In Those Years When I Was a Mortal and a Demon

This is the first eye-catching novel. The spiritual root of cultivating immortals can be dissected out by mortals who have not practiced it. What's the color? ? ? It's eye-catching, and I'm sure I'll hit the street.

This book is all private goods, and it seriously violates the mortal settings. It is better to write the original work myself.

The Seven Ghosts and Soul-Eating Technique in the original work feels like Yu Zitong casually deceived Doctor Mo. Otherwise, wouldn't it be possible for descendants of immortal cultivating families or those high-level practitioners without spiritual roots to use this method? Moreover, the Three Iron Principles of Immortal Cultivation say that a low-level practitioner cannot seize the body of a high-level practitioner (otherwise, if a low-level practitioner builds something that enhances soul power, he or she might be able to capture the body of a high-level practitioner).

I really like Mortal Cultivation of Immortality, and have read several fanfics. I didn't read it at Qidian. I spent 1 yuan to subscribe to Qidian just to write this review. I planned to abandon it. You need 100 contribution points to comment. Why do you need to set this up? Are you not confident in your novel? Worried about too many negative comments? . . . I have always seen the protagonist and Han Li and Zhang Tie having a baby in the Luoyun Sect. I really can't figure out why they have to follow the original plot. The protagonist's masters Huang Maple Gu Tianfei and Linghu Ancestor are so good to the protagonist and Zhang Tie, although they are not so good to Han Li. In the end, Huang Maple Valley was defeated and the 9-nation alliance asked Han Li to find the protagonist and Zhang Tie. It was obviously the three of the protagonists who defected from the sect, so they followed the original work and joined the Luoyun Sect inexplicably. There is really no foreshadowing or reason to join the Luoyun Sect. . . To put it bluntly, it means betraying the sect and deceiving the master and destroying the ancestors. . . Does writing fan fiction have to follow the original plot exactly? To be honest, when I saw the baby being born, I couldn't sense the personality charm of the protagonist, and I couldn't sense the personality of the protagonist. She just acted as Han Li's nanny according to the main plot line. . If you have to live with Han Li, you can really learn from the scientific cultivation next door. . .

It's not much to look at, it's just a nanny article, and it also recruited the master of the Samsara Palace to be Han Li's nanny.

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ By some readers have reported that the progress is slow, and I admit this. This is also the first time I have written so much, and the last book cost 100,000 yuan.         ，，，         ，，， If you think I can put it together here for viewing, I'll add it to my collection. If you really can't stand it, just swipe away. Don't waste your traffic by saying another comment. I also want to be a part of Quanqin by the way. I have no grievances against you. Why are you affecting my mentality? Are time travelers really invincible? Not to mention the world of immortality, if an ordinary person travels to ancient times and survives for more than a month, you are considered awesome. Are other people all fools, just tools to pretend to be awesome for you?                                                                                                                               300,000 words are basically on the shelves now. I am writing my own part-time job. If you like it, please give me support. I am very grateful and I will try my best to improve my writing.

The portrayal of this protagonist is so bad. He has a temper similar to that of a psychopath and still acts as the protector of Han Li? It's a bit too ridiculous. Zhang Tie, the most difficult person to jump to, asked him to learn weapon training and formations to lay the foundation for advanced golden elixir refining natal magic weapons. Han Li has already begun to actively learn relevant knowledge. When it comes to the protagonist, he directly says that he is impatient. Good guy, a well-known surgeon before time travel can actually be impatient? I'm afraid I can't buy this doctor's degree.

The Lord of Samsara Palace can take action in the human world or the spirit world, so why did he let Han Li go to Nangong Wan to cuckold him? The Lord of Samsara Palace finally snatched Nangong Wan from Han Li in the fairy world. Why didn't he directly take Nangong Wan to the fairy world? What is his special hobby?

It feels like it is still impossible to seize the body, at least it was not possible before Nascent Soul. Think about it, if seizing the body is real. According to the settings of this world, the nobles, royal family and other adults in the mortal world will not die. As for the conditions for seizing the body, you must not be a mortal, but also have spiritual roots and so on. A powerful Qi practitioner is no match, but someone who is a little bit worse, or you can cultivate it yourself... I still can't get it? ? To extend a bit, poor Qi cultivators (casual cultivators) can also use the secret method of seizing bodies to seize the bodies of those Qi cultivators with good spiritual roots... Extend further, Who among the aristocratic families, sects, etc., Does not have disciples with poor qualifications... The result is that those with poor qualifications, or even those without qualifications, stop working hard and wait for the possession of their bodies to "become talented", and the entire world of immortality is completely reduced to a human-eating hell! It can be seen that although competition in the mortal world is harsh and fierce, it is not so bad that Erlinggen and even Tianlinggen dare not go out. Contrary to the assumption, the secret method of seizing the body is fake. Reasons for the hypothesis: First, the secret method of seizing a body is too easy to obtain. If it is precious, it will definitely not spread. You will understand the reasons yourself; Second, there are few examples of successful transmission of seizing a body in the world of immortality. Even if there are, they are at the Nascent Soul realm level and above; Third, I have not thought of it for the time being. So, if the secret method of seizing a body is fake, or the failure rate is as high as 99%, a lot of things can be explained. You can even think more sinisterly: It was spread deliberately, in order to—— Trick to death those mortal adults who want to practice (ambitious people, they deserve to die), Trick to death those casual cultivators (do not join the sect, living is a waste of resources), Trick to death those geniuses who are caught (if you don't join the sect, there will be one less threat in the future)... The above are just personal remarks.

The three golden elixirs of the protagonist Han Li and Zhang Tie, who are not yet at the peak of their late-stage golden elixir cultivation, actually slaughtered the level 8-9 transformed demon like a chicken or a duck. Their combat effectiveness was a mess. The three golden elixirs were prepared to cooperate with the formation to ambush and kill the level 8 transformed demon. Speaking of which, it is sheer bullshit that TM can kill level 9 easily. The plot of Chaos Xinghai is simply eye-catching. The spirit beast swallowing the demon elixir of other monsters can inherit most of the monster's magical powers and talents. What is the difference between this ghost setting and the Zerg? Why didn't the Chaos Star Sea Monster Clan do this?

Alas, in the past, before the immortal world came out, the fans who traveled through the mortal world to cultivate immortality could take the little green bottle whenever they wanted, and Han Li could bully him whenever he wanted. I can't figure out how Zhe Tian, the Supreme Being, these fans, could take the opportunity of the protagonist whenever they wanted, so it was their turn. Han Li can't even touch it, and there are a lot of people who say that if they touch it, they will die. Who wouldn't be tempted by this great opportunity? I saw that the protagonist's hand was pricked in pain, so how about controlling something like a corpse, a puppet, etc., And borrowing the hands of others to use this heaven-defying treasure?

This author is also a big weirdo in the mortal fandom. Other people's fan fiction is linked to the system and they can't wait to have three chapters to build the foundation and ten chapters to form the elixir, and the front and back palaces will be full. Have you been slowly imitating the walking of an old lady with little feet all day long? Will the editor be so slow to put it on the shelves for you? Are you really generating electricity for love?

The book is very nice. Too little follow-up. But I won't rush you if it's high quality.

No, you don't need Tianlinggen. By the way, you can bring two people to get started. This condition is not too much. Why are you writing so much nonsense? You are really planning to go to Wanjia to hang out. You don't even have foundation-building pills.

The Brahma Saint True Demon Kung Fu was not created by Han Li. It was a technique that was divided into three parts over a long period of time and scattered around the world. I was really convinced. The free chapter was very well written. I wrote a lot after it was put on the shelves. Han Li can practice multiple techniques at the same time, so why can't you? Can't you figure out major and minor? Look, Han Li has been majoring in Qingyuan Sword Technique. Minor in Dayan Art, Brahma Saint True Demon Art, Jingzhe 12 Transformations, Hundred Meridians Body Refining Art, etc. But where is the protagonist? Once you practice a skill, you can't change it. Even if you take the wrong path, you still have to go on. Why can Han Li practice multiple skills at the same time and the protagonist can't? Why is it that after killing level 9 monsters like slaughtering pigs and dogs, the Luoyun Sect cannot win against ordinary Nascent Soul monks? According to the protagonist's combat power when fighting against the Yuanying of the Luoyun Sect, not to mention the three protagonists combined, even if it were doubled 10 times to face level 9 monsters, they would still be dead or alive. Why can they easily kill countless monsters in the Chaotic Star Sea? This magical setting of high and low combat power.

