protagonist will become a ruler. If the lord is a lord, then having a legal wife is a very important thing, because without a wife often means that there is no legal heir. A lord without an heir has no future, and few people will truly be loyal to you. King Baldwin in the article obviously has extraordinary talents, but he gradually loses control of the situation because he has leprosy and has difficulty having offspring. Princess Isabella's status as a prince allows these people to better use the platform of the Kingdom of Jerusalem to expand their own strength, and Princess Isabella often means that Jerusalem is not alone. The inheritance rights of the kingdom are very helpful for the protagonist to become the king reasonably and legally, and the line of Queen Mother Komnenos is also helpful for the protagonist to become relatives with the Emperor of the Eastern Empire, which is conducive to gaining the support of the Eastern Empire. If the situation in the kingdom really deteriorates to a certain extent, you can go into exile and enter the Eastern Empire with the relationship of Queen Mother Komnenos. . The disadvantages of marrying Princess Isabella are also obvious. If the author of this book wants to let the protagonist go into the harem, then marrying Princess Isabella is undoubtedly a bad move, because if the protagonist gets all kinds of benefits from the princess through Isabella, and then goes to hang out with others unclearly, this kind of protagonist will be very unpleasant and very "ungrateful" (for lack of a better word) You can also use the thread of the protagonist's marital status to string together some of the questions in the book that the author must answer later. This is determined by the type of the book. At present, it seems that the protagonist is, and it seems that he is planning to follow the summoning harem stream, but the current market situation is that the harem stream has long been unpopular. If it was a few years ago, the harem stream was considered a bonus, but now, the harem protagonist has lost its bonus point, and even has a There is a certain deduction effect, and if there are problems with the portrayal of the harem, then there is no doubt that the harem can even be called a poisonous point 1 Regarding the issue of legal wives in this book, the protagonist of one book is a Western medieval aristocrat, which means that he can only have one legal wife. If you do not choose the political marriage line, but choose to marry the summoned creature, then the question of who to marry will be very serious. Question, because only the children of legal wives can inherit the throne, choosing who to be your legal wife is likely to lead to hostility between summons. Although summons cannot betray the protagonist, it does not mean that they cannot be hostile to each other, and even the factions behind them cannot be hostile to each other (the protagonist must have a legal heir, and there is no future for a monarch without an heir) 2 If the protagonist chooses not to get married, and It is to have a group of lovers, and then choose the children from the lovers' children to legalize as heirs. Then there is another question, which child is legalized. Since it is a Western medieval background, legalizing illegitimate children is not a simple matter. On the contrary, it is very troublesome and difficult. It does not worry about scarcity but inequality. This choice may even cause the protagonist's future political group to split and the relationship between the summoned objects, and it is also very likely to cause evil. 3 If the protagonist does not get married and does not have children, it will be very difficult for the protagonist to rule as a lord. There is no heir, which means that his career has no one to inherit, no one to inherit his allegiance, and no one to whom he is loyal. Then his career is completely tied to the protagonist alone, which cannot allow the indigenous talents of this world to serve 4 Regarding the issue of high-level summons being all female, This issue is actually not a trivial issue, because it affects the perception of many book friends. If the summoned high-level summons are allowed to have feelings for other men, then many book friends will think that the cuckold novel will become a poisonous point (even if the author does not write an emotional scene with the protagonist). In the text, the later summoned characters gradually become more like tools and human beings. If you enter the harem again, the poison will be intensified, which is very detrimental to the growth of readers. If most of the summoned characters are single, some book friends will also scold him as a eunuch protagonist. It is better to increase the proportion of men in high-level summons and appropriately reduce the proportion of women to avoid this situation (no one in male channels should ask the author to engage in philosophy ♂)

Never write about equality, Marxism-Leninism. This is the Middle Ages, this is a world of high energy and high magic. There is no transcendence in reality, and no one is equal. If you insist on equality in Gao Mo, you are out of your mind.

