Conferring the God's Way: the Heavenly Jun of Tribulation

I feel like the writing is still at a good level. For someone like me who has read a lot of cool articles, I was quite surprised to find this one. The protagonist looks like a normal person. He doesn't slaughter an entire village in anger just to feel better. He has respect for life, which is very rare in online novels. And the author has a really good temper, which is rare. The quality of some readers is really bad, and they are so extreme that sometimes I get really pissed off when I read the comments.

The protagonist of this book is too cowardly, afraid of this and that, and has a very serious Madonna heart, which is really unpleasant to watch. There is a problem with the author's positioning of the protagonist. It is probably difficult for this book to become a hit. No wonder the family is young.

It was frustrating to watch. Not to mention how exciting it was. At least the protagonist was given some strength. Why was it getting more and more frustrating the more I watched it?

The most taboo thing in the mythical world is to fool around without strength. Going with the flow of heaven is the basis for the survival of this world. Going against the will of heaven and man being determined to defeat heaven belong to the fantasy world. In mythology, this is purely the rhythm of seeking death. I hope the author will not make this mistake and change the general situation at every turn. If you are not a saint, you have no capital to become a chess player. People who change established things at will generally cannot survive more than three episodes, and even being a chess piece depends on your luck, will, etc. It's okay to stick to a bottom line as a human being, but you have to compromise when things are not as satisfactory as you want. The world is fickle and it's impossible for everything to conform to your bottom line. Even saints are compromising, let alone you. I also hope that the author will not accuse the Twelve Golden Immortals for no reason. It is true that Taiyi and others accepted disciples to avoid the disaster because they were in need of disaster, but they did not ignore the disciples from now on. If they simply wanted to avoid the disaster, they would just accept a disciple and send them to the list of gods. Why do they have to work so hard. The fact is that the disciples who later became the Twelve Golden Immortals all became gods in the flesh, and none of them were on the list of gods after death. This is the answer. Let's not talk about their attitude towards the enemy. At least for the apprentices, such a master is very good.

Reading this novel is similar to reading Three Kingdoms. When I saw Guan Yu die, I was persuaded to quit, and when I saw Kong Ming died, I was persuaded to quit. Every time I read the book, I saw that the protagonist seemed to have lost his mind, and I had a strong feeling of quitting, such as Jianxing Palace, saving Ji Chang and so on... But I wanted to read Shi Jue Zhen, so I read it again, and this time I finally wrote that I must comment... In fact, it is easy to understand that Jian Xing Palace is Taiyi's lack of success in the beginning. Loss Including later becoming the first in Xiqi's magic and martial arts in Xiqi (It feels a bit like Bai Zizai, and maybe Xiqi's first in knowledge?) Saving Ji Chang is to make King Zhou, who seems to have lost his mind in the original work, look a little more awake. Although he still seems to have lost his mind, at least he is a little better... Finally, speaking of the Ten Jue Arrays that I want to see the most, I have seen some of the more brilliant Ten Jue Arrays written so far. Ranked in no particular order The Wandering Immortal (Western Fantasy), the protagonist made a mobile version of the Ice Formation on his mount (is the Earth Fierce Formation just the Earth Thorn Technique) Escape from the Cage (Science Fiction), the protagonist made a mobile version of the Ice Formation on his mount A nuclear explosion version of the Tian Jue Formation (it is true that the Heaven Jue Formation and the nuclear explosion are more suitable, really tell you what it means to turn into powder) Pindao should be a calamity (fantasy), the protagonist is the one who breaks the formation or the strongest wind roar formation, but uses the original work The method (mostly copied is still dross), can actually fast forward and break the formation (why don't you learn from Water Margin, cleaning up the battlefield and found that several Liangshan heroes died...) But the author's Russian Roulette Ten Ultimate Formation is indeed It's very novel. I didn't expect it. I didn't expect it. At most, I could think of ten formations merging into one or something, or ten formations arranged to combine Tianjue + Earth Splitting to become Heaven and Earth Splitting 😜, or ambush Zhao Gongming in the Soul Falling Formation or something...

