Mortals Start by Seizing the Soul of Shequ

I think the writing is okay, but I don't really agree with some of the protagonist's actions. I feel that the protagonist has no personal charm and behaves like a two-faced villain. Even if it was a helpless move in order to fit in with the character design, later after he was freed, he went to his brother's cave to steal people and property for no reason. The devil is more evil than the devil. He has no bottom line and is stupid and expects the shrewd and cautious Han Li not to find out. If he doesn't follow the original plot and change the path, he will still become Han Tianzun, understand? I stopped reading it. I felt that this book was on the opposite path to the original protagonist. I initially thought it was about brothers helping each other. After all, the path to immortality is cruel and lonely, and true love is the most precious. Han Li understands it very well, but it's a pity that the author doesn't!

Xie Ruiyang arrived at Wanmiao Temple and helped Master Kang Ting decompose the magic weapon. He used his own unique method to better decompose the magic weapon. Wanmiao Temple praised Lao Xie's views on weapon training, and even introduced Wanmiao Temple to a sexy Taoist nun named Qingling Fairy, who was at the peak of elixir formation. Fairy Qingling was a disciple of Yuanying who had practiced Taoism with Shuimu Linggen for less than three hundred years. She was only one step away from being able to conceive a baby, and she was living in a strange Tao body, and she was also a Taoist genius. Fairy Qing Ling wanted to practice a magic weapon with a strange idea that could cooperate with her Tao body practice, but it was never completed. After learning about Lao Xie, she asked Lao Xie to design it. In the following decades, Lao Xie and Qing Ling interacted with each other, fell in love with each other, and became a Taoist couple. In the original work, the Yuanwu Kingdom was occupied by the Demonic Flame Sect. This time, under the coordination of the protagonist, the three sects merged into one sect. The three sects now have five Nascent Soul members, two Divine Weapon Sects, and one Yuanying Sect is at its peak in the middle stage. There are many powerful magic weapons, and one person can fight two or three in the same realm without defeat. However, the lifespan is less than a hundred years, at the beginning of the First Yuan Dynasty. At the beginning of the Wanmiao Liang Yuan Dynasty, in Tianxing Yiyuan, one or two Nascent Soul cultivators were invited from the righteous path to withstand the attack of the demonic path. The three sects established a teleportation array under the organization of the Tianxing Sect, which could support each other very well. However, Yuanwu's demonic path was merged by the Demonic Flame Sect. This time, in the next few decades, Qing Ling and the head of the Shen Wen Sect had babies one after another and had amazing fighting power. They fought with the Demon Flame Sect Yuan Ying three times and lost two. Jiao knew that the Spiritual Beast Mountain rebelled on the front line of the Yue Kingdom, and prepared in advance. The head of the Shenbing Sect did not sacrifice when he rescued the disciples who came down from the front line, and preserved the strength of the Shenbing Sect intact, strengthened the alliance of the three sects, and contributed to the effective resistance to the evil way), The pig's trotters did not follow Han Li to chaos in the sea of stars. (Everyone in the fanfic went to seize Han Li's opportunity in advance. They were good people who got close to Han Li and guided the plot that was bound to happen. If Han Li has it, pig's trotters should also be there. They are all licking dogs. They go to Han Li's dungeon and Han Li's opportunities will not destroy you every time. It is a miracle. It seems that without Han Li's opportunities, there is no progress. Other mortals are How did it become a baby? When Han Li Yuan Ying, Xiang Yan Ruyan and Wang Chan were in the late stage, so they were a step behind. Pig's Foot must run to participate in the war between good and evil. If he doesn't run, Pig's Foot will definitely die? Pig's Foot can't survive the war and grow up quickly. Pig's Foot wants to live forever, but there is no immortality. There are still wonderful lives and people who walk the same path, so he and Han Li can't be the only ones in the end), After the establishment of the three sects, Zhujie formed elixirs in his sixties and became the second head of the three sects. The first one was the head of the magic weapon, but he abdicated after having a baby. The heads have different approaches. Some people are extremely busy and delay their practice. Some people not only manage the affairs in an orderly manner. , He also made rapid progress in cultivation, and was the head of the Elephant God Weapon Sect. Xie Ruiyang not only had better opportunities than the old head, but was also a greedier person. He quickly collected resources in the head position. When Han Li returned to Tiannan, he had quickly cultivated Nascent Soul in Tiannan. After the establishment of the three sects, Pig's Feet dug deep into the details of the three sects. The Divine Weapon Sect had a damaged Purple Sun Furnace, an ancient spiritual treasure, which was an ancient treasure for practicing demons. The Tianxing Sect was a legacy left by the masters of the ancient Chaotic Star Sea Formation. The long-distance inheritance array of the Yue Kingdom was built by the masters at that time. There were also several coordinates and grand inheritance gold medals in the Chaotic Star Sea, but there was no inheritance array in Tiannan. The Wanmiao Temple was built by the disciples who were recruited in Tiannan during the late Yuan Ying period of the Tianfu Sect of the Great Jin Dynasty, and the Yuan Ying later period was the one who died in the Bloody Forbidden Land. But today, the inheritance of the Wanmiao Temple is no worse than that of the Tianfu Sect. Fairy Qingling and Nangong Wan got to know each other and used the Tianfu secret method to sense the secret key that Nangong Wan got

