Immortal and Never Ending

This book is simply a copycat version of a mortal, and the author's writing style is a bit poor.

I fell in love with a girl (senior sister) when I was 10 years old. How horny is the author? Elder sister falls in love with a 10-year-old boy?! This book was quite detailed before I came into contact with cultivating immortals, but the rest of it is just nonsense.

I'm imitating a mortal. I don't ask you to learn the essence. At least it makes sense. You're just 12 years old, and you're doing this and that. Han Li, a mortal, only felt the malice of his master after he practiced Qi for the fourth level at the age of 14. He fought back at the age of 16, and only started to walk around the world at the age of 18. At the age of 12, you are already better than Mr. Mo.

The author's trumpet account. Although he is not a time traveler, he has laid the foundation for the character image of Pig's Foot through so many chapters. It makes people feel alive. The supporting characters also have their own personalities. It is not unreasonable. It is much better than many people who write about time travelers. Cheers for the good writing.

Brother. Your layout is too long. Hmm... That's right, typing the Enter key too many times between paragraphs will give people a headache.

The writing is good and the logic is very rigorous. However, there is not much innovation in the plot. It looks like a copy of the legend of a mortal cultivating immortality. However, overall it is still well written. Come on, author, I hope to see the completion of this book.

Author, what about the chapters after chapter 145? Why did it jump directly to 150?

At the seventh level of Qi refining, you can eat the foundation building. Can you break through the foundation building after eating it?

Why is there no cover? It's hard to see.

The story is good, but the details are poor.

The paragraph is too long and difficult to read or the reading experience is not ideal.

The author actually writes well, but the protagonist is too young in the early stage, and the writing and plot are actually quite reasonable.

The writing is okay, and the logic of the first 58 chapters is quite thorough. The routines are borrowed from others, but also have their own things. Come on

Personally, I think this is a copycat version of a mortal's journey to immortality that is actually better than a mortal's. The writing, details, and logic are all good, but after all, it cannot be considered truly original. I hope that after writing for a while, the author will slowly form his own unique story, or simply follow the path of a mortal to make up for its unsatisfactory features...

When will it be updated? ? ? It's been half a year since I stopped updating. What the hell is this? ? ? ? ? ?