A Taoist Temple That Can Travel Through Time

From the first chapter to the release, the writing is not very clear. At most, the story inside is attractive.

The author's writing style needs to be improved, and there aren't many fancy techniques. The writing is clearly civilized, but the reading somehow gives off a tranquil feeling. I just saw the latest chapter. I hope the author can work hard. I will order all of them after it is released 🙂

The author should not put Erha, Ginseng, and Monkey together. It is written with the same status as the protagonist. It should be written as pets.

Limited exemption, I found that I can also support the author 🤭

Three Kingdoms, I look forward to the author writing about the Three Kingdoms in the next world.

The Dragon Emperor in The Mummy 3 is really a petty person and deserves some training. That Qin Shihuang and the Qin Shihuang in the deadlock are simply a pair of idiots. Every time I watched The Mummy 3, I was thinking that if the witch woke up the laborers on the Great Wall, the protagonist would also wake up. People who have been enslaved to death by aliens in the past generations, eaten as second-legged sheep by aliens, slaughtered by aliens in past generations, massacred by the Qing Dynasty, and various Qing Dynasties who were framed and massacred by foreign countries, etc., Will also be awakened. Teach the old witch how to behave, and let the Great Wall workers know that although they are dead, their Great Wall has withstood the foreigners for 2000 years and has done a great job. Therefore, if the mission of The Mummy 3 is the best, one is to awaken the workers of the Great Wall and let them know that they have built the Great Wall with their lives, although they have not been able to resist the invasion of aliens every time in 2000. But the Chinese nation has indeed resisted many tragedies by relying on the Great Wall. Their merits are immeasurable and they will bless future generations. Then the protagonist will save them or canonize them as Yin gods and Yin soldiers. Let that stupid Dragon Emperor read Qin Shihuang's handwriting and improve his situation. Revitalize China. There are gods in the world of mummies, so it is normal for China to have underworld and heaven. At most, the heavenly road is blocked. I think there can be a small blessed place under the spring. In fact, it is a space for a certain sect to avoid the end of the law. The protagonist in the later part is the spiritual energy revived, and the heavenly road and the yin road are reopened.

How can I put it, Yi Xiaochuan is really not a good person We don't know who Liu Bang is in history, but the Liu Bang in the TV series is so disgusting, the protagonist becomes sworn sworn sworn brother to him, acts as a dog leg, and gives away his daughter. Later Gao Yao, because Liu Bang They became eunuchs, and he took revenge, shouldn't he? He was good to Yi Xiaochuan because he was his brother-in-law, and he gave Yi Xiaochuan a sister. Then the sister was sent away and died. Yi Xiaochuan also betrayed Zhao Gao behind his back and helped Liu Bang escape Finally, we have to kill Gao Yao. Why? Because his name is Zhao Gao. Isn't that ridiculous?

The world of Shuanglong in the Tang Dynasty is at the critical point of transcendence. Taoism is simply a tragedy. The only great master is still a thug of Buddhism, just like the younger brother of Buddhism. Task 1: Integrate Taoism and integrate Buddhism, which is currently a state of mind to choose the emperor on behalf of heaven. Buddha is the Tao. Let the protagonist serve as an immortal to revive the Sui Dynasty and let the Sui Dynasty dominate the world. It should be the same routine as the Three Kingdoms and the Qin Dynasty. Task 2: Let the protagonist go to welcome back the Sui soldiers in Goryeo. It is time for those Sui soldiers who were placed in Beijing to go home. Let the protagonist take the Yin spirit soldiers home, and open up the underground blessed land of the Celestial Dynasty to establish the Underground Dragon Court of the Sui Dynasty.

You can't follow the rhythm of book friends, because you can't satisfy everyone's taste. Set your own style and stick to it. Following the rhythm of your book friends will only make you completely collapsed.

Can you use your brain a little bit when you write the article? For the talismans you drew, you talk about how the materials are precious and chalcedony, and how difficult it is to refine. They have such magical effects and are still talismans infused with spiritual energy Are you afraid that they will be washed away after a few drops of rain? And this protagonist is so useless that he is a cultivator with an invincible zombie beside him, and his system is almost destroyed by a group of ancients? And that gourd of yours says one moment he can't pretend to be a human being, and the next moment he can pretend to be a human being, what do you think? There is another practitioner who doesn't want to think about how to improve his strength, but he always relies on a zombie to ring the bell every time he fights, and he uses up all his spiritual energy. You have cheats, and you still spend so much money?

I thought it was good at first, but the task of changing Xiang Yu's fate made me feel sick. Xiang Yu was a reckless butcher, and he should be left to fend for himself.

The character of Yi Xiaochuan now seems to me to be a male, a "Qing Chuan woman" who traveled to the Qin Dynasty.