The protagonist should go to practice Buddhism, and he will definitely make great progress with each passing day.

The protagonist always says that he is weak, but also vaguely likes to do things that he has no idea about.

I know how Hongyun☁️ died, just meddling in other people's business. You're still meddling in a lot of other things, and you won't die quickly enough.

After reading Chapter 30, overall it is still worth watching. However, a person who does not even have a name on the list of gods is worried that he will be plotted by various bosses. This one does not dare to fight, that one does not dare to fight, and even a dragon girl attacks the protagonist and the protagonist does not dare to fight back. It is really a bit frustrating.

You really want to lick Li Jing's family. Nezha killed you right after he arrived. Did Li Jing think about you after you were kidnapped by Shi Shiji? Retreat. You have already written the plot of Fengshenyuan in your book. Nezha is not the beautified image in cartoons. You can persuade people to retreat in the front

No need to read, the poison has been tested, a licking dog is done, humbly licking Nezha's feet, stepping on the face and still saying "it smells so good"

This way of writing is very retro, and many readers today may not know this way of writing. There are many classic novels written in this way. I hope the author will not be a eunuch~ However, there are too few eunuchs in the prehistoric style...

I don't understand why you dare to build a temple for Nezha. This is to confer a god. It's because you don't want to die fast enough. Cause and effect are entangled, and you still try to get in. The Jiejiao has been destroyed. Who do you think you are? Because you are the protagonist?

First of all, I would like to thank all the readers, and even more thank you to those readers who have collected, recommended, read, rewarded and voted for me. I will give my thanks in detail after I put it on the shelf. I just wanted to write something different, something different. You can't eat abalone and sea cucumber every day. If you eat too much big fish and meat, you should also add some radish and green vegetables. The same is true for writing. No matter how mature Fengshen. Com's writing is now, it should have another style and another rhythm. Maybe my writing is not good enough, but at least it is different. This is another option for readers. Anyway, I think it's always good to have one more choice. Even if you don't like it, you don't need it for the time being, and you may not need it in the future. If you really don't need it, please leave it as if it doesn't exist. Thank you to all my readers. I am very happy for readers who like this book, because reading also depends on your eyesight. For readers who don't like this book, I hope you can find your favorite novel. It would be best if you leave some guidance on how to change it in the future. If you feel that you have wasted your time, or you are depressed after reading my book, and you want to scold me, I will accept the scolding. When I see criticism, I will reflect on myself and try to avoid giving readers a bad reading experience. I really like Chen Baochen's poem "Falling Flowers", "Swallows hold fish in their mouths to help each other, and mud and moss cover them for their own reasons." When the flowers fall, some fall on the spider webs, some are picked up by swallows to make nests, some fall on the moss, some drift with the tide, and some are buried by Sister Lin. My work is a falling flower, but in fact, each of us is not a falling flower? Floating from the tree, I still don't know what kind of fate I will encounter. We are both fallen flowers, swallows and fishes, or maybe Sister Lin. I practice hard just to hope that those Luohua who meet me will be luckier. Thanks again to all readers. I would also like to thank those readers who have continued to read, reward, recommend, and vote monthly. Thanks to your support, I was able to squeeze into a few recommended positions. Thank you very much! Hope everyone will be treated well.

The protagonist created by the author is the Mother Mother

The protagonist looks too awkward, without a core point, it just looks weird. One should have a clear understanding of the core of Fengshen and a general understanding of the development process, but the behavior is indeed confusing. In contrast, Li Jing loves his son but does not know how to express and educate him. In contrast, his son cannot abandon his responsibility as the commander-in-chief of Chentangguan. The human society trapped in court disputes is very clear (only read Chapter 17). How can a protagonist with no standing point attract and retain readers.

