The Primordial Beginning of the Myriad Heavens

The look and feel of this white snake is very poor, with too much description Thunder is so scary, fire is so scary, lizards are so scary, wherever there is a bad guy, I am still scared The protagonist's parents in this life did not have so many emotional descriptions, but they appeared in a snake, and this snake is also very feminine br> Reminds me of the past when such squeaky spirit beasts and systems all crawled onto the protagonist's bed. It was very abnormal Then the protagonist looked doted on and distressed How long have you known each other? There are so many spirit beasts and spiritual pets in Kunlun, so it's not all survival of the fittest The protagonist feels distressed just now, giving me the look of a little fairy who sees Hakimi being chased by a dog, then beats the dog, and hugs Hakimi to comfort him The protagonist of Tang Zichen's Chinese martial arts in Dragon Snake can't find a way forward, and I don't see any emotion in the protagonist, or how he feels distressed Think about how Dou Po Cang Qiong is The person who writes "Colorful Sky-Swallowing Python" is not Medusa, but the colorful Sky-Swallowing Python Cute, good-looking, capable of fighting, and then stupid, stupid, easy to fool, and greedy It seems to have many shortcomings, but in fact these shortcomings are all beneficial to the protagonist Xiao Yan The most important thing is Shenyin! It doesn't take up the plot, doesn't steal the scene, just get into Xiao Yan's sleeve and fall asleep You probably want to write about this white snake that it is familiar with the location and help find opportunities, but the real local snake in Kunlun is the elf Polygonum multiflorum, and he is the local snake in Kunlun If you insist on writing about a snake, you can also write that it is a spiritual snake, the protagonist helps, and then repays the protagonist's favor and mentions it. Tell the protagonist that it's all done after a few words. The point is that you shouldn't say yes. Once you say yes, it won't be a pet Then you may want to think about the blood of the Bas snake and how powerful it is But for the protagonist, there is no difference at all between raising a Hakimi and a Bas snake It's like Fang Han raising the entire Yuhuamen, they are all waste. What's the difference? In the end, I am not interested in you snake at all, because what I see is the astronomy, the various worlds, and the changes and collisions of the characters in the heavens Do you think it is more interesting for Tang Zichen to come to Zhetian, or for an original snake to be cute here? Of course I am not telling you to write Tang Zichen to Zhetian, but I want to tell you to distinguish the priorities Don't create original characters that do not exist in the fandom There are enough charming characters in Zhu Tianwen for you to use. It is enough to write about their collision and the changes they have undergone due to the appearance of the protagonist Just like this snake, if you replace it with the ten thousand-year-old Polygonum multiflorum that has become a spirit, will there be a difference? There will be no difference, it will just be less of your original plots I think it would be better if it was less, because the look and feel of this snake is really not good

You are a brainless person. You know that there are a lot of trash among Ye Fan's classmates with evil intentions, but you still meddle in other people's business. Moreover, you are not prepared at all when you arrive at the ancient forbidden land, so you come to Beidou in such an open and honest manner. Don't you ever think that others will reveal your details? There is no such thing in the original work. It was after a wave of purges. The remaining dozen or so people were not too good in nature, at least they were decent. Anyone who has read the original work knows what kind of stuff the rest are. A visitor from a foreign land, not to say crazy, but at least not let go of any Holy Land aristocratic family, is an ant. With the initiative in his own hands, he makes no preparations and just entrusts his life and death to some rubbish thoughts. It is so stupid that it makes people sick!

I was speechless at the beginning. The protagonist had already been to the high-end world view of Galaxy Emperor, but when I went to Dragon Snake Romance, I was shocked by the basic martial arts in it, especially since the protagonist practiced a higher level of martial arts than Dragon Snake Romance. My mind is filled with questions.

The plot about going to Kunlun should really be discouraged. I'm not saying that going to Kunlun is bad, but that going to Kunlun without properly handling social relations is bad. Especially before I went there, I reported to my family and school that I had been missing for three years. In the past few months, I had called the police to search the mountain to find him. But when I checked, guess what, he flew over. The relationship with my parents was written well in the previous article, but in the past three years I was too lazy to go down the mountain several times to make up excuses to deal with my parents, and I felt sorry that my parents had become haggard. I think the protagonist's parents are not as good as that snake in the eyes of the protagonist! Can I die if I confess to my parents before going to Kunlun? In the end, it took three years for my parents to grieve more than to confess my grief. The only difference was that my parents would be sad for a few more years. I'm a real enemy.

I can barely accept it before, but how can I reach the Tao Palace at the peak of Dragon Transformation? It takes more than half a chapter to eliminate a Tao Palace. Things that can be wiped out with a slap of the hand, or things that can be done in a second or two, will ruin most of the plot.

I don't want to read it when I see the realm setting. Only the heaven-defying level corresponds to the saint who covers the human realm?

I remember that last month there was also a book written in Zhetianli about the story of dragon and snake (the beginning of Zhetian Demon Prison Xuantong Jing). That 60-page book was simply a masterpiece. Unfortunately, I don't know if I bought it or if the author changed it, so it collapsed. The author recommends you read the first 60 chapters of this book. It's free anyway and doesn't cost any money.

Some water has too many gorgeous words. The protagonist's character is also too selfish, which even Tang San cannot compare to. In the dungeon world, you are still a human except when you enter the dragon and snake world, and the essence of other worlds is exposed. For example, in the previous Hong Yi, the past Amitabha Sutra was given, and the next moment the protagonist went to find the Present Tathagata Sutra, the Future No Life Sutra, and the Other Shore Sutra. After reading it, he didn't even leave a copy to Hong Yi. He also said that he had a personal connection and didn't want to get involved in Hong Yi's affairs. And the protagonist's contribution is just explained and enlightened casually.

Don't write the plot of the Urban Dragon King like the book "Devil's Prison"

The author has strengthened the God's Tomb. The only strong thing in the God's Tomb is immortality. You can live with a little spiritual consciousness. This aspect is indeed good. However, in terms of combat power, the Heavenly Way in the God's Tomb will not exceed the performance of the Great Sage of Shrouded Heaven. Some people talk about traveling through time and space. At most, it is just the characteristics of the world. Can the time-traveling God's Tomb be compared with the silly girl on the magic mobile phone? Silly girl can travel through time and space easily, but in the Tomb of Gods, it takes a big guy to do it, and you can't just travel through time and space easily. According to some people's logic, Silly Girl on the Magic Phone should be able to casually blow up the Tomb of Gods to the heaven-defying level. I just want to ask if the people who are talking about Tomb of Gods agree with this logic?