I Will Live Forever in the Fairy World

It's interesting. The previous chapters were so-so and even a bit awkward. But when it came time to paint the portrait of the Queen Mother, I finally found the bright spot. I would call the protagonist a top-notch slut.

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The writing reveals a sense of sadness. Originally, immortality was the golden finger of a pig's trotter, but now it has become a shackle. In the past, when it came to mortal cultivators, even if the pig's trotters were wretchedly developed, they would still act unceremoniously for the sake of profit. They would do whatever it takes, but there is a bottom line. They would compete with others and with heaven. The momentum of the book is endless fun, but this book is the opposite. The heart of a pig's feet is like a thousand-year-old dead tree. It looks lush and lush on the outside, but in fact it is rotten inside. In the end, I am afraid that it will be like the way of heaven, ruthless, no desire, no sorrow and no joy. Then what is the meaning of such a life!

I just want to say that if any of you here can time travel, 99% of the people here can do it better than the protagonist! ! ! The remaining 1% is left to fools as fault tolerance. Rebuttals welcome!

You can be patient, but you have to take action when it's time to take action, otherwise you will really become a bastard

The protagonist is real🐶, and she is a real lsp. There are women who can do that kind of thing no matter how old they are. And it's more loyal.

Cultivation has turned you into a tortoise🐢, not participating in anything, being heartless, having no friends and relatives, and no passion for entrepreneurship. This kind of life is just a life that is really rough, but tasteless. For people with normal psychology, the longer they live, the more it is a kind of torture The reason why immortality is admired is originally because people's simple hope is to retain their glory and wealth forever, as well as all the crazy and beautiful things in this world. The purpose of immortality is actually a desire for possession of beauty and a desire for pleasure, which has been pursued in ancient and modern times. Those who live forever are like this. Those who really have no desire for immortality are the poor people They are in a low position, always bullied by others, and cannot enjoy the beauty of life. Therefore, the longer they live, the more painful they will be. The protagonist of this article is not for hope. People who enjoy life just for the sake of immortality are putting the cart before the horse. Such people can only be psychopathic and want to live like a heartless stone. In the world of immortality, stones are busy becoming spirits and want to have seven emotions and six desires. The protagonist is busy turning into stones to eliminate seven emotions and six desires.

I read more than twenty chapters and couldn't stand it anymore. First of all, the background is alluding to the late Qing Dynasty and the early Ming Dynasty. This period of history is difficult to write, and few readers have a strong sense of immersion. Furthermore, the setting of immortality is added, and it is difficult to figure out later. Should it go directly to the world of immortality, or should the protagonist go into seclusion for decades and go directly to modern times? Secondly, if you don't have anything of your own, the story about Counseling is generally a good one. Unlike other protagonists who go all the way, the protagonist of Counseling can gain some benefits through "Counseling", avoid some accidents that should have happened or make up for some regrets in the fan fiction. At the same time, it also narrates some things from another novel perspective, rather than writing the protagonist as a bystander of history.

This is actually a change in the ideology of netizens. They used to be obsessed with death, but now they are all lying down. The destruction of the world has nothing to do with me.

This book is not fun to read at all. The protagonist pursues a strict path, but he is also involved with the people around him. He is not thorough and does not live in the world. He just sits there and watches the world become chaotic and cannibalistic demons run rampant, but he still remains unmoved. To be honest, it's not fun at all (to put it bluntly, the protagonist is an extremely egoistic bastard)

It is better to make brilliant fireworks than to live in mud and mud. Longevity is just capital, but is it really that important? On the road to immortality, we are just trying to survive. How is that different from living corpses? Mortals still know how to fight for life. The strong have their own strong mentality. In my opinion, the protagonist in your novel is a piece of mud. Even if he is invincible with force, he still cannot change his inferiority complex.