This book by the author is also weird. I feel like the main character is just a loser, and he just wants to get involved in things that he can't handle. To put it harshly, it means being ignorant, fearless, self-righteous, and arrogantly thinking about fighting with the sky and having endless fun. Look at the bird in the sky, don't you? If you dare to expose your thoughts, the first person who will kill you is to explain the thoughts of the disciples, which is to explain the way of obeying the heavens such as the secrets of heaven. There are saints who only intercept one secret of heaven, but you are a noob who wants to fight with heaven. Author, you have cornered the protagonist in just a few chapters? It's so cool. He immediately robbed the protagonist and jumped around. He was drunk.

It's very strange, there is no problem with the logic, there are basically not many poisonous points, and the protagonist's efforts are also very real. Shuang Wen is becoming increasingly unreadable. Now I like to read this kind of article that slowly climbs up. I feel that it can also give me the motivation to work hard. But is this protagonist too emotionally rich? I always like to feel sad because of others. Facing his brother, the death of Nezha is particularly obvious. I have the illusion that if his brother suddenly says something harsh, the protagonist will cry. Understanding other people's emotions and learning to be kind to others is a good character. I also like Ip Man's master's demeanor. For example, I think it's pretty good when he stops Nezha from killing people. However, the emotional aspect of this protagonist does give me the feeling of being just out of infancy and gradually understanding the darkness of society

After reading a few chapters, I died of poison. It's okay to sympathize, to sympathize with someone who has killed him several times, and even run around for him. He has no emotional basis at all and cannot accept such a holy mother. In addition, if I don't understand the mentality, if I don't have the strength to reason with each other, and I'm not afraid of being beaten to death every minute, do I think I'm going to play house with you?

After reading 6 and a half chapters, I can't stand it anymore! The protagonist is completely licking Nezha, with a hot face and a cold butt. It's so disgusting that after reading this book, I felt uncomfortable all day. The whole process of reading is depressing. I read books just to relax myself, not to suffer! No wonder your book is not popular. I suggest you write more passionate, happy and refreshing things from the beginning, especially at the beginning. Your beginning makes people look unhappy.

I don't understand a bit. I seem to have been rescued out of nowhere, hunted down out of nowhere, arrested out of nowhere, and taught a spell out of nowhere…

The protagonist says that he is not strong and wants to mind his own business, but then he gets involved in a lot of things. There is something wrong with that.

Well, in the latest chapter, Deng Chanyu's emotional drama is a bit speechless, I'll go! The pet's karma married its owner, the sudden affection, the four princesses of the East China Sea, and Long Ji were all very good. The dissolved matter is silent. The author is good at this, and the sudden changes in cultivation feel twisted! A little uncomfortable!

The first novel I read when I was a child was The Romance of the Gods, which my parents left at home. From then on, I couldn't control it. I loved all kinds of novels, and I was filled with emotion about the Three Demons of Xuanyuan Tomb. For the human race, the demons have good food and practice; for the human race, the demons also have good mounts and good materials. It is really unrealistic to put these three demons into the palace where they get everything they ask for, and keep themselves clean without eating a bite (human beings may not be able to do it, let alone demons). Just like the fairy boys like Golden Horn and Silver Horn in Journey to the West, and the fairy mounts like Lion and Camel City, they don't take human life seriously, and they still become immortals and ancestors after disasters. So, what I have said is that maybe the ancients regarded these immortals as beings beyond human nature, so they did not take them seriously. Because the sins of the three demons of Xuanyuan Tomb are very great, but in the eyes of the immortals, they may be very limited. Maybe they themselves thought so too, so they could confidently ask why Nuwa turned her back and refused to recognize people when she clearly did what she asked for, because the loss of people was not taken into account at all. . . Taking a step back, how can it be possible to destroy King Zhou's country without hurting its people? It should be noted that in the feudal dynasty, the rise and fall of the people were the result of suffering. So, I think that during the decisive battle of the gods, the author can use the name of Feng Wujiu and the three empresses who need to repair Xuanyuan Tomb, and take away the three demons of Yongzhen Xuanyuan Tomb to save their lives? If you don't like it, don't criticize it. It has nothing to do with me shouting at the book friends you see. Don't try to convince anyone. The author is free to adopt it or not. I am just expressing my own thoughts.

Anyone who follows Honghuangliu can write 500,000 words, and it's a poorly written Honghuang theme And Honghuangliu is also a creative fusion of book after book. If you don't want to follow Honghuangliu, you can also use the Honghuang background

Although I haven't read the book yet and just browsed the book review section, I found that this author is really very personable, and he is only a little bit worse than me. I never delete readers' comments, and even if they criticize me, I will take it lightly!

Basically, I skipped the public chapter and felt that the comments in the comment area were out of step. In view of the author's good self-cultivation, I just wanted to get a fan base so that I can talk more easily. I hope it will help the author's writing career. Don't blame me if I offend! 1. The original work already has a complete system structure. To overturn (or interpret or transform) it, it must be replaced by a better one. Referring to the fact that Buddha is the Tao, the writing is a mess, but it redefined the structure and confirmed the status of that book, which still remains today. This book lacks an outline. 2. In a huge world, it is a very good idea to rely on what little people see and hear to tell stories. Unfortunately, the lack of writing skills makes the plot feel like rushing to the scene, lacking a sense of rhythm, and the character creation is not ideal enough. Makes reading seem tiring. 3. The protagonist does not have enough understanding of society. A certain celebrity said that since becoming famous, he has found that he is surrounded by good people. What about the other way around? Not to mention the cruel prehistoric world, which requires a tyrannical force to determine the rules, even if they are unfair rules, maybe this is the reason for the meaning of becoming a god. 4. Online writing must be enjoyable. Daily reading is depressing enough. If reading is continued at night, it is extremely unfriendly to readers. But there is knowledge in how to enjoy it. It's not about how many exercises the protagonist has learned or how much power he has gained. My personal understanding is to bring it into the real world (just apply it to the company where you work), relying on cleverness, judgment and choice of things, speaking skills, serious attitude, etc., So that the protagonist can improve reasonably and realize his dream. 5.……

There are two fatal shortcomings. First, there are too many extra scenes. Just to explain the ancient Tianlong, Long Jiuzi, Feidao, and Xia Yu's descendants, too many chapters and foreshadowings are used, and unnecessary dragon clones and the like are introduced. These are actually quite discouraging. Second, the emotional drama was a mess, and there was even a suspicion of stock trading. In my mind, the last person who did this could be said to have sent money. Since I had no money to go to college, I had no choice but to slay the dragon. This is a Dragon Clan fanfic. It once made people think that it was an old thieves opening a trumpet, but it was because of the heroine that he played a trick - stock trading. At that time There are many female protagonists, including the Zero Party, the Golden Retriever Party, the Eri Party, and even the Sister Party. In the end, he made Su Xiaoqiang the heroine. Well, we can't say whether it is necessary for the plot to write this way, but because of the results behind this operation... Everyone knows it. If you don't know, you can search it (just one word - exciting). It is recommended that you write less about things other than mythology. These can be left for future fictional novels. It is inappropriate to write too much here. This book is originally about the Journey to the West of the Ancient Gods, with the change of dynasties, and some myths and legends. It is enough to recommend the book Erqing. The name of the novel is Erqing. The main and branch plots are well grasped. I only changed a few things on the original basis and narrated it according to the background of the times. The content is very complete. I won't write too many superficial things. The other issue is the female protagonist. If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, you can learn from the great masters, such as Chen Dong and Tudou. There are female protagonists, otherwise it will be difficult to write. However, you can try to show them as little as possible in order to use the least amount of pen and ink to create a complete image. The image is not required to be as plump as the male protagonist, but it should not be too dry or flat. Another thing is, you either have multiple female protagonists, or you have a single female protagonist. The character here is very reflected. Everyone likes it to be simple. Don't drag it out, and don't make it look like a boiling sheep. From my point of view, these are the two biggest problems. I hope the author can correct it later. After seeing the Array of Ten Thousand Immortals, it is still so procrastinating, and the old bookworm can't help but say a few more words.

Why are there no new books? If you have a vest, remember to kick me.

The author is Buddhist