Cyberpunk: from 2071

The content gets worse as the content is written The reason is probably that the data is good and I want to lengthen it, so I forcefully write a conflict plot to increase the space and increase the discussion Or there is no outline at all, and I write whatever I think of, so I am inconsistent, resulting in the protagonist team being unprepared for future goals Another possibility is that the author wants to write about a magnificent revolution, but the author may not have much understanding of the ideological arming of revolution, and cannot write a revolutionary feeling at all

At present, the only thing I don't like very much is the setting of breaking the fourth wall to explain time travel. This leads to the fact that Ultra Murphy and that person basically can't imagine any plot. The three of them have transcended the game and the novel, and there is simply a large piece of plot left to explore. The extended timeline makes the story more novel and interesting than ordinary fan fiction, and the ups and downs of the plot are okay. Several companions, each with their own characteristics, stood up. The only worry is that if the character is set too high, the character will have no growth curve and become invincible as soon as he enters cyberspace. It can be considered as food and grass, but I hope I won't be a eunuch.

Too little, not enough to see

This book has a good setting, good writing, and fairly well-rounded characters, but the protagonist can shut up his stupid mouth and stop seeing everyone acting like they want to reveal their ancestors to eighteen generations. I thought that this style of wanting others to know that he is a prophet has been out of date for a while Also, can the protagonist not be so jumpy? When he first arrived in Night City, he behaved like the boss of the world, and I know you are really bad, but there is no need to go around like this to gain a sense of presence, right? Finally, when speaking a sentence, you can insert some actions appropriately. Don't let the sentence be too long. This will make it easier to read and improve the word count. A little humble opinion, but deep love and deep responsibility.

A blank roll is not necessarily confusing. Make a mess that will definitely make people avoid it

In the early stage, open high and go low. As the old saying goes, if you are poor, you can only benefit yourself; if you are strong, you can help the world! He started running even before he learned to walk, and he wasn't afraid of breaking his eggs. What do you mean by the protagonist who saves the world? You provoke so many companies without any power? To be honest, the twist is too harsh. How cool was it to escape with your friends and establish yourself in Night City at the beginning? How good would it be to slowly collect characters and build up your power? Do you have to be as anxious as a mad dog? What are you talking about preparing for the fifth corporate war? Brother, you are only in 2071. There is still a long time before 2077. Can't you develop step by step? That can also extend the length of the article. I don't know what to think, but there is no outline at all. I just write wherever I think, and the more I write, the more rubbish I get! What a disappointment.

Out of 30,000 words a day, I can only extract 4,000 words that are somewhat useful. It may be a bit exaggerated to say that, but I don't know why I wrote more than 10,000 words in one Christmas, and another 10,000 words in a failed entrustment inquiry process. I didn't read it, but it sounded good because it was written in great detail. After reading it, I thought it was all water. The number of words in the update is too much. When I look at the progress, there is still no progress. This is the first big commission. I am sorry for the high expectations I had for this book before it was put on the shelf. Let's see if there can be improvement in the future. Let's wait and see.

Serious mode for next book? Is there another copy of this bad book? Forget it you

Okay, it's been two days since your plot was fucking flying into the sky again. Let me ask, who the hell cares about the moon? Even if you kill everyone on the moon, will it have any impact on Night City? You've already taken down Miles and if you don't write about the interaction process, you'll go to the moon and I'll ask who wants to see it? Sure enough, this IP gives your book a level of popularity that it shouldn't have.

It's a pity that with such a good beginning and subject matter, I can't figure out why it has to be so messed up if it is well written. It can be written as killing Adam Hammer but having his nest stolen. Earlier you created an AI and blew up the virus for dozens of chapters without killing the Night Market Company's AI or causing any big losses. It was already very abstract. I was bragging about it with Lai Xuan, but when I saw it, it was just a piece of cake on the side of the road, and it looked just like the real thing.

Don't take Lucy out and give it to David. Why don't you give it as a daughter?

The protagonist of this book is exactly the same as Yuan Benchu. He cherishes his life when doing big things, but forgets his life when he sees small profits. It can be seen that the author's layout is like this, giving the protagonist such a big hook, a hacker, and full of scientific research capabilities. In the last step, we have a decisive battle with Huangban Xiao. As long as we win, the world will be brighter, and we still worry about how to defeat the three melons and two dates in Gouzhen. When asked why Hansen was not killed first to ensure stability in the rear, the author replied that he did not know the smuggling routes in Dog Town yet and could not fully control the ghost dogs. I laughed too.

