The Heavens Begin from Liuyuecheng

As you can see from the above, I am a big fan of Tomato, but I did not count the strongest of the Tomato books as the strongest, so I think it is relatively fair. I divide them this way mainly from several aspects. First, from top to bottom, because the controller and the Chaotic Source King can be born and achieved, it feels that they should be slightly inferior. The Sacrificial Path can be achieved through the ashes of the transcendent, and the Pseudo-Dao Fruit can be achieved through external objects such as Jianmu Fruit, which is also considered slightly inferior. Second, from the perspective of the division of emperors, try to keep the strongest people in each universe at this level (the strongest people in the universe who are swallowed up will be suppressed to the sixth level of the Lord of the Universe in the universe, so I calculate the strongest level in the universe according to the Lord of the Universe). Third, from the perspective of the saint level, this level is basically a transcendent planet, which can cause huge damage to the planet, and even devastating attacks. Fourth, from the perspective of the Immortal First Level, this level can barely enter the starry sky, which is regarded as the second transformation after metamorphosis (some book friends may think that the benchmark of the Universe Level is a bit high, but in fact, the Universe Level can already physically cross the starry sky, and can even fight in an environment with 300 million times the gravity. From this point of view, it is even considered a lower standard).

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Introduction Wearing? How can you practice without Shi Hao's seed covering the sky? The other side of the world is omnipotent, and you will die if you enter it. The other side will destroy the world at every turn and start over again. Even if it happens again later, strictly speaking, that person is no longer you, and it is another person who is exactly the same. Why enter it, laugh to death?

The author can actually travel through the love world covered with fairy tales such as Sansheng Sanshi, and turn it upside down, so that the so-called gods and immortals can see what real immortals and gods are.

It's too early to go to the Devouring Starry Sky World. Devouring Starry Sky has too many resources and they are cheap. With the protagonist's development in Devouring, it is very easy to hoard a batch of materials and then use them to cultivate other methods to quickly take off and improve the realm. In turn, the protagonist continues to search for resources. However, in fact, the protagonist really just takes some resources and returns to the main world and then disappears. It can obviously feel that the protagonist's strength is being suppressed. And after returning to Zhetian, the pretense was much more realistic and awkward than before. It felt like a child who got a new toy and took it out to show off. As soon as he got the book of land, he waited for the enemy to clear the passers-by and showed off that he had turned back time.