As a general of the Qin Dynasty, he protected the rebels and allowed Liu Bang and Xiang Yu to destroy Qin! He even covets the lord's harem! This is unfaithful! Xiang Yu rescued him and became his friend, but he helped Liu Bang, the man who would kill Xiang Yu in the future; Gao Yao became his friend, but he turned against him, just because Gao Yao was named Zhao Gao and wanted to climb up! This is unjust! He knew clearly that the war would bring destruction to the people and the people would be in dire straits, but he helped the rebels to rise up and destroy the Qin Dynasty. At the end of the Qin Dynasty, countless dead souls will be remembered on his head! The Wuhu chaos in China, and the countless dead souls of the Mongolian, Yuan and Manchu dynasties who entered the Pass must also be counted on his head! This is unkind! My predecessor traveled through time, but I didn't know to leave a message to comfort my parents, which made my parents suffer in vain! This is unfilial! Such an unfaithful, unjust, unkind and unfilial person, how can someone actually help him? If you want to fight with me, then you have to judge others by yourself before fighting. What would you do if you had such a subordinate? If you think such a subordinate is good, come and fight with me again!

This is the most disgusting protagonist, a pure retard and a waste. Of course, for me, writing such a protagonist is equal to the author.

Without even looking at it, I knew that this was a monk novel. There was no female protagonist from the beginning to the end. Taoist priests also have Taoist couples, and facts have proven that few can succeed without a wife. Without a wife, all success is just a castle in the air. There is no family in real life. Even if you have great talents. There is no spiritual haven. Jack Ma's success also benefited from his wife's half a million start-up capital. So don't tell me that women are not important and that women are a stumbling block on the road to success. Every big shot tells us that without a family, it's hard to be successful.

It's better not to write novels like Dou Po. This kind of novel is on the same level as that of the city's strongest soldier and the beautiful CEO. .

Fourteen monthly passes 3 recommended to be refined

The Golden Immortal realm is equal to the Great Emperor Zhe Tian, ​​so I would like to ask the following realms of the Red Dust Immortal, the Immortal King (there are five to six realms among the Immortal Kings), the Quasi-Immortal Emperor, and the Immortal Emperor. How do you classify and compare these realms? At first glance, you can tell that the author is another Zhetian fanatic. When you see the contrast between Zhetian and Zhetian, you are really disappointed. True Immortal is equal to Sage King, followed by Celestial Immortal, Mysterious Immortal, Golden Immortal and so on. I feel that this realm is extremely weak 🪖

Author: I kneel down and beg you, Orz, if you can walk more steadily. Such a beautiful book, I don't wish it was gone so early.

It feels like the protagonist is becoming less and less competent. He has to do everything by himself no matter how big or small it is. He has to ask others to help guard him whenever he goes out. If this continues, he will probably be like Yi Xiaochuan in the later period. Yi Xiaochuan was born in the military and was proficient in military training. What would happen if he had a group of loyal veterans? After living in poverty for thousands of years, he died with nothing, not even anyone to collect his body. The protagonist has no shortage of time and resources, so he takes a group of orphans under ten years old in the Taoist temple and slowly trains them. The good ones will be Taoist boys, and they will draw low-level talismans for the protagonist, practice low-level elixirs, plant and breed a large number of treasures of heaven and earth, such as blood snakes and blood orchids, and train the unqualified ones into Tao soldiers, servants, etc., And take away the protagonists and supporting characters who have good qualifications and good intentions to join the Taoist sect. It's better than now where the protagonist enters a whole world but can only follow one plot route, pretending to be cool and can only watch various coincidences, and may be surrounded by soldiers at any time and has to go out alone to drive Wushuang. It's better to have a future. Of course, this requires the author to have a certain level of writing skills. If you don't have the writing skills or don't have this idea, it's best not to write too much on this path. I just feel that if I continue to write ten plot worlds as the author has written, I will still be pretentious with this routine, so I would like to make some suggestions. If the author has an outline or something like that, I won't say it

Books without female protagonists are all good books

The euro seems to have been launched in 1999 and became the only legal currency of the European Community in 2002.

You should get out the compass first, as well as fresh water, vitamin C, etc. Letting them go to sea like this is not murder.

I just started reading it. I just entered the first copy. There is no image of the original work. The protagonist uses two healing charms to save people. I want to ask if there is any disease in the original work? Still about to die. There is also a reward for the peach wood sword. The protagonist almost failed to surrender when he first appeared, and he also attacked people. If a powerful magic weapon is rewarded in the future, will the protagonist die when he first appears?

I've read more than a hundred chapters, but I feel like I can't understand it. Pig's feet don't improve me through practice 🙂

Please save Zhao Gao, poor man

8 Votes have been cast. Speed ​​update Request to educate Yi Xiaochuan from time to time

It's so slow Hurry up and help Qin Shihuang practice elixir While leaving, give Qin Shihuang a map of the world so that he can develop well Well, we must get rid of the two modern people

Taoist Qi Luck System? Isn't this nonsense? It's better to have the seductress see a gynecologist.

After reading Chapter 61, why do I feel more and more uncomfortable as I read it? It's like a game, it's like fantasy, but it's not like reality! If you don't practice the technique well, you will be much stronger than Lin Fengjiao. If you control a bunch of magic weapons to play Dragon Emperor 3, what is your state? I can't control the gate of time and space, but I need mana to support it, right? Still using spiritual power? After trying it twice, it softened. Maybe the protagonist wants to keep a low profile, but he also likes to get dressed up in holy attire. Maybe he likes to pretend to be 13. He returned to the main real world and showed great power, but he still hides from the world for fear of being discovered by ordinary people? 😰What kind of brain circuit can't you understand? ? ?