Personally, I feel that it is a mistake to start writing by reflecting the history of the late Qing Dynasty. The first protagonist is an immortal person. If he writes from the late Qing Dynasty, the next one will inevitably be the Republic of China (although history may change). Does he dare to write the next one? The Immortality Next Door has been overturned in modern times. If you want to write it, you should start writing it from the beginning of the week and take your time. There are so many famous people in history that you can interact with. The second thing is that they all write about parallel worlds in the late Qing Dynasty. I don't believe that technology has not developed yet! It's all very revolutionary! That is not a rebellion, it shows that those who were imprisoned at the time of the protagonist have the awareness of the rise of the people. Writing this way will make martial arts and immortal cultivation a joke. . It would be better if the dynasties could go back thousands of years, and we can write slowly, but we must write about the history of the late Qing Dynasty and the early Republic of China. It looks pretty awkward to me anyway. .

After reading four chapters, it is completely about immortality elements plus a bunch of old story settings. Even the plot background is the same old tune in the late Qing Dynasty. The characters are all copied, which is not interesting! I would say poisonous, not to the point. But if it has any readable value, it should be said that the creation without the author is useless!

What does this mean? It keeps repeating familiar stories, except for changing the name, it has nothing of its own.

This book is famous: I am immortal in the world of cultivating immortals, but I love doing good deeds and seeking death.

It's not that there was no explanation at all, but a lot of them popped up. Are there any? As I looked at it, I didn't know what was going on. As soon as this thing was done, another dragon came out from the other end. I didn't say anything about the previous realm. I watched it for a long time and didn't know what it was about.

After reading Chapter 36, I feel so sick. I thought it was a historical spectator or someone behind the scenes, but I always felt that something was wrong. Especially when I see some data, although it is a small flaw, it may be because the expectations are too high, and the more I look at it, the more awkward it becomes. A toad worth 80,000 taels, a colleague's son earns several thousand taels from writing novels, and the two empress dowagers suffered disaster after fighting for dozens of miles. . . If you don't know the prices, you can check them. What you wrote is too ridiculous. This kind of combat power is already so awesome even before you have even become an immortal. It seems that you are aiming for the combat power of cultivating an immortal in the Shattered Void. My humble opinion, please don't comment! If the author changes it, please kind-hearted book friends, please kick me, thank you!

It feels like the author has a bunch of personal stuff, and the one who writes the pen is showing off.

It feels like the outline has been copied. The setting is good, but there is too little filling, making the reading dry and jumpy.

There's nothing wrong with the Stitch Monster, there's something wrong with it if you encounter it too much

Dry. . After practicing for decades or thousands of years, what can you do? If you turn it into yellow and hit it with a punch, then practice for decades and turn it into magic power, what can you do? Turn into yellow and hit him with a punch The cultivation realm has not shown any characteristics. How is it different from those queen mothers and ministers if you make a cheat that is ten times or a hundred times?

In this book, you only need to read Chapter 60 or 70, but then the villain appears from the beginning, and both the ruler and the villain suffer losses. The protagonist takes advantage, and it is just the same routine over and over again, which is boring.

A simple summary of this novel is that it is repeated over and over again. First a BOSS (A) appears, and then a BOSS (B) appears. The two BOSSs fight and both sides suffer losses. The protagonist sneak attacks and kills the BOSS (A). Then another BOSS (C) appeared, and then B and C fought the protagonists with a sneak attack to kill B, and then another BOSS (D) appeared. It was like a matryoshka doll.

This is not a matter of being a bastard or not, this is purely a matter of being a spectator, and the plot is very loose. I have read dozens of chapters, and besides making jokes, I don't know what I have read.

Chapter 38: Saving people is really hard to resist

If a person is truly immortal, then theoretically the probability of him doing anything is 100%

The author is too anxious. The protagonist has changed through so many dynasties when he is only a few thousand years old. You are still trying to catch the immortals. You are only a few thousand years old. Those who lived tens of thousands of years ago are fine.

I just read some stories about Zhang Tang, and I feel a little unhappy. Zhang Tang fully reflects the shortcomings of the protagonist's intelligence. Look again

Finished watching it for 60 yuan in 3 days. Read history from beginning to end. You still need to have certain skills to write so many words.

This book is quite good. I personally think it is worth reading. However, the content of the 200 pictures seems a bit repetitive. They are all picked up by the protagonist after the two people suffered a loss. But I think it does not affect the quality of this book.