Mortals Must Be Careful When It Comes to Cultivating Immortality

This is really the most speechless mortal fanfic I have ever seen. There is no logic and no outline. There is a lot of drool. There is no daily routine in cultivating immortals. There are 0 battle scenes. I couldn't bear to watch 80 chapters anymore!

The setting of Goldfinger is very good, but the writing style is either a diary or an inner drama. What the hell is the protagonist? I just want to say, how can anyone write novels. Don't you do some reading and accumulation before writing? Writing hundreds of thousands of words without any writing skills, aren't you afraid of being thrown into the street?

Han Li, a very shrewd person, was reduced to stupidity! The dog protagonist uses Han Li's plug-in and brings a whole family with him! This reminds me of those scumbags who bring a lot of strangers to dinner with relatives and friends! It's really disgusting!

Don't dare to grab the small bottle. You said that you are afraid of the future "Time Dao Ancestor". If the Time Dao Ancestor knows that there are "odd numbers", you will be the first to be destroyed!

Writing nonsense, the protagonist refined the intermediate talisman during the Qi refining period and sold it for a year. The magic weapon and storage bag have nothing. Then a low-level storage bag costs 50 spirit stones, and the cheapest magic weapon sword in Tainan Valley costs more than 100 spirit stones. In half a year, it has been stolen by monks many times, but the magic weapon, talisman and seal storage bag has no spiritual stones.

I'm really convinced, why can't I write the spiritual roots well? I have to write about 5 spiritual roots. How come the protagonist's spiritual roots are better and it doesn't reflect your writing ability?

It's not that I want to argue, I've actually been wanting to ask the author a few questions. First, who would rush to pursue a sick man without falling in love with him? ? I don't mean anything else. What I'm saying is that if you didn't fall in love with your ex, you really have no choice but to do so. It's a matter of willingness and responsibility. Second, there are so many beautiful girls who can be targets. Why do so many people like Xin Ruyin, who is ordinary and not beautiful? ? Because she is powerful?

Free Chapter After seeing it now, I personally still support the affectionate and righteous Mr. Han. The following are some opinions 1. Will Pigfoot be a team or solo in the future? If the team follows the main storyline, it will reduce the difficulty of the mortal stream. The position of the pig's feet is unclear, and it is difficult to have a good role with the old devil and the roles will be divided. However, the writing difficulty will be greatly reduced, and the goal is to complete the book as a fan. 2. So far, the function of the golden finger is unknown. Is it because the author has not thought about it or is he afraid that he will not be able to grasp it? Judging from the previous plot, it is obvious that it is a game system flow, and the functions are relatively comprehensive. I hope to be careful in positioning, and can also learn from the imagination of the predecessors. As long as you can't die, you will die. 3. Since we are fans, we should try our best to extend the plot in a reasonable plot. For example, the relationship between Ji Xuan and the Black Evil Cult can reasonably open up the pig's feet and enrich the side plots of mortals. There are many skills among mortals with names and surnames. For the sake of the main plot, Wangpang will only mention them in abbreviation. The author can completely expand them to enrich the plot and open up imagination without taking away the role of the old devil.

What a rubbish book, what a rubbish writing style

This guy either has never seen a mortal or has a low IQ. You can write whatever you like, and if you co-write with others, you can scold them as much as you like.

It's a book written by my mother-in-law. I've read more than a dozen chapters. Various mood descriptions, various small action descriptions, and various inner monologues take up most of the space. The rest can be read only a little bit. The sea, you are all water.

It's better to build a sect of your own, only accept female disciples, and be comfortable with whatever you want.

I was wrong, nine of the ten Mortal books were half-licked, and there was a special one that licked everyone. I was wondering why the protagonist didn't share Xin Ruyin, after all, he licked it like this.

After reading these chapters, I looked solemn, lowered my head deeply, silently turned off my phone, stood up, opened the refrigerator, took out a bottle of 1982 Collection Edition of Nongfu Spring, held it tightly in my hand, and slowly walked to the window. The scenery outside the window was a bit dim, just like my mood , heavy, very heavy. Heavy, gradually, it started to rain lightly in the gray sky outside. Why, my vision was blurred. I don't know whether it was because I was crying or because it was raining heavily. It might be both. I felt more melancholy. I could no longer suppress my inner feelings. I opened the window and shouted out the window: Just Who do you look down on in the next few chapters of TM? !

There is no difference between using the cheat finger or not. I can't see the use of the cheat finger. I can only look at the personal panel which is very simple.

Han Li was written as a fool. Han Li probably wouldn't be able to leave Tainan Valley like this.

Because my writing skills are so poor, the writing is a bit like a running account, with a dull plot. A lot of the content is just what I did today, what I did a little while later, and then what I did again because of something. The supporting characters in it are shaped like NPCs, and I can't find any of them to be distinctive. In addition, the exploration and development of the Golden Finger is unclear. The vortex cannot transform low-level elixirs after the protagonist enters the late stage of Qi training. How can people be resistant to vortexes? Does this mean that this vortex is just an accelerator that automatically absorbs medicinal and spiritual power, rather than an energy converter?

What is the author's brain capacity?

Xin Ruyin is the best choice. Formation masters are a rare talent. The more advanced they get, the more powerful they become. They are of great use. Unlike other female protagonists who are just flowerpots and useless. I don't understand what other fans think of it

A novel about running accounts, fellow Taoists, please be careful to avoid pitfalls

It's very interesting. I like the whole setting of this book very much There is no cold and cold pursuit of immortality. I like to read protagonists and characters with feelings. I like to see lovers and friends accompanying me on the road to immortality. I like this

I feel there is no need to dwell on these things, just write about the part where Mo Yu gave his third uncle money to help him enter Qixuanmen. Time flies, and the camera turns around. The protagonist is already practicing martial arts in Qixuanmen, and begins to plan the cultivation of immortality skills and the little green bottle. During this period, the protagonist relies on the little green bottle to secretly refine medicine to help Han Li defeat Doctor Mo. From then on, the two people live a life without shame. A few years later, the protagonist is too qualified and leaves Qixuanmen early. Han Li continues to practice hard in Qixuanmen. After the protagonist leaves, he After mailing pills to Han Li and finding the completed Changchun Kung, he hesitated about safety and a comfortable life. Han Li had been staying in Qixuanmen as a miracle doctor. Just like this, the protagonist was already in the middle stage of foundation building and had obtained all Han Li's resources. He was about to go to the Sea of Chaotic Stars. Han Li had reached the peak of Qi training... Han Li wanted to go out for a walk, but Han Li was not familiar with anywhere outside Qixuanmen. I don't know what my strength is, and I don't know where the protagonist is. The protagonist often writes to him to tell him how dangerous it is outside. It's too dangerous for both of us to be at the peak of Qi training. You stay in the Qixuanmen to spend more time with your family, marry a wife and have children, create a cultivating family and leave a legacy, and make the Qixuanmen your own... A new chapter in the Chaos Star Sea (at this time, the invasion of the devil is still far away, the protagonist uses a space magic weapon to connect the teleportation array to the entire ore field, hehe)

I will take down Xin Ruyin from you and enter the trap. Come on! I wish you better and better as you write!

Stable updates, 5000+ updates per day. Friends who like it can collect and follow it.

Faster and faster! Too little! !

There is no edge to the water, and it is still a waste.

Did the author mix the entire ocean into the book? Otherwise, why is there such water?

Recommended

Are you wearing the anime version or the original version?