I couldn't help but want to complain before. I've written seven hundred chapters, and the time in the main world has only advanced for half a year. Lord Taneda-ryu novels, regarding the number of various types of soldiers under the protagonist, this was originally a good way for readers to see the protagonist's process of gaining satisfaction from weak to strong, from few to large. As a result, now in addition to knowing the upper limit of recruitment of each type of soldiers, the specific The number of soldiers, their commanders, and whether they are fully recruited are all unclear. During the war, a group of soldiers are mixed together and swarmed in. The outcome of the war depends entirely on the battle between the protagonist and the extraordinary. The ordinary soldiers have become a complete joke. Especially since Egypt has just been conquered, everything is waiting to be done. Alexandria and Cairo are preparing to be the two capitals, and the upper limit of various conscripts has been increased. Originally, switching to other books at this time may be to jump in time and advance the initial stage of conquering Egypt to initial stability. Egypt under the rule of the protagonist is showing signs of prosperity, and all kinds of armies under his command are fully equipped. Let's summarize it well. The power of the protagonist makes people deeply feel the protagonist's growth and satisfaction in various aspects such as reputation, territory, army, power and so on after conquering Egypt. Just like after completing an important main line in the game, the player can feel the equipment obtained, achievements completed, etc. The plot of the novel should enter a small summary stage, which is a normal way of doing things. Starting from the second defeat of Saladin, to the invasion of Egypt and the final capture of Alexandria, this series of plots has been very compact. Now is the time to savor the fruits of victory. As a result, Egypt is still in a mess, and the situation is uncertain. The protagonist went to the dungeon Texas. Is the theme of this volume the final destination of Egypt? You have only written less than ten chapters, and the situation in Egypt is like a pile of shit that was only half-drained. You didn't even wipe your butt before you put on your pants and opened a copy? It's not that you can't open a dungeon. From the first chapter to the present, except for the three chapters when the protagonist fought against the ghost dragon and was dragged into a dream because he couldn't stand it (I didn't read it, but I paid to subscribe), I have never skipped a chapter, whether it is the main text or the dungeon. The problem is that you have to choose the time to open the dungeon, right? When the main world is stable, peaceful and developing steadily, do you have the patience and mood to watch it? How can you still enter the dungeon under your rule? Are you mistaking Coors for Zhuge Liang? Even if Coors is Zhuge Liang, do you have so many officials at his disposal?               ，，，？ You must understand that the basis of your novel is a western medieval lord farming novel. There is nothing wrong with opening a copy to improve your strength, but at least the situation in the main world must allow it, right? Even if you sometimes pause when opening a dungeon in your novel, the readers don't. I've read seven hundred chapters and the protagonist has finally conquered Egypt, and his forces have finally taken off. You've entered the dungeon again. Do I think you're here to fight monsters in your dungeon in this novel? You have begun to blur the logistics supply and economic income of the protagonist's men, the cost of upgrading the level of the retinue, etc., Why? Because you can't get it right anymore. The main world has been advancing for half a year now. Even if you can grab money, you can't calculate the specific amount, military expenses, etc. In detail. Since you know how to blur these, don't you know how to skip time for the main world to advance the progress? Territory development takes time! ! ! Do you really want to write a lord novel bit by bit, day by day, as if you were a daily writer? And, a copy, a copy, what is a copy? Use it to change the atmosphere after the big rhythm of the main plot, or when there is a gap in the middle. It is for the readers and for you to relax and change your mind. It is used to assist the main plot. You can open a dungeon whenever you have a disagreement. Which one is the main plot? If you keep writing like this, will this novel be considered Taneda-style or Bankai-style? I haven't made detailed statistics, but I feel that one-third of your novel is copy content. Do you think this is reasonable? You can skip drawing cards. After a while, if you collect ten consecutive copies and draw them together, you won't skip some secondary copies, right? In the early stage of this book, didn't everyone come here for you to become a lord and make great achievements in the Middle Ages of the main world? You use card drawing and Western fantasy elements to help you gain better advantages and develop in the main world to attract readers. Don't abandon the basics and chase the last, okay? There haven't been many updates to begin with, and the plot has gone further and further away. Look at the current results of your book. It's really you who ruined it bit by bit. It could have become a masterpiece, but you wrote it into something completely different. I really regret that I fell into the trap. Now, you should take care of yourself!

How can someone criticize such a good book? ! It combines Western history and Western fantasy themes, with vivid characters and smooth plot. No need to say more, just book it all! ! ! (Pictures attached, please improve them!)

