The Wandering Evil Dragon

The subject matter itself is fine, but the problem is that the world-building has been spent for twenty or thirty chapters without any progress. Those who wanted to see dragon transformations waited for four or five weeks but didn't get to see it.

The opening was good; it's clear the author has a solid foundation. However, it's already chapter twenty, and the protagonist still hasn't transformed into a dragon. Isn't the pacing a bit too slow? If it doesn't transform into a dragon before it goes on sale, there won't be many people left.

The updates are so slow! When will it turn into a dragon duck?

I came across a book about god-slayers while searching for books, and after reading a few chapters, I found it quite interesting. But... After reading 70 chapters, I have to say, did this author spend a year writing the setting and mythological explanations? And the later subscription chapters are like that too? Then how come there's endless time travel?

At first glance, I thought the novel had great potential, but then it just kept having conversations, and the soul only had three days to live after death—over fifty chapters of filler! That's way too much filler.

The most important thing is that there aren't many Christians in China, or rather, most people dislike them. Many people come here out of curiosity, but as they read on, for example, I started to dislike the atmosphere of the novel. I think this factor, or related considerations, influenced many others to some extent.

Were the time travelers replaced by the natives? This forced sentimentality is disgusting. Why not just write about the natives directly?

The author doesn't need to be too negative. At least your book is well-written and flows smoothly, and there are no major flaws in the story arrangement. The plot is a bit slow-paced, but it's not a major flaw. The main problem is that slow-paced stories are easy for new writers to fail, while light and easy stories are much more popular.

I even considered plagiarizing the author's ideas, but in the end I realized that although I've read Grimm's Fairy Tales, Andersen's Fairy Tales, and Aesop's Fables, I know absolutely nothing about the mythology of various civilizations, so I couldn't even plagiarize.

Disappointing! The latest chapter is utterly speechless. The author is truly a dark emperor reborn, his black waters flowing across the world. The entire chapter is just filler. You've forever lost me, a legitimate reader. Goodbye, may our paths cross again.