My Wife Is a Swordsman

Evaluation of this book: First of all, let's talk about the advantages: the plot is very good, innovative and meaningful, and the emotional description of the male and female protagonists is also relatively delicate. If you can endure the flaws at the beginning and finish reading, the second part is really exciting The shortcomings are also obvious, that is, the writing of the first dozens of chapters is terrible, especially the farce at the male protagonist's wedding and the description of the female protagonist. If possible, I hope the author will take the time to revise it. The beginning of a novel is often the most attractive. If you dissuade people at the beginning, not many people will read it, and they will not know the excitement behind it. If you are a reader, I highly recommend you to turn off the book review and read on. The plot is really exciting and the dog food is in place If you were disgusted by the early stage, you can vent here. After all, the previous writing is really bad.

I can't figure it out, is there such a novel now? A novel about pretending to slap people in the face? There is also a little son of the Minister of War who dares to declare war on the Duke and the general at the same time (provocation at the wedding). The daughter of the Duke has no cards? Just bring two seventh-grade ones? The son of the minister can be a fifth-grade, rubbish mentally retarded novel. Even if this novel was ranked in the top ten in Dou Po era, there is still such a novel now. It is also drunk, useless, pretending to be a slap in the face, and has a black constitution. Is there another old routine that others have used many years ago?

The plot is too simple, there is no imagination, the logic is imperfect, and the routine is a bit flowing. The biggest shortcoming is that it has no depth. If a work has no depth, it is like fast food. You will forget it after watching it. I believe everyone will always have a feeling of deja vu when watching it. Yes, it is the previous slap-in-the-face, copycat, and harem ambiguous stories. Various characters lack further logical cooperation and event reactions, and they are all too superficial and shallow!       ，，，，，，，，，，，，        ，，，，，              The logic of the three views of the various characters in the article needs to be further adjusted, otherwise everyone will always have a lot of awkward feelings when watching it, that is, the three views are inconsistent, and everyone has spent money reading the book, and gained nothing, and they were forced to slap in the face and feel disgusted. This is very sad. Hey, it is not easy for the author to code, and it is not easy for the readers. If you don't see the plot that cultivates sentiment, you can't see the poisonous light that damages your eyes! Although it did not meet my expectations, I believe that the author has also tried his best. After all, he will not hide the good things. I just hope that the author will think twice before writing and can achieve the thinking logic of normal people. I hope the author will continue to work hard and reach a higher level! ! !

How can I put it, the more I read at the beginning, the more embarrassed I was, the book was lacking, and it was a pity to abandon it because it was tasteless. But after reading the back, it was okay, and the poisonous points were not too much. For a new author, this state is not bad. There is no need to compare with the works of other great masters. Different levels, different experiences, and different experiences, the works written will naturally be different. For us readers, since we have paid, we naturally hope to see good works, but we should be more tolerant. There are indeed poisonous points, which is understandable. After all, I am a newcomer. I can't stand some routines myself, but the overall rhythm and background summary are not bad. If it is so-so, if you don't like it, or to your taste, just leave it. For new authors, we still don't want to always dampen people's enthusiasm. We still hope to see more and more newcomers grow up, so that we can see more good works. To be honest, some chapter reviews are really unsightly, which greatly affects the reading experience. We should be more tolerant. Again, if you don't like it, delete it directly. There is no need to use bad words. Good suggestions are always better than verbal attacks. For us readers, we should have our own thinking and not follow what others say. It is his business if he thinks it is not good. If I agree with his point of view, I agree with it. If I don't agree with it, then don't bow to the mainstream. Finally, I also hope that the author can keep pace with the times and not always appear in plots to reduce intelligence. The old routines will become poisonous points. Once the poisonous points become too many, people will naturally abandon the book. I just finished reading the latest chapter, and the overall situation is good now, but there are still some differences. There are more flaws, please pay more attention later, but you can see that the writing style has improved compared to when I first started the book. Anyone with a discerning eye can see it. I hope you will stop being a eunuch. Even if it is unfinished later, it is still better than being a eunuch. Come on, the more you write, the better!

