Starting with the Way of Great Peace

Corruption! Suffering! It should stop today! The sky is dead, Han Zuo will end! Although we do not have strong soldiers, we still have the people of the world! Blood stains China, Don't give up! The sky is dead, and the yellow sky will stand! At the age of sixty, the world will be prosperous!

The protagonist likes to meddle too much. . . It's easy to write biasedly and write like a nanny.

Seriously, if you don't know how to write, I suggest you read some good immortal writings, such as Immortal Officials of the Heavenly Dynasty, The First Cause of All Realms, A Prosperous Age, and a Troubled Age. They are all very well written. If you really can't write, just learn from them. What you wrote yourself is really good. How can I say it? It feels very uncomfortable

Is anyone here? Can the cute new author Jun be so shameless as to ask everyone for a follow-up reading 🤐╭(╯^╰)╮

I can't accept the money-splitting boy's actions. If it's to repay karma, that's fine. But I didn't expect him to just teach him the exercises for no reason and without any deep friendship.

How can you play the Way of Peace without rebelling? Heaven is dead, Huang Tian shall stand! ! ! !

Open a character post, is there any boss you want to leave your name on? If you have one, just leave a character name. If a new character appears, just come and pick it. If not, forget it. The author is slowly thinking about it ╮(￣▽￣)╭

Nowadays, all the novels about cultivating immortals are about fighting and killing, and there is no sense of immortality at all.

The nanny-style protagonist, no matter who he is, will definitely be a friend as long as he meets him once, and he will definitely save him if there is a problem. So tired. Not interesting

The main thing I want to hear is the classic line: At the age of 19, the world will be prosperous. Thunder God helps me, driving away thunder and lightning.