It feels a bit strange, a Tianlinggen that hasn't risen yet is so swollen, I don't want to pursue it anymore

Recommended, Mortal Immortal Way

Originally, I didn't read Nangong Wan's books when I was reading Mortals. I felt a little awkward. But after reading this book, Taoist Han Li warned the protagonist not to touch Yuan Yao, I suddenly realized that it is not impossible to read Nangong Wan's books.

Dr. Mo is so kind to the protagonist, it would be ungrateful to kill him

Not to become an immortal, just to give you a monthly ticket in the world of mortals. I am afraid that the books I have kept for a long time will die. Give it a try

What a good book, it's a pity that it was cut off

For fellow Taoists to practice the seven precepts: The first precept: Compassion creates weakness The second precept is to kill and destroy the true mind The Three Precepts: Covet the Way of Immortality The Four Precepts: Fear of the Suffering of Reincarnation Five Precepts Paranoid Buddha and Demon Statue The six precepts differentiate between good and evil Seven Precepts: Forget the First Thought

"The Holy Demonic Art of Brahma" This technique is the highest technique in the legend of mortals cultivating immortals. It is a set of ancient magic techniques spread from the ancient demon world. General tips The black and yellow heaven and earth refine the Tao fetus, The Buddha and the demon knocked on the altar with a single thought. The yin and yang rotate and swallow the stars, Cause and effect nirvana shatters the ashes of calamity. Burning incense with Brahma bones leads to the nine hells, The holy blood stains the robe and tramples on the three disasters. If you ask about the true dharma of immortality, A pile of bones at the foot of Mount Xumi. The first level: Brahma bones and lotus At the beginning of chaos, the hidden orifice was opened, and the evil spirits were haunted by the earth and hundreds of corpses were burned. Golden lotus seeds are planted in Huangting, and chalcedony bridges are formed in Zifu. The undercurrent of magic patterns deceives Beidou, and the soft chanting of Sanskrit music suppresses the Yin tide. At the third watch, the soul of the moon is breathed out, and the five drums are refined to attract the sun. The second level: Forged by karma fire Delusional thoughts are like knives cutting through the liver and intestines, and the fire of karma burns the heart and boils the soup for the soul. The black ice seals the veins and locks the desire, and the red flame melts the bones to create the diamond. The heavenly demon confuses the gods and Zifu is shaken, and Ksitigarbha's soul-soothing mud pills are cool. The true nature can be seen through bleeding from the seven orifices, and the golden elixir can be obtained only after nine deaths. The third level·Thousands of calamities of demonic appearance The eyebrows are split and the eyes are peering into the underworld, and the eight arms growing out of the spine are tearing apart the sky. His feet are on the three thousand waves of the river of blood, and his palms are holding the twelve stars of the Brahma Wheel. The Buddha's face is compassionate and saves the wronged ghosts, while the devil's body is ferocious and shatters the thunder. The cycle of reality and reality turns around, and a single thought can overturn the palace of Yama. The Fourth Level: The Unification of the Brahma-Saints The five elements are reversed to refine the internal organs, and the six paths are confused and merged with yin and yang. The devil's womb is darkly knotted with Bodhi dew, and its golden body shines brightly in Shurashuang. Swallow all the energy of the Nine Nether Yellow Springs, and breathe in the light of the Nine Heavens Purple Sky. Only when the sword of cause and effect in the mortal world is cut off can we realize that life and death are ordinary. Final chapter The spirit and flesh turn into nothingness and embrace the vast wilderness, and the palm lines hide the sorrows of all worlds. The Brahma and the Saint burn together in the eternal night, and the devil's thoughts alone illuminate the impermanence. Flowers bloom and perish in three thousand realms, and leaves fall and reincarnate in hundreds of thousands of realms. Where can I find my true face? At the end of the sea of ​​blood is the fairyland. Practice the Seven Precepts - Prevent compassion from causing weakness The second precept is to kill and destroy the true mind The Three Precepts: Covet the Way of Immortality The Four Precepts: Fear of the Suffering of Reincarnation Five Precepts Paranoid Buddha and Demonic Appearances The six precepts differentiate between good and evil Seven Precepts: Forget the First Thought

I quite like reading your book, but your habit is too bad. You write intermittently, and I very much think you will stop updating it. So it is best for you to publish the book regularly, with one chapter every day. It doesn't matter how many words you have. The number of words can be very small. You can write one chapter every day, and never stop suddenly.