Journey to Samsara Paradise

What the hell, I can't stand it after reading chapter 12. Why does the protagonist help the protagonist of the derivative world and keep trying to please the protagonist of the derivative world? The derivative protagonist is injured and quickly delivers medicine. Finally, the derivative protagonist suspects that he pointed a gun at him. What if he really shoots? This book is over. It is obvious that the reincarnator is the one who regards everyone in the derived world as aboriginal, why should we please him. On the surface, investment is actually useless. Is it necessary to invest in a world that we are about to leave? If you can't write a decisive and killing momentum, go and write a holy poem.

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Other fans feel that the hang-up in the early stage is too high, the increase in attribute points is extremely outrageous, and that they have a relationship with a very awesome boss early and are funded by the boss. It feels like it is not reincarnation paradise at all. From my personal understanding, in the paradise, there are actually many people with good talents, but whether you can survive or not is the key, and those individuals who funded it from the beginning feel unreasonable.

I think the author's writing is quite good. From the little easter eggs in the article, it can be seen that the author has read all over the world. The other two books I prefer are Doctor Abyss and Sanctuary Paradise. Let me talk about my own opinions. The author's strength is that he doesn't like to copy completely. Many Paradise fans directly copy the original text when they can't do anything. It's really It is a copy of hundreds of words. I have never seen this author before, and the writing is quite solid. I feel that the shortcoming is not the battle mentioned by other book friends, but the creation of a sense of excitement. I always feel that although the protagonist can fight two levels higher, it gives people more of a sense of disobedience and fear instead of a sense of satisfaction. Of course, regarding combat, I feel that the protagonist's melee and long-range system, which is mainly defensive, is not suitable for other refreshing descriptions of close combat (you can try it when the ancient gods are formed), and I think another problem is the status of the protagonist, not only in the paradise, but also in the void and derivative worlds The protagonist in the paradise is so strong, even in the fourth level, he still has to compete in the strongest competition. I have risked a lot of benefits. Logically speaking, the park's popularity should be high, and even the big brothers in the adventure group are not surprised for a few times. You can add a little bit of plot but not too much The other is the status of the void. I only feel that I have a lot of responsibility for the inheritance of the protagonist. There are many enemies, but I don't feel very nb. Everyone in the void feels sorry for such a generational inheritance. Cheng has no interest in it (of course he may be hunted down if he knows it) The third one is the status in the derived and native worlds. Pipi Xiao learned from the Iron Hand of the Shia continent. I think this is an epiphany for Mosquito. He uses the high status of the mission world as an invisible pleasure. It is not only respected, etc., But also better for making profits, exploring the world or becoming an elder. Yin ratio, and the author's book lacks a little experience in this area. I see that the protagonist of the mystery volume is mainly racking his brains to maximize profits. Of course there is nothing wrong, but the problem is that the charm is so high that it is a pity not to get a title that adds a world status bonus. It can be combined with the charm system to form a set of the author's own things I hope the author will get better and better 😁

I have been chasing it, I love it to death, IQ is online, I focus on strength, plan the overall situation, and profit first. It is one of the few worlds that is relatively difficult [the first world, one person, black grass], and the harvest is huge. I love the weapons so much. There is no heroine, and there is no such thing as a slap in the face in reality. The secret code form added to the weapons in the later period really surprised me. I have a lot of imagination and I really love it.

There is a bug in Samsara Paradise, which is that as the world's carrying capacity increases, the lower limit of the creatures in the world also increases. For example, if a passerby in a ninth-level world can become a BOSS in a sixth-level world, then the upper and lower limits in Arcane Eternal Star far exceed the native world, which is not very reasonable. Personally, I feel that the upper limit of your world can be raised, but the lower limit cannot be raised to the same level as the upper limit. For example, the strength of passers-by in a ninth-level world should be only one or two levels at most. After all, the attributes of the third level in the original work are so high. If you are born in a good place, you will be born with level three or higher, or even level five or six, with attributes comparable to weak ancient gods, so how can the vast number of creatures in the void survive. I hope the author can think about it and maintain a balance in this book.

The author's combat power and relationships in the later stages of reincarnation are very confusing. Author, you have to take it easy and don't write nonsense. Come on, it's over now that reincarnation paradise is full of vests. There are only melting pots, sanctuary paradise, and your book.