If you still want another copy, I'll kill you

Welcome to Night City, let us witness the journey of the legendary mercenary V Lao Da A. A mercenary on the side of the road → a big guy from the Pussycat Gang → Hansen jumped repeatedly → was reduced to a dog by Takemura emp and was almost kicked to death → the excrement was completed. The cake-painting expert paints cakes every day but fails. The love line keeps pulling, which is very embarrassing and fails. The setting written in the previous chapter is gone in the next chapter, which is a failure. It's almost 7702 years ago. The black technology developed by emp was broken at a touch and failed. The most outrageous thing is that this book was not finished at all, and it was a failure within a failure.

He was so embarrassed that he was beaten into a dog by the elites on the roadside. Giving V a brand new prosthetic body and adding an exoskeleton can't it kill Adam Hammer, Takemura and a team of Huangban Special Attacks like chickens? You are indeed quite humorous.

Another cyberpunk, hacker flow, quite interesting. Although the story of the origin of the plug-in is a bit cliché and bad, it is much better than those whims of gods and men. The cliché also means that it is okay in the general environment, not too bad. The story advances slowly, but it is normal. It is better to write slower for this subject. It is too fast to read Xiaobai. I hope the author can write a different one Instead of thinking about the forging Tianhu next door who started the game, he pulled two big ones, one full-level account and asked the scheduled heroine V to plug in a special relic like the original plot, and the god-man author made a comment, which actually disgusted a group of readers. It can't be saved anyway, forget it, don't change it, this is really the first time to meet the author who dug his own grave at the beginning, isn't it, there are only one group of readers? Subsequent readers will not want it either. Not only that, but it is said that they even pulled another one in succession later.

Good news: I found this cyber fanfic again. Bad news: It's still a small seedling. Good news: It's the original work Bad news: Isn't the beginning too delayed...

So far, I haven't seen any very exciting combat performance, and I haven't done many important things. As soon as I entered Night City, I started bragging braggingly, swearing in a low-key manner, and awkwardly picking up women. I did a lot of these things.

I have a man stuffed into my harem. I was wondering if you, the author, knew how to avoid lightning before. What is going on?

It can only be said that the theme of cyberpunk has brought this book to a level that should not belong to him. The explanation I posted today is even more humorous. You couldn't continue writing until you reached Dog Town. What were you doing in your previous outline? There are also people who write slowly after washing and don't know how to write. I was so laughing that I thought Liu Guan and Zhang captured a county and created something so invincible that the Romance of the Three Kingdoms couldn't write about it? Can't write about the development of Dog Town? Can't write about company development? Can't you write about the reconstruction of Taiping Prefecture? Can't you write down all the interactions with various companies? Why can't we write about the revolution? It's perfectly fine to write millions of words on this content. It can only be said that the author is not of this level. Such a stupid start will end badly, and you will not be able to use the opportunity given to you. The next one will probably fight more thoroughly.

Finally, I have a fan of hackers. I am tired of the brainless cybergorillas who chop, chop, and kill. Or is it more interesting to infiltrate, assassinate, or overload the system? Decryption...

The front is okay. Ever since the author put it on the shelf and everyone couldn't wait to pick it out, I knew that this book wouldn't be long. There were so many characters in just a few chapters, and everything that could be extended was condensed.

The author did not understand cyberpunk at all, or did not understand the core of this game

I found this book again while scanning the rankings today. I came in and took a look at the comment section and could only say Fortunately I ran fast.

It is rare for the writer and the protagonist to pretend to be code words together.

I had already predicted that this book would end badly. I thought it would be a direct eunuch.

Literary youth is suffering from the disease, unfinished work is the basic operation

When the level of cheating was too high and the characters in the plot were not well presented, I felt that this novel was like a rabbit's tail, so I sent it anyway. Indeed, as the book review said, the author had good ideas and foreshadowing, but in the middle and late stages, he started to poison or the characters went berserk. In the past, Bald's semi-original book had this problem, and now it is even more so when writing fan fiction. It is a pity that the author's conception and writing style are bad.

I planned to keep it up for a few more months to get to 100 chapters before reading it, but it's actually finished.

I came over to take a look on a whim, and it turned out to be unfinished...