The data text is not like the data text, the historical text is not like the historical text, the hegemony text... There is currently no hegemony element, and the farming text... Seems to have not seen this element yet, the summoning text, the description of the summoned characters is too light, and the upgrade text has to be a holy mother and does not kill people, even the enemies do not do it themselves, the excuse is that they are afraid that they will become experience slaves... This kind of forced fusion is actually the most hurtful.

Are only women the ones who draw high-level cards? Originally, there was only a cold goddess that could be watched, but you want a rebellious little girl who longs for love and family affection? Before Little Rebel came out, I gave this novel a score of 85 or above. After Little Rebel came out, the score plummeted to 60. It can only be kept on the bookshelf. It is useless, tasteless, and it is a pity to abandon it. The setting is a cold goddess. After being teased by a little rebel and saying a few words about the protagonist, her emotions fluctuate. How many days have she lived with the protagonist? Then after living together for a few months and a year, wouldn't it mean that the baby is already pregnant? There is also a setting about a little rebellion and a desire for love and family affection. Needless to say, this setting has been labeled as a harem as soon as it came out. So my guess is that Golden Finger has two functions, the male is used as a thug, and the female is used as a harem and thug. I'm just putting it on my bookshelf now to see if my guess is right or wrong later.

Handsome knight armor picture

The characters obtained by drawing cards in the early stage are invincible and then variously reduced. There are no gold coins for upgrading, and there is no elite. The magic blocking gold has no effect at all, and the opponent's god legend can be randomly released. Every battle is not close to death several times, and I feel like I have no sense of existence. The enemy's extraordinary tries to cheat, but our extraordinary is no different. It was promised that the extraordinary will have an endless lifespan and does not participate in the mortal struggle. It is a pity for life. Why is it that the protagonist comes and all comes out to fight the protagonist? The protagonist is gone. These mortals can use the so-called magic-blocking gold to allow these extraordinary to continue their hard training? There is also the so-called copy in the middle, which is smelly and long. I can no longer read it. There is also a small copy of hundreds of thousands of words in the middle. No one likes your small copy. It is purely used to improve the word count and waste time. It's better to write more about the main plot of this copy and finish it as soon as possible.

They went to the battlefield with a bunch of fully armed knights and gentlemen. Well done to you, knight of three pieces of cloth. Forget it if you are a female knight in full armor. There are also female knights in Central and Western Europe, and there are also shield maidens in Northern Europe. There are female mercenaries in southern Europe. You do not enfeoff these women. Will his nobles let a group of women lead them? No one will tell you if you release light novels. I'll get scolded if I put it here.

I really don't understand how this combat power is set up! ! According to the book, the basic attributes of ordinary people are only 5 points. In the early stage, the protagonist only has a basic value of about 10 points, so he can be considered very good among knights, and can even get the title of Champion Knight. However, the protagonist's five-star and six-star attendants clearly have no amnesia and have memories from the original setting, which proves that they have all the fighting skills. Then, the weakest of their physical attributes is 3-4 times that of ordinary people, and the strongest is even 10 times! Then they were stopped by a group of (no more than 10) assassins for a while? ! ! Ps: This group of assassins are no match for the protagonist. It is estimated that their attributes are about 7-8 points, and they drank the violent potion to increase their attributes. But the werewolf transformation of the protagonist's five-star servant Werewolf only increases the attributes by 50%. I really don't understand how they were able to stop the protagonist and them for a period of time even if they didn't meet each other immediately, it was only with one or two tricks and a turn. ? Or let's say that the basic value of your 5 attributes is not doubled by 10 points, but only increased by 10%. And your attendant only has memory, but no fighting skills. (For example, Linghu Chong, although he can no longer use his inner strength, he can still kill top-notch masters in Swordsman just like mowing grass with just the skills of Dugu Nine Swords.) Otherwise, I really can't figure it out. You are the gatekeeper of hell, and the vampire princess is just a gay! ! It just sounds classy

In fact, I didn't really want to read it anymore after reading Chapter 35. I felt so uncomfortable that I couldn't stop vomiting, so I had to order it all in order to speak. Fortunately, monthly votes for other books also require consumption, so just buy a monthly vote. How dare you, a virgin bitch, take on a sabotage mission behind enemy lines, or a pagan behind enemy lines? Any poor person who finds you will report it to the rulers. All pagans are your natural enemies. They are armed not with swords and guns, but with religious ideas. And I didn't see that you have space equipment. As a sabotage team behind enemy lines, you don't use fighting to rob the enemy's civilian supplies. Are you a virgin bitch planning to buy food and drink for the civilians? It's not that Our Lady is not good at all. It's obviously the wrong subject. In a book about politics and religious wars, if you write that the protagonist is Our Lady, there will only be one outcome. It's not just a tragedy, it's a tragedy, and it will kill all the partners. The pig teammates describe it as the protagonist.