Introduction to Chapter 684: Saving Money: Pretending to kill a few unknown ghost generals.

I wrote about giving birth to a child, but the child was persuaded to give up because of his talent.

I still have more to say. Can you do ten chapters a day?

Except for the early marriage where it is not possible, everything else is OK.

, N.;

Come on, I like this kind of comedy. I admit that I am a native dog

What I wrote above is pretty good, but when I read the part about getting married, it was extremely poisonous and could kill me. Nine out of ten people would abandon the book after reading it.

I barely managed to read Chapter 24, but I couldn't hold on and died of poison. How old is this, and there is a novel like that trash like the son of the Minister of War jumping out to torture the master? Is it because there are too many readers? A son of the Minister of the Ministry of War suddenly popped up and made irresponsible remarks about the wedding of the male and female protagonists. Can the author have some common sense in life? Who is the most likely to get married? Can you just casually comment on other people's weddings? You have watched too many TV dramas. The male protagonist married a stranger so suddenly. You are a modern soul... I won't say it anymore. It's poisonous.

I'm not going to complain. I just saw The Big Wedding and I was poisoned. I subscribed to a chapter in order to speak. The first few chapters can be followed by a big poisonous point. After reading your explanation, the author said that it was too late. I want to say that it was too late. As long as you don't finish it, there will definitely be new people reading your book. Big Some newlyweds were poisoned to death at their weddings. It would be great if you corrected this novel now. Now that you have discovered the error, stop the loss in time, otherwise 8 out of ten people will be forced to leave by that poisonous point. Of course, if you want many people like me, subscribing to a chapter in order to speak, that is really awesome.

Subscribe to a chapter without vomiting After reading 12 chapters, I think this kind of literary education can be cultivated by people? It's disgusting. If you can cultivate a certain level of literature, doesn't it mean that everyone is a great saint? It's even more outrageous in chapters 25 and 26. The heroine clearly has the strength to handle the wedding, but she just watches the protagonist's family being humiliated, and then cats and dogs are about to kill the protagonist's whole family. How can she not take action? The key point is that none of the connections in front of the main character of the dinner are used, which is embarrassing. When filling the cup, the villain brother seemed to be stopped by time, and then crippled others. The next second, he was crushed by the minions like a stinky dog ​​and was yelled to stop. You can believe it, this is a big deal. Oh my god, let alone a country with a country, a son of the Minister of War can kill anyone he wants in broad daylight. If he, the Minister of War, does not directly clean up the family, he will be sorry for the hat on his head.

He is so mentally retarded that he cannot be any more retarded. If you could read the first 20 chapters and pretend that I didn't say, this woman is pretending? The Qin family begged you to marry? Did you open your heart again later when you saw the protagonist become more powerful? Who are you? The son of the Minister of War doesn't choose Wan Li to come and kill the daughter of the Duke, right? If he can't beat him, then he starts to change his background. Doesn't the Duke of the State have a better background than you, the Minister of War? So the poison is just to copy a poem, oil cake, right? When I read a book, I often don't read it because the background setting is too cumbersome to read. I rarely don't read it because the plot is too outrageous. Author, you did it.

You are too stupid. The emperor granted a marriage, and a son of the Minister of War slapped the children of two princes in the face, and directly criticized them for so many chapters. The possibility of defeating them is very high.

The biggest problem with this book is that the protagonist is glib, has a lot of psychological nonsense, and looks like a fat middle-aged man.

Various spouses, villains and other disgusting chapters account for at least 30% of the chapters. Invincible √⑧ Scumbag Stallion 🐴 Fei Wuwen is simply the king of poison kings, Netherworld Poison King, Lan Ke Qiyuan can write more than a thousand chapters without a female protagonist, what kind of anecdote is this written, Long live the emperor brother is better than this, it's so annoying to watch

I haven't read it. I read some comments saying that the first chapter was too toxic. I flipped through the chapