Konoha: Start by Unlocking the Caged Bird!

I regret that I ordered all of them. The front part is well written, but the back part is full of settings + anecdotes. The scenes are huge, the pace is fast, and the details are small. The protagonist's strength is severely suppressed. I feel like I have to follow the plot. I have to wait until the end of the Ninja World War. He was able to be promoted to SSR. He was so powerful in the early days. He was a Jonin at the age of five, a Kage level at the age of eight, and he started having sex at the age of 5 (this was one of the few uncomfortable moments in the early stage. He was five years old???), And then he became Hokage at the age of 12. It was really awesome! Then there is the problem of not being able to do it well in the later stages. When he reaches adulthood and has not yet reached the sixth level, he is simply useless, so he is forced to follow the plot. The more I read the full text, the more untroubled I feel. Why? Just like what the author said, he wrote what the protagonist wants to do, but he didn't write how to do it, and he didn't have the confidence to write how to do it. Is this interesting? Since I don't have the confidence to write the content of being a Hokage, I will write other plots. It is really regrettable to write like this.

If I had posted less than 200 words, I would not have been sprayed like this.

Don't limit the quality because of word count. I'm very dissatisfied with the author of the latest chapter.

This chapter is very large and sincere. It doesn't matter if the protagonist is too strong, and the ninjas will have their plateau for a while. Come on, author!

To be honest, the setting of the Hyuga Clan is outrageous. Logically speaking, the Clan should only consist of the head of the family, his wife and children, and everyone else should be separated, right? After all, brothers have to form families. There is something wrong with what the author wrote. How can there be so many clans?

The writing and plot are quite good, but there are too many clan members, which makes me feel that there are not enough slaves for the clan, and there are not enough people to work. . . Also, do you have a vest? Let's touch it.

A loser like Uchiha Fugaku still wants to be Hokage? He can't even control the people in his clan or even his own son. Who gives him confidence? Being a thug is just fine, but considering his personality, it's hard to find much use for him.

It started well, but as soon as I saw the four-year-old take off, I was instantly impressed. If the protagonist is eight years old at the beginning, and God rewards those who work hard, I think it would be good, but four years old is really too inconsistent.

There are too many emotional scenes, and they are too long. Maybe the author thought it was well written, but I felt it was dry. Moreover, you can write tens of thousands of words about a woman's emotional drama, but in fact, it's just a few sentences that get to the core over and over again. It's too watery, too watery. I really don't dare subscribe to this method of writing that can write two 10,000-word chapters for each relationship scene. Even if he wanted to give the original characters a happy ending, he wouldn't give it like this. Does the author think that writing emotional scenes in a romantic way is particularly literary? I don't feel anything at all, I just feel that the money I spent is not worth it.

Just a personal opinion, I think the caged bird is a destructive seal. When the seal is engraved, the Byakugan has already been damaged. The Byakugan of the Separation Family cannot have a 360-degree field of vision and is automatically destroyed after death. It is like drilling a hole for the Byakugan so that the bomb (seal) can be put in.

The author is very good at writing about women, so don't write about women next time 👍

Personally, I really can't accept multiple female protagonists and a harem, even though the writing is really good and the story flows smoothly. Abandoned!

Are you familiar with this family? Why so many

There are too few people in Hinata to draw good pictures, so use Neji's to fight

I wrote the following very quickly. Why are you in such a hurry to finish it😵

I just subscribed to the first one, and I want to ask, should Hinata give up to Naruto? I think the protagonist can be taken in. With Hinata's bloodline and the protagonist's, the descendants will definitely start the Tsansigan. If it is given to Naruto, I will run away first.

This latest chapter always feels a bit disappointing, after all, the protagonist has always been Aizen's template from the beginning to the last chapter. I will carry the burden, I will make the promise, and I will move forward. Even the author keeps hinting at the protagonist's strength. However, the protagonist's final approach is to sit back and watch the internal strife of the Uchiha clan and the behavior and dedication of Itachi and Shisui. From a certain perspective, the protagonist is indeed very humane, but it feels like betraying the protagonist's own rationale. Nian, who clearly has enough power but gives up action due to various thoughts, and whose ideal is to shoulder everything but actively hands the knife handle to others. In terms of the result, it can be said that the protagonist is more humane, but it also confirms that Aizen's belief and existence are not that simple. After all, it is difficult for people to follow through.

I didn't want to read it at first, but now some people are saying you're stupid and I don't take it seriously. The reason why I don't want to read it is that it used to cost more than 50 points per chapter, but now it costs more than 20 points per chapter, one chapter a day. I want to raise him, but even if I raise him to death, I won't be able to take care of him.

I really can't bear to see a few years old running around all over the world. Even if I write about eleven or twelve years old, I feel better.