I have never read the original copy, so I was confused when I saw it. I saw the protagonist doing this and that, and I didn't understand the motivation at all, because I didn't know the plot of the original work, and I didn't see any explanation. Let's talk about the plot that the protagonist will participate in in advance. The monster baby will be in a three-way melee in no time.

After reading part of it, the author's logic and rhythm control are very good, but the biggest problem is that the protagonist's skills can't be seen at all. Often there is no big gain in a world, and sometimes it has to be reversed. The boss will be robbed by the judge. This is really outrageous. Overall, it is not interesting enough and a bit hard to read. I hope the author will get better as he writes more!

From the beginning, I felt that my attack power was not enough. After two or three worlds, there is still no solution. Finally, I am ready to solve it. It is better to upgrade the useless bow and arrow specialization. I have decided to go in the direction of being a spell caster. The way to increase attack power is to upgrade my bow specialization instead of buying attack spells.

I can't be the only one suffering from this

I'm so excited. Can you explain clearly the setting background of the anime when the protagonist enters the world of the anime? This person is here and that person is there. I haven't read the original work. What is holiness? The Millennium Duke is the big boss, what's his background? Why? Who is the protagonist? What to do? What is the main plot of the original work? Who are the characters? Forget about the second world, I just talked about it in general, but the third world feels completely confusing.

80% Of other fans are the kind of novels that follow the group, and they just go to Su Xiao to get it. This is neither reincarnation paradise nor hunter.

After watching several worlds, I feel that the protagonist is a reincarnated version of the priest. It is normal that LYB does not have many battles, but the plot does not have explosive points and is not very attractive. I personally feel that the author can write more about the intrigues with the contractors, and it will be endless fun to fight with others. In the later stage, you can even add the brand of other paradises, and you will definitely not care if you try to trick other people's contractors into reincarnation. Overall it's pretty good. Come on, author, let's take a look at lyb's journey to reincarnation paradise!

The author made the same mistake as many Mugenliu fans. There was too little description of the original plot and the protagonist's psychology. Even if writing a Mugenliu fanfic is considered unfair, you should write it as if the readers have never read the original work. Otherwise, it would be too arrogant. See, every world fanfic you make requires readers to make up for the original work? Is the reading threshold so high? There is too little psychological description of the protagonist. The reader does not know the logic of his behavior, how he thinks, how he evaluates the tasks and the enemies and characters, what he wants to do, and why he does it. When the protagonist knows more information than the reader, if you do not introduce the psychological description of how he thinks, why he does it, and what information he intuitively knows more than the reader, then the reader will have no experience and no sense of substitution. Doomsday Roulette is okay, but Under One Person is completely confusing, because there is too little psychological description of the protagonist, and there is too little introduction to the plot of One Person. For example, when the protagonist fights Lu Linglong, he should think about Lu Linglong's character in the original work, what he is good at, and how he lost in the original work, so the protagonist decides what to do to win. This book does not have any of these. I am very numb. I have read one person, but this copy made me confused about the protagonist's behavior. It is worse than Doomsday Roulette that I have not read. . Also, although Doomsday Roulette introduces the characters and background at the beginning, the protagonist has to say it in his heart when doing things, and is not afraid of repetition. For example, when the original protagonist, Boss Ye, appeared, I brushed it off at first and was stunned for a while without even thinking about why I called him Boss. . .

First of all, thank you very much for your support. Well, I still have a lot of manuscripts saved, so you can feel free to save them. Even if I don't sign this book, I will finish it. Secondly, what do you want to say? You can leave a message here and below. Then there is no female protagonist in this book. Finally, we will collect more useful names from everyone. Well, the code name or name of the sidekick.

Open an opinion forum. If you have any suggestions, you can post them here. Currently I have written the first level trial in a single player. So if it is a derivative world, 300 pictures have basically been fixed before.

The contract has been signed, and the previous chapters are being adjusted to the relevant order. Perhaps the update will remain the same as before

Hello, author, long time no see. If nothing unexpected happens, I should be able to reward you with a Silver Alliance before next year. I hope everything is well with you.

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After reading the part about Black Hoof stealing the master's fruit, I wanted to curse. The description you gave Black Hoof is not like the subordinate relationship between Bai Ye and Boo Boo Wang, and Black Hoof is not lovable. Doing this kind of stealing thing makes people even more disgusted.

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