My Cultivation of Immortality Is Not a Game

There is something wrong with the plot concept. I spent several years saving up to buy this exercise at a roadside stall, and then I actually practiced puppetry. A casual cultivator actually played with puppets.

It's good, but the prices are too high. How could the protagonist hold hundreds of thousands of spiritual stones all over his body before he didn't have a storage bag?

Poison, there is nothing wrong with wanting to join the sect. If you add the outer door, you also need to use insect control to control the poison.

A person who has nothing started taking risks early. Why don't you die? Are you too shameless? . If you didn't develop your useless golden finger earlier. Is it moldy if you cover it?

A mere mortal can get hundreds of thousands of low-grade spiritual stones. That's bullshit.

It's a lot of nonsense, and the setting is broken. A mortal has hundreds of thousands of spirit stones, and there is no main line in dozens of chapters. You can make puppets as soon as you start practicing, and you can reach the third level of Qi training in ten days. What the hell?

After reading Chapter 5, I have a few questions 1. The exchange ratio of spiritual stones. One medium-grade spiritual stone is equal to 10,000 low-grade spiritual coins. The ratio is out of balance. It is recommended that 1 medium-grade spiritual stone = 100 low-grade spiritual coins = 10,000 spiritual coins, which is more reasonable. 2. Issues with techniques, techniques and prices. According to the author's description, there are many immortal cultivators in this world, so low-level skills and low-level spells should be relatively common. There will never be a low-level spell with only one mid-level spell 3. As mentioned in the comment area, the carrying problem is that a person carries thousands of spiritual stones with him.

You are reluctant to use your golden finger to force the protagonist

Hey, Goldfinger is not used at all

Nothing exciting at all. How to read it? Let the author see for himself.

A piece of spiritual stone is as big as a fist, and a pig's trotter has more than 100,000 spiritual stones before he can become an immortal. How can he carry it with him? Half the skill costs 50,000 spiritual stones, but selling a puppet costs 20 spiritual stones? ? ? Prices have plummeted to ridiculous levels

Is it now popular for social animals to cultivate immortality?

The author, the protagonist's realm is neither white nor white, can this be good? I have built a foundation from the 4th level of Qi training all at once. I am speechless.

Let's overhaul it, think more carefully about the price system, and develop cheats properly. This kind of cheats that can add points to kills are the strongest cheats on mobile phones. As long as you practice the most powerful skills, increase physical strength, and deepen your magic skills, plus powerful skills, use the cheats to be unbreakable, and an opponent will be killed as soon as you hit them. If you add points all the way to kill, you will be invincible in a few years.

It was said earlier that the protagonist had more than 5,000 low-grade spirit stones left. Then he bought a storage bag and tools for refining a puppet, adding up to more than 6,000 spirit stones, as well as money for hotel accommodation. How come there are still more spirit stones? The author is not rigorous.

Here, the advertisement is not clear, and there is not even a single comment in the author's comment section. It is easy to suspect that this book is a studio article!

There are a lot of things I want to say (I can't express them accurately). It's sweaty and awkward. I just want to say that economy, skills, combat, and golden fingers are not rigorous.

Writing novels is too nonsense, so don't do it if it's watery.