Is this the rhythm of a comprehensive comic? ? ? A ten-year-old super shadow, it is estimated that he should be invincible in the ninja world before he turns 15. . . If you don't change the world, what else can you write about? . . Being young, first, affects the sense of substitution. Second, it is too early to become invincible, and there is not much growth plot. Reading novels is just about reading the protagonist's growth experience. . . What do you write next? ? ? After Invincible, will you change your style and write farming style? Attack the universe? ? Although some people say that the physiques of the ninja world are different, the original work also has strength bottlenecks. Kakashi's 12-year-old jounin is still a regular jounin, and the subsequent slow progress in strength is due to accumulation. Itachi is a 13-year-old kaleidoscope, but he doesn't get much better when he reaches 21. . . And as for Nazusa, the 15-year-old's combat power is about the same as the top shadow level (note the combat power), a sage mode, a kaleidoscope, but there are continuous strong enemies to force the plug-in, a nine-tails mode, an eternal perfect body, and then the sixth path directly exits the pelican initiation. . . There is no such thing as a perfect 5-year-old, but the world view is different. How big is Chen Dong's world view? . . Naruto only has one-third of an acre. He can write about the universe Otsutsuki at most, but Otsutsuki has to make it all by himself

Please write less erotic love. If you really want to read erotic love, could you please add (daily) after the title? Subscribe if you want to see it. Unlike me, if you don't want to see it, you can wait and don't waste money! You charge fifty cents for one chapter, and I just want to watch the fucking plot! I ordered a chapter, but all I did was go shopping and eat. I felt like a big idiot. I casually lost interest after just passing by, wasting more than 50 coins! Isn't writing about development more interesting than falling in love? And is it interesting to write about your harem? One chapter has more than fifty pages, and forty pages are about romance. I vomited!

Um, this book reminded me of the feeling I had when I read a novel 10 years ago. The protagonist was reincarnated and cheated. In the early stage, I felt that I was oppressed by the indigenous people. You b, the indigenous people don't recognize me as your father, but you still want to control me? I was very unhappy, so I said under the guise of righteousness that this was for everyone's good, for equality, and to overthrow the evil forces, but the process was like the revolutionary army in One Piece, they only wanted to overthrow, and did not consider the possible impact of this matter at all. The ultimate goal was to become emperor after success, and then continue to enslave others in a nicer way, which was disgusting.

He started practicing at the age of two. . . Don't talk about the different physiques in the ninja world! Let me just say one thing, have you ever seen the physical difference between a two-year-old child and a four- or five-year-old child, or even a three-year-old child? No matter how awesome your physique is, you can't ignore basic logic, right? Children grow up very quickly when they are young! The birth weight increases every day, then the body size increases significantly every month, then every year, and finally it is finalized as an adult! Even if the protagonist is a time traveler, a mature heart cannot change the fact that the body is immature! If you have to do this, then don't change the age of two, and don't write about the Hyuga clan! Directly "Training in the womb for a year, beating Obito on the night of the Nine-Tails" I helped to think about it at the beginning, and directly traveled to Naruto, starting directly as a sperm, and then won the first successful reincarnation from the army of billions, fused the egg and fell into a deep sleep! Then when the embryo has just formed a human form, directly borrow the power of the nine tails to practice. As a time traveler, bring a system plug-in. One year to cultivate a shadow is not too much, right? Or you can learn from Nezha and stay there for three years! When Obito stretched out his palm towards Kushina on the Night of the Nine Tails, a chubby little hand with blood and amniotic fluid suddenly grabbed his neck and pinned him to the ground. Obito only heard the protagonist's milky voice and said, "Are you called Uchiha Obito?" What is a surprise? What a surprise!

The protagonist is like an incompetent and angry waste

The early stages were very exciting, both in terms of plot and characterization, it can be said to be a masterpiece of fan fiction, but starting from chapter ninety-two, it felt like someone else had written it, and it just collapsed to the end.

Hinata's caged bird is disgusting. At the moment of birth, although it was to protect Byakugan, it may have been done at that time, but as a vested interest, the clan is equivalent to hanging a dog chain around the neck of the branch. It may not be a big deal at the beginning. As time goes by, it is inevitable that the branch will become a slave. Yes, this is also the reason why Hinata cannot become a top master. First of all, most of the people belong to the branch family, and the branch family has the status of slaves. So what is there to work hard for? The clan is protected by the branch family. Generally speaking, Hinata does not have the heart to be strong. Uchiha has Madara, Shisui, Itachi, Obito, and Sengoku also hammered Hinata.

I don't know whether the author's mentality was influenced by the book reviews, or whether the outline was not very long in the first place, so he just finished the book 🤫 and I don't know what to say, so it was a bit rushed. At least the whole story is pretty good. I hope I will continue to work hard on the next one and make it longer so that I won't be led by readers as much.

Too young... He travels around the world at the age of six. My son is six years old, and sometimes he has to feed him. This is too inconsistent with the protagonist.

The emotional scenes are a bit disgusting, not the girl's part, but the male protagonist's part.

When Naruto was watching it before, but then became less and less able to stand it, I will just skip the emotional drama in the next one.