I feel that the reason why this book is not popular is not only because the author suddenly changed from a fan to Zhu Tianwen, but more importantly, this book lacks one of the most important features of the author's first two books - green tea! The protagonists in this book are not good at all🍵, it can be said that there is no tea flavor at all. Longinus and Shimizu Soseki have such a strong tea flavor, they are so popular in my heart. My cousins ​​are not as fancy as they are, and they need to be repeated several times🍵. Whether the author's writing style is good or his imagination is good, there is nothing wrong with it 👍 But why is this book not popular? It can be said that it is not popular at the beginning because in reality, fans have left after a year of hard work, but after writing a million words, the author is so depressed that he updates it every two days. In addition, the Naruto book was delayed because the outline was changed. I sincerely suggest that authors should grasp their own strengths, believe in their own tea skills, and make a good outline for the next book and never change it in the middle. Even if you are a platinum author, you must change the outline as long as you change the outline. What a lesson from the past... You can go to perfection, isn't Longinus's book also a lot of late works? You can give it back to Yuan 😏 As long as you can return it to Yuan without changing the outline, except for keyboard warriors and black fans, most readers will only enjoy it and even think that the author is awesome 🤭 The most important thing is to maximize the tea art skills of the protagonist. I believe you can still create the glory of the dark general! In fact, if the protagonist of this book still talks about tea, I even think that the author can become a genre - green tea style. There are more than one or two great authors writing fan fiction, so why not be short of one author! There is also the issue of supporting female characters. The Dark General book was held up until the end, while Konoha introduced the heroine from the beginning. This book is even better, with people buying it in the first copy. The author himself said that he wrote the book out of passion, and readers are not blind and can see it. After being away for a year, I can still come back to write a book. My grades are so bad that I can still keep writing. Even if I update every two days, I still keep reading. The author really loves this industry. To put it simply and directly, it is purely a compliment. How can there be such a stupid online writer now who is willing to generate energy for love? More and more authors will kill them with a wave of a knife whenever they see the situation is not going well, either failing or changing their accounts, and there are even some who completely shut down their writing and quit the website! Since the author is not anxious to make quick money, he should be careful about the issue of supporting actresses. I feel that the authors of the supporting actresses in these books are not very rigorous in writing, as if they were decided on a whim. This is really not good. It's just like playing PK to make money. You have to have suspense, collisions, sparks, scripts, and routines! That way, the big brother on the list will swipe Motoko to list his favorite characters. You can't imitate Zhang Mazi and play dumb. You have to imitate Master, pretending to be confused while pretending to understand 😏 With the author's writing style, he is not afraid of being a master of pretending to be confused. Don't worry about those trolls, trolls are all free-spirited trainees, and they don't pay for anything. Why do you listen to them 😡 Many people are scolding people because they are very popular. Are you afraid of being scolded if you are very popular? No matter if you write about a harem, no heroine, or only one heroine, people will criticize you, so why not push this contradiction back. There is an author who writes a Conan fanfic. He only introduces the female protagonist after more than a thousand chapters. Will it affect his money making? After the heroine came out, the readers scolded her like crazy. It didn't hinder the author from making money at all. After all, the first thousand chapters were written really well! Looking at the author's fan list, a rough calculation shows that the manuscript fee is tens of millions 😠 Writing a novel is like raising a fish. You can't just feed the chaff. You have to do it step by step, attract readers, breed readers, screen readers, and finally bind readers to make money! The author is not Qian Qian, Qian Qian is crazy and doesn't like it, let alone the book written by the author. Come on, rush to become a phenomenal state, let's get excited! ! !

The author went too far. With the protagonist's conditions (talent + golden finger), such a long time and accumulation, the protagonist has at least become an Immortal Emperor now, right? Didn't realize it or what? The main character was suppressed too hard, and it was unnecessary for the storyline.

I finished reading this free version, and the author is so depressed that the protagonist is so depressed 🙄

The setting of the Three Emperors in Fairy Sword and Ancient Sword is very different. Only Fuxi is alive among the Three Emperors in Fairy Sword, and Fuxi is also said to be the mastermind of many tragedies. Nuwa Shennong died, and the demons are descendants of Shennong, which is not very evil; In Ancient Sword, the three emperors are all alive, and their relationship is not bad: Shennong and Fuxi are coming to Zhaoming Sword. Fuxi is purely orderly and neutral, not a mastermind behind the scenes. As far as I have a good impression of him, he is indeed very responsible for mortals. Nuwa felt a bit stupid for sheltering a bunch of Longyuan people, but they were still hostile to her. One of the demons in Ancient Sword and the other are all evil, very pure bad guys There are many conflicts between Ancient Sword and Immortal Sword. I don't know how you plan to merge them. To be fair, I don't want to see the stigmatized Fuxi. After all, the prototype is the ancestor of humanities.

It's really average. I just read the first few chapters of Yi Ren and Zhe Tian. Yi Yi Ren doesn't talk about it yet. He got in there out of nowhere and didn't know what he was doing and then swallowed up his origins. Zhe Tian only read a few chapters and felt that the author had not read the original work. One moment he was worried about the creation of magic tribulation, and the next there was some conspiracy theory about ruthless people... There was nothing to worry about if the creation of magic tribulation could not be supreme. The ruthless person was in poor condition during this period, except when Jiulong was pulling the coffin, he was probably half asleep and half awake. How could he have time to stare at Ye Fan every day? And help him plan in various ways? The original work directly stated that the empress had almost never taken any action except for Aidouka, and she was still a crazy woman?

I think the author should change the name. If you change it, your results will definitely double. Change it to "Starting from covering the sky, harvesting the powder that covers the sky." After harvesting, change it to "starting from Devouring, starting from the Wild Desolate Era, then starting from Wuji Tianxia, ​​starting from Immortality, change it in turn, and I am guaranteed to get thousands of orders."