What is this plot about recently? The fight against a dark wizard was foreshadowed in Chapter 78, but the last shot killed him? Forget it, there is no benefit from beating him for a long time, and he also exposed the details of the characters he summoned. The little witch is also forced to die, so the brother of the harbor lord has found a wizard and is ready to attack the protagonist, and because the author wrote such a plot, it was postponed forcibly. I really believe it. You write two parties at the same time. It was anticlimactic, speechless 😅

The beginning is quite good, and the writing conveys the feeling of a novice starting out. After fighting the war and being knighted, the author stopped writing at all. These dozens of chapters are written in a mess, and the level is really poor. Doesn't he know how to farm? Can't the main line be pushed slowly? Don't you know how to write everyday texts? 🙂It's a pity that you really don't know how to do it all.

Author, I think of you coming back to see you. It has been a few years and I thought you were gone.

I don't think there's anything wrong with female characters, but it's hard to imagine a heavily armored knight charging into the battlefield with a girl wearing modern clothes and showing off a lot of skin. It's a bit weird to even imagine it. . .

I'm finally ready to finish this book. This book has me going up and down, down, down, down to the bottom.

I summoned a 6-star one at the beginning to set the tone high, but in the end I didn't want to write a cool article, so I upgraded too quickly and forced myself to lower the level, which made it a bit difficult to get off the ground. 🙂

I'm convinced. The protagonist fights monsters and dungeons again and again. It gives me the feeling of chaos. He is desperately looking for reasons to suppress the protagonist's combat power. That bloodline needs to be suppressed with mental power. I can't complain anymore.

After reading Chapter 6, I finally remembered why I deleted the book in the first place. Is it wrong for you to write a war fantasy in a romantic and youthful way?

Gan, why does this novel have the label of farming? Cheated

I can't catch you any more. Go eat ashes on my bookshelf.

Will there be a dragon knight behind? This book is so good. Please update it.

Name: Eliza Race: Human/Devil Talent: Charm Stunt: Doomsday Judgment Rules: Law of Love Treasure: Mirror of Desire Can form a black hole to absorb all creatures and seal them Skills: Darkness and Desire Magic Summon a lower demon Gender: Female Human form: A beautiful girl with blond hair wearing a white princess dress Original body: A demon with a double horn on its head and bat wings on its back, a giant demon with lust runes engraved on its chest and a dragon tail surrounded by purple mist flames Introduction: The evil thoughts condensed from all the desires in the world awaken in the body of the girl and follow the man. The protagonist worked as a mastermind behind the scenes and was finally defeated by the male protagonist to become his wife and subordinate {"NickName":"Crazy Stone Monster","UserId":213405033}

The summary is that the risk is too high, it cannot be grasped, and then the combat power is suppressed.

The writing is really good. It's been a long time since I've seen a book of this type with a female character that wasn't embarrassing!

It's not without reason that I have poor grades. I always write some unnecessary story worlds. I write dozens of chapters at a time. You can skip reading these. Still suppressing combat power.

It's too awkward. The card draw in the title of the book has too little presence.

Chapter 6 will persuade you to quit, so don't write that kind of plot next time. This is not just me saying this, there are many comments out there.

To be honest, although it is not a purely entertaining article, the hook is too big and too dramatic. It directly builds a castle without any insured stone, wood, and decorative materials. It is directly fabricated out of thin air, and the soldiers are converted to directly give them a false sense of combat and equipment. However, it is too dramatic. If it is changed to this, insurance and some special Drawings of special buildings, and then dispatch craftsmen to build them bit by bit according to the drawings. Among them, the protagonist can observe the lowest construction and use standards displayed with a progress bar, and can be beautified later. For soldiers, the soldiers who undergo transformation will have additional talent bonuses, and with acquired efforts, they will eventually become a certain type of soldier. Like cavalry and slashing, they are divided into equal levels and can be improved bit by bit.