Tokyo's Mysterious Tales

The first few chapters will drive away old bookworms, and the last few chapters will drive away the readers of refreshing articles... But it can be seen from the text that the author has read many books, and only such authors have imagination, writing style, and thoughts. I have great confidence in you and am optimistic about you.

Self-congratulations, just write them for yourself.

Sister, can you finish writing... I have already written two eunuch books.

Tell me something you don't like! Point one. The main character is too arrogant. Second point. The writing is messy. Begin the first chapter with a flashback. What happened next was a mess. The behavior is also very unrealistic and erratic. Description of the environment. The scene is very jumpy. There is no addition to the character's heart. Basically, I write whatever comes to my mind.

There is no outline. I just write whatever comes to my mind. It's so messy.

I can't stand it, I feel weirdly awkward

The first half of the plot will drive away those who want to read a good novel, while the second half of the plot will drive away those who want to watch a good plot.

You can see a lot of what the author wants to express. The main reason is that the article is a bit messy and the perspective is not focused on the protagonist. But overall, this novel gave me a very good impression. Just a small amount of optimization is still needed.

I can't understand what's written. The first chapter is okay. I wrote it as the first one. It's pretty good. I'm confused about what's written at the end.

Why does the protagonist pretend to be inferior in front of that woman, compared to his original image? There is no reason at all.