Return to the Republic of China and Fight Zombies

It's more than ten meters, which is equivalent to jumping from the fourth floor. Still, there was no preparation for the unexpected situation, and it was hit by the coffin of the person lying on it. The leg was not broken. You have a body of steel. Don't you always think that mountain roads and dirt roads are just soft soil? Dirt roads are not sponges. If you hit the water more than 10 meters, your posture will not be the same. I have corrected you. A landslide refers to a slope or roof collapse, which is called a landslide. The ground suddenly sinks into a big hole, which is called a subsidence. I can't stand it anymore. There are too many unreasonable places, especially at the beginning of your story, the protagonist is familiar with everything, and then he travels through time again, and he just traveled through it yesterday. Without memory integration, it is as familiar as living here for many years. Do you think it is reasonable to write like this?

What the hell is a Taoist priest paired with a golden Buddha?

I don't know what it is written, bye.

If I hadn't seen the end of Chapter 3, I would have thought the protagonist was an Aboriginal

Also, are you a fan of Ah Wei? So much emphasis on describing his detective solving crimes? Do you still remember what your main line is?

The plot can be advanced slowly, don't be too hasty. I have already traveled through time and seen ghosts, but the protagonist seems to be just a normal person. This cannot be done. After reading the previous chapters, if you don't have the memory of the original owner, you don't have a golden finger, and you haven't shown the shining point of the protagonist, then you are basically gone.

Breaking a sense of presence in "The Pleiades Star Official's Monster Hunt" and "The Treasure of Ten Thousand Ghosts"

I don't recommend that the author sets the tone too high, and doesn't suggest that the Qigong method Tiangang Earthsha seventy-two transformations or anything like that. It is best to be able to use it barely, but to work hard. Everyone will find it interesting to see you solve the problem. It's like fighting zombies. You can use a baseball bat to fight zombies, and everyone will watch your operation. You can also use a pistol to fight zombies, but be careful not to attract too much. Even if you drive a tank, everyone doesn't like to see you. The problem is that if your tone is too high, it will be boring if you drive a Star Destroyer to fight zombies.

There was a big problem in the first chapter. You were asked to write about a female corpse that exploded. There was no foreshadowing at all, just what did Yizhuang look like and who were the people in it? After everything is done, when the wind blows and the talisman falls, the ghost explodes out. What's so scary about this?