The protagonist of this kind of novel cannot be so depressed that he has to give up everything and take a big gamble. You know, the main point of this kind of astronomical novel is that the protagonist is always invincible. Why can't you understand this?

The Celestial Immortal in The Supreme Being is said to be a star in the original text. How could he be equivalent to the Great Emperor who covers the sky? Ordinary immortals are equivalent to great saints. Even if there are nine hundred and ninety-nine other immortals, they will be as high as the emperor. The span from the immortal to the legendary is huge. It is not comparable to the gap between the great emperor and the true immortal. A great emperor who has lived for six lives can be comparable to a true immortal. The comparison is also the gap between the great emperor and the immortal king. Moreover, the original text said that the immortal is considered a star level. The legendary one and I are at the galaxy level. It can be said that the difference between the immortal and the legend is two levels. Star Transformation There are only three minor levels such as the Golden Pill, Yuanying, etc., While the Celestial Immortal Golden Immortal has nine minor levels. One level in the immortal world can be equivalent to three levels in the mortal world. Why should gods and gods be merged together!

The author suppresses the protagonist a little too much.

It's so unbelievable. Two garbage worlds that are at most saint level can be transformed into fairy king level. 1+1=Infinity?

No one said your book was well written. Please read another book!

The power system is a mess! I really can't stand it! The author's Naruto is pretty good! Why this? ! ! Alas!

What have you written recently? If you want the World Crystal to practice the "Thousand Heart Divine Code", go to the Eternal Realm and buy it. If you want to get the Supreme Divine Crystal, you have to either wait for the Chaos Era and open up the world again and get it directly, or you can just destroy the world. This kind of pretense and erecting an arch is just because you are afraid of being liquidated by Ji Ning, right? It's okay to move all the people out and make it clear that you want to take it. The author said that the protagonist has the power of a Dao Lord. It's not easy to buy a few chaotic worlds. Give them a few more worlds and let them create them. The three worlds will be destroyed directly.

I've written so much recently, are you just trying to be awesome? ? Isn't this the right rhythm? The rhythm is far different from the two books of One Piece and Naruto. . In the last two books, you practice first, then fight, and then the audience brags In this book, you brag and brag with all your strength? It's so embarrassing that it will explode🤐🤐🤐🤐

I don't like conspiracy theories. Why do I have to think that the Three Emperors are in conflict? Moreover, the worldviews of the Immortal Sword and the Ancient Sword are not consistent. How can they be combined together? For example, the settings of Chi You in Immortal Sword and Ancient Sword are different, and the settings of the demons are also different. Why must Fuxi be bad? In my mind, Pangu created the world, and the Three Emperors established the world. Pangu just opened up the world. The universe, but what really stabilizes the universe is the Three Emperors. The Three Emperors are similar to the Three Pure Ones, symbolizing the three elements of the universe. Fuxi symbolizes the ubiquitous rules of heaven. Nuwa is the world itself that carries the rules, and Emperor Yan is the spirit that promotes the development of the world. Therefore, Nuwa is in hiding, Emperor Yan is missing, and only Fuxi maintains the order of the universe.

Zhe Tian's writing is speechless. He is still showing off at a low level. What's the point? The improvement in cultivation speed is not as good as that of a mortal body. This is called bloodline and his understanding is against the heavens.

I really like the author's previous anime fanfics, but this one seems a bit awkward, so the author continues to write anime.

It's over, it's July, and the author has decided to close the book again and quietly look for a job.

How should I put it, it's a bit white and fresh and refined. I have just read more than 50 chapters, and the dialogue between the characters gave me a childish feeling, as if it was a reading-style dialogue between two children. I feel that this writing style is more suitable for urban novels or two-dimensional light novels. Is it considered unique among Zhetian fans?

It's coming, it's coming, support, support, I've finally arrived, I hope I don't want to be a eunuch, come on＾0＾~

New book! New book! New book! 😡😡😡

I was looking for old books to kill time, but I discovered it just two days after it was updated. Raise it for a while first

It's the end of July. Hey, where are the new books? 😡😡😡

Does Gao Feng have a readership group? I have ordered all Dark Generals and I want to join a group 🙂