The Wandering Evil Dragon

There should be no problem with the theme selection, but the problem is that it took twenty or thirty chapters to unfold the world view and it was not unfolded. Those who wanted to see Transform into a Dragon waited four or five weeks and did not see it. Instead, they have been enduring the weird world view introduction. From this myth to that myth, there is not a single key point that should be written. The update is still slow, and it was discontinued some time ago. And no matter how the world view is developed, it is not just a bunch of things that the protagonist cannot encounter now and may encounter in the future. This is not hundreds of chapters later. How infrequently does the protagonist appear in the first 20+ chapters? It is basically a group of portraits to set off the protagonist, and the center of gravity is ridiculously shifted. Only a few literati can appreciate writing novels using the technique of writing prose. It is particularly unbearable when placed in a fast-paced Qidian novel.

The beginning is good, and it can be seen that the author has a good foundation. But, oh, but, it's twenty chapters and the protagonist hasn't transformed into a dragon yet. Isn't the progress of the plot too slow? If you don't transform into a dragon before it's released, there won't be many people left.

Updates are so slow. When will I become a dragon and a duck?

I was looking for a book and saw that there was a God Killer coming in, and I read a few pictures which were quite interesting. But... When I saw Chapter 70, let me tell you, did the author spend a year writing about the setting and mythology? Is this the same for later subscription chapters? Then why can I travel infinitely? Although it is quite interesting to watch, it is completely a fairy tale, not a time-travel novel. It is better to just say that they are aborigines. The time travelers are not noble, but have different values ​​and methodologies. This is not necessarily useful to the protagonist, but the scenery in the eyes and the thoughts in the mind are different. Simply put, it is a modern person's vision to travel and conquer the world. You have a completely native mind, and occasionally mention that the protagonist has traveled through time, and then his thoughts and actions are all mythical. Then why not just let him awaken clairvoyance and foreshadow some past mythological stories and future scenes. I think this time-traveling identity is of only this use to the protagonist 🙂 Don't write about time-traveling. It would be great.

At first, I felt that the fairy grass had great potential, but then I kept talking and realized that the soul only has three days to live after death. It took more than fifty chapters and it was too watery.

In fact, the most important thing is that there are not many people in China who believe in Christianity, or most people hate it. There should be a lot of new things to see here. But after reading it, for example, I didn't like the atmosphere of this novel a little. I think other people are more or less affected by this factor.

Have the time-travelers been replaced by indigenous people? Is it disgusting to force sensationalism? Can't you just write about the indigenous people like this?

There is no need for the author to be too negative. At least the writing style of your book is smooth and fluent, and the story arrangement does not have any poisonous points. The plot is a bit slow, but it is not a bad point. The main reason is that it is easy for a newcomer to write a slow-burning novel, which makes it more popular. It is recommended that authors should not expect to make money by writing articles. If they are short of money, it is better to work odd jobs to earn more. But if you have the time and energy, I hope I won't stick with it, at least I'll still be watching!

I almost wanted to plagiarize the author's creativity, but in the end I found that although I had read Grimm's fairy tales, Andersen's fairy tales, and Aesop's fables, I didn't understand the myths of each civilization at all, and I couldn't copy them.

Disappointed, I am completely speechless with the latest one. The author is really alive, and the black water is flowing all over the world. One chapter is all water. You have lost me, the genuine reader, forever. Goodbye all the way.