A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: My Master Is Han Li

Yin Yue was designed to be a bit annoying. Although she was right to want to kill the male protagonist, she repeatedly suggested that Han Li take action against the male protagonist. Even though Han Li had some affection for the male protagonist and had said that he was an old friend, he still wanted to take action. She was a bit annoying. Yin Yue shouldn't be like this in her heart.

It's really easy to get stuck with a double heroine, either with a single heroine, no heroine, or a super harem. Author: Can you name a book with two female protagonists? The writing is okay, but I really don't want you to rush into the street

It started with Old Demon Han coming back from the Sea of ​​Chaotic Stars? ? ?

The whole article is like running on a task. Nothing is completed carefully and in detail. I start by introducing what I want to do, then write half a sentence, and then end it in a hurry, and then move on to the next task. After reading dozens of chapters, I look back and wonder what the protagonist did? He always looks impatient, and every word reveals that I want to rush to the fairy world and finish the book. And the thief likes black people, Black Silver Moon, Black Han Laomo, and Black Zi Ling. He really can't stand it when he sees Zi Ling. He feels sad and jealous that his woman has been slept with by another man. When he sees this woman, he shows his unhappiness with a cold face and ignores her (I guess, otherwise I can't understand the protagonist's inexplicable indifference and doesn't want to involve Zi Ling) Anyway, since you are on a mission, I won't bother you anymore.

A man with inner demons is writing about it like a dinner, and he is always wet. Is he trying to challenge the reader's endurance? Isn't it okay if I skip it?

The most disgusting thing about this book is that it contains Liu Dao's clothes, a group of widows such as Mrs. Bai and Long Han's wife. It's really disgusting and makes people unable to stand it. The rest is fine.

I'm a little confused. Tiannan already has 4 major cultivators, Mulan has 4 as well, plus Han Laomo, Nangong Wan can barely be regarded as a major cultivator. Even if the other party plus Gan Laomo have a total of 5, there is a numerical advantage, how dare the other party, and he looks full of confidence, just go to the other party's house, everything is solved

Did you hire a ghostwriter? The rhythm and writing style are like a new person. Before, he just picked up women who came to his door, but now he actively seeks out women from the harem.

Why is it that all Han Li's beauties are biased against the protagonist? Moreover, the author made them all have some..., And the author made the protagonist seem to have opinions about them? In addition, the master-disciple relationship between the protagonist and Han Li is more like a transaction! This is not like the master-disciple relationship in the cultivation system.

It doesn't matter how much water there is, we'll skip it.