A Chinese Tale of Fairy Tales

The writing is good. I personally have some small opinions. I think the protagonist is a bit pretentious ∠( ᐛ ∠)＿You flirt with someone, but later you become emotional and you want to let go and become a scumbag. I think if you want to open a harem, open it openly and don't make it look like you are not a human being inside or outside. I find it a bit unacceptable. Obviously the protagonist has done something very scumbag, but when the heroine is sad and sad, I don't know it and think she is being unreasonable, which makes me really uncomfortable. This is my impression after reading Chapter 86.

After reading Chapter 50, the male protagonist seems to be a green tea guy. In the beginning, the relationship between Nie Xiaoqian and Nie Xiaoqian came very quickly. It was just a matter of sex, and they could risk each other's death. Later, the appearance of Master Nie and the protagonist's senior sister made me feel that it was not simple. They were eloquent, seemed to be flirting but not flirting, and the words they said were misunderstood. However, there was a reason. Nie Xiaoqian was still hanging on the protagonist at that time. Nie Xiaoqian didn't give out any candy, and the protagonist just flirted with people everywhere, which made me feel a little uncomfortable and disconnected. The male protagonist is really like green tea.

It's well written. In this impetuous era, there is still such a thoughtful author. Come on!

The writing style is not worse than that of "The Princes of Beacon Fire", and the writing style is comparable to that of Jin Yong, but the storyline can only be said to be too cliche and not interesting. There is no good writing, but the storyline is not good and cannot keep up with the current times, and it is useless. I think the author can improve the storyline. With your writing style, it can be popular.

Come on! Watch this book! ! 👍👍👍

Come on, come on, the writing is beautiful 😍

The writing is quite good, but Gao Lingsheng and Gao Lingsheng seem a bit awkward throughout the story. It would be better to use him instead. 🤐

Who did Gao Lingsheng see? He didn't know anyone else in this world, how could he be so surprised😰

Chapter 30 was posted last night, and it was blocked after I wrote a kiss. After the modification, the application for lifting the ban was rejected. Now it is revised again. It will take 48 hours to apply for lifting the ban. Everyone is numb!

Come and see the master's work! 😀😀

Oh my god, such a beautiful book🔨🔨🔨

There are very few books that I can read. Good luck to the author.

Sword skills, fundamental skills, magical powers, and sword intentions are rarely described.

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