Thanks to Ruiyang and Fairy Qingling's magic weapon, the magic weapon practiced by Fairy Qingling is called the Wuxiang Wanmiao Mirror. A special piece of talisman paper on the Wanmiao Mirror surface can be used to draw talisman on the long surface, which can assist in learning to draw talisman. You must know that advanced talisman treasures are not only learned from Nanxing, but also have precious materials that are hard to find. However, Fairy Qingling was lucky enough to collect a piece of formless smoke. The phaseless smoke cloud has ten thousand properties, can simulate the functions of thousands of materials, and can be transformed into any material. Of course, it can also absorb all things and absorb the attributes of all things. It is a good substitute material for practicing weapons and is also a top material for practicing the illusion. However, Fairy Qingling is not a cultivator who practices the illusion. She wants to turn this smoke cloud into a repeatable Using the treasure, I came up with the idea of making a mirror. The mirror has the ability to reflect. The mirror made of smoke and cloud as the main material has changes in reality and reality, and can simulate all things. As long as the talisman is successfully drawn on the mirror surface, Wanmiao Mirror can memorize this talisman. When fighting with others, it can quickly inject mana, which greatly improves the ability to draw talismans in the void. In addition, Wan Miao Mirror can be used as a natal magic weapon, which can continue to grow and reduce the loss of back and forth transformation.

This book is written quite well by the author, which is a pity... There are too few good works written by mortals. Nowadays, the system is rampant and the golden finger is too strong. It is impossible to write about mortals, and the requirements for writing power are a bit high... In fact, I also think it is good, very mortal... The angle of cutting is also very good... It is not slanderous or slanderous! Completely different stories from different perspectives in the same scene as Han Li... It's a true way of writing fan fiction! This is how a fan should write... Some suggestions for the author: Although Mortal Han Li only has one female protagonist, she has a lot of emotional entanglements... This is not for the emotional drama, it is the embellishment of the story... Just like a good movie with male and female protagonists that don't have many emotional dramas can't be without beauties... There are no mortal male supporting characters, and even this is completely abandoned and it becomes a boring training, leveling up and fighting monsters... I also didn't feel that the writing was bad but I didn't want to watch it... Boring! In addition, because some parts are not rigorous enough... It is inevitable to be trolled by trolls! The stick suggested that the author should write like a movie in the future. Each story must have a main female character... No matter whether there is a result in the end... Whether it is a happy ending or a regret... But it will not work if it is missing...

Let me do it

Nice writing, don't write it next time😂

Momojiji is already at chapter 18, and he hasn't started practicing yet. I don't know, I thought you were writing One Punch Man? Now that you are in the world of immortality, why are you still doing those low-level kung fu and martial arts?

Well written. There are a lot of bad comments in the comments. The protagonist, Goldfinger, is in the Taixu Realm. He can quickly master the techniques and spells, and can deduce and fuse them, but it takes a long time. I feel that this point has not been fully utilized, and there are too few spells deduced, which is missing an advantage. First, Han Li and Tainan Xiaohui separated, and the protagonist went to the Divine Weapon Sect. Not counting the nanny, but the nanny is because the protagonist gave the Ascension Token Talisman Storage Bag to Han Li. But I think doing this makes the protagonist's IQ appear online. First, the protagonist has no magic power. It is of no use if he wants it at that time. Han Li will still be remembered if he deceives him. It's better to buy Han Li a favor and give him timely help and get more later. Second, the protagonist is not in a hurry to become an immortal. That's because the protagonist has his own plan, and it's not slow at all. Firstly, because the protagonist doesn't know which spiritual root he has is better, he can't blindly practice it in the early stage. He must change his skills and practice it again later. The second is to use the Seven Ghost Soul Eaters to convert the internal energy and blood into mana, which is equivalent to converting three years of martial arts into three years of cultivating immortals, and becoming the third level of Qi training. This progress is not too slow. I don't understand what's going on in the comment section. It is rare to find novels like this that are written in a normal and logical way, with the main character having an online IQ and a plan, so cherish it. Don't be confused by the cool stories about killing and killing.

Why spend so much time on the Seven Ghost Soul-Eating Technique? To take away the bodies of mortals to become immortals? I wonder what I need urgently?

This protagonist is Han Li's nanny. If she has any good things, she will give them directly to Han Li. She also says that she will wait for Han Li to repay her in the future, and the result will be even more. Even after receiving the immortal cultivation technique, he said that he was afraid of affecting his relationship with Han Li. You can't stop being immortal, but you still write shitty novels about cultivating immortals.

Why is this protagonist's character so trashy? The protagonist is not Han Li. As a true disciple of the divine soldiers, the sect did not treat the protagonist badly, but what did the protagonist do? You accept apprentices from outside without bringing them back to the sect, and then you back up and establish an organization similar to a sect, using the apprentices as tools. Is this what you do as a human being? Thinking about kneeling down and licking Han Li all day long, and using the sect's elixir recipe and inheritance to trade with Han Li, doesn't the protagonist feel ashamed? And he also went to Han Li's cave to steal things. It's really a shitty movie. I won't watch it anymore. The main character is so disgusting.

​​Looking at the mortals, none of them develop in the same sect. For the sake of their own sect, they are all young men, taking advantage and running away. If you have nothing to do, you have to make others grateful. In order to cultivate immortality, you can cheat and cheat, but there is no fluctuation at all when they go fishing and killing people one by one. They also say that it is because of the world of cultivating immortals. I am this kind of person. Such people should die directly. What about your nine years of compulsory education before time travel! What a beautiful character you have!        ，，，，，，！ If you don't pass it on to the Divine Weapon Sect, are you deceiving your master and destroying your ancestors, or are you violating the oath you made when you started?

Hahahaha, you don't dare to take the small bottle and turn around to steal the spiritual grass from Han Li's cave. Unless you plan to write the protagonist to death, otherwise Han Li will become the ancestor of time. When time goes back...

After watching it for so long, mortals still don't understand that there is no such thing as a loving teacher and a filial piety in this world. If you have to test human nature, Old Demon Han has a purpose in recruiting disciples. You think you are more filial than your master's son, but you still give him away here and there.

Originally, when I saw Zhang Tie's opening, the protagonist had plans and layouts, what did he write in the end? What is the difference between the relationship with Han Li and that of a stranger? Instead of hiding the elixir, and steal it in a vulgar way? ? What about the protagonist's wisdom shown at the beginning? And after reading so much on QQ Reading, I don't even know where the author's main line is! The protagonist doesn't even know which skill he is majoring in right now! When I see the elixir formation, I don't even know which method is used to form the elixir! I originally went to Dajin to find the Blood Spirit White Bone Dao inheritance to refine my body! As a result, I got some Buddhist inheritance along the way and turned around and went to Jinguang Temple? ? This can also be explained by the need to suppress the bone beads! After solving the problem, he turned around and went overseas to form pills! The matter of refining the body is not mentioned at all! I don't even know which technique is used to form the elixir! Such a big plug-in spends all day researching miscellaneous things! There is no research on the technique at all! Is the plug-in disconnected?

I can't stand it after reading the first few chapters. The Fu Bao Immortal Order was given to Han Li. He also said that he should not practice for fear of affecting his relationship with Han Li. How long will it be before the Immortal Assembly after killing Jin Guang? If you don't have the Immortal Ascension Order, you don't have a cultivation competition, and you have three spiritual roots, you just do some casual cultivation. Then when you practice the tenth level of Qi, the Blood Trial is probably over, and Han Li has already established the foundation. Then it's even harder to get the Foundation Establishment Pill. You don't have to continue to lick Han Li, but what's the use? Han Li can give once or twice, but can he continue to give? The most popular fanfic

There's a reason why this book isn't popular. It's so verbose.

I didn't understand the part about dividing storage bags. Why did the protagonist kill Jin Guang independently and give the loot to Han Li? It's called Han Li's favor. However, the article didn't mention what the protagonist wanted to do with Han Li. There was no chance of ascending to the human world. Many, roughly divided into two types, the little green bottle, and the little green bottle. Han Li is enough if he has the little green bottle. So shouldn't the protagonist's main purpose be to seize other opportunities besides the little green bottle, rely on his golden fingers to create techniques, and become stronger as soon as possible? Don't understand

When writing about time travel or reincarnation, one of the most taboo things is the name issue. If you are an orphan that no one knows and you are not a character in the plot, you can use your original name. Your old acquaintance Zhang Tie at the beginning of the chapter is also called Xie Duanyang. It really makes readers unable to integrate into the book. We all read books by assuming roles. Your name issue is nondescript.

I just read the first two articles and I think the writing is good, but can we not change the name of the protagonist and just use Zhang Tie?

The author, Han Li, wrote a three-pointer that was fascinating. But is it necessary for the protagonist to lick Han Li like that? Since there is no benefit to be gained from Han Li, why bother him? It would be better to just take the Great Teleport and let him run away. Han Li is always on guard against the protagonist. There is no need for the protagonist to lick his face and send him up.

After reading about 10 chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. Now I'm Zhang Tie, and now I'm Xie Xie! Divide the spoils. If you don't want the Immortal Order and the Talisman Treasure, just take a sword weapon (didn't the following article say Sword Tongtian and Xuantian Lingbao! 🤐) and some kind of family tree! The genealogy may also contain great treasures😊! Mortals are cultivating immortals, so everything depends on fighting. Everything is divided. Ask the old devil to take out the bottle and divide it! I had no desire to read it, and there were many typos in many places. I lost it and deleted it!

I really don't understand why there are always people who practice those kinds of exercises that are difficult to practice and require a lot of resources but have mediocre combat power. Isn't it possible to advance quickly by practicing an ordinary technique?

To be honest, when I subscribed to Chapter 1345, after Pig's Feet trapped the Hehuan Sect and his party with the Inverted Five Elements Formation and let him go so easily, I always regretted it. I regretted that I shouldn't have subscribed! I can accept the slow progression of pig's feet and pig's feet, but I cannot accept this sadistic plot. You can intercept and kill the young sect leader of the Ghost Spirit Sect, but why should you let go of the Hehuan Sect's group of people who used the Inverted Five Elements Formation to trap him? ! That is only one-tenth of the effectiveness of the Five Elements Formation, and even the pill-forming monks have to spend a lot of energy to escape from it! Now that the pig's foot has recovered its magic power, the power of the formation is five or six tenths of that of the complete formation, but just a dozen foundation-building monks ended it so casually. How funny! All I can say is that I regret subscribing. Goodbye!

This book is really well written, why are there so many trolls?

You have to feel comfortable with the novel first. If you feel uncomfortable writing it, wouldn't it be disgusting if you wrote it? The first 20 chapters I read, Goldfinger is useless! What is the most important thing in cultivating immortality? The most important thing is resources, brother! I just saw that you recorded the skills above, ah, yes, the skills are also important. I am not saying that the skills are not important, but I thought that you were preparing for this golden finger in the previous 20 pictures, thinking that you could directly integrate them all to deduce a very powerful and powerful skill, which would be invincible at the same level. I saw 20 farts but none. I want to ask what are you writing? You wrote it yourself, don't you feel aggrieved? Isn't what you wrote boring? Besides following the original plot of Mortal, and besides licking Han Li, what else is there? Just like the dog next to Han Li, it is not as good as Zhang Tie in the original drama.

Zhang Tie is a mortal from beginning to end. He is just a mortal with spiritual roots. Well, one of the three laws of seizing one's body is that cultivators cannot seize one's body, but mortals can do it.

I read a little bit of this book 2 years ago, but then deleted it for some unknown reason. Now that I'm rereading it, I've forgotten all about it.

A lot of people criticized it at the beginning, but I thought it was well written. When the plot of the original work was later entered, it became more and more separated from the original style of Mortal. Later, the protagonist's environment had nothing to do with Mortal, and he just borrowed a name. It's better to go to the female channel and open an original book.

When will the physical body be retrained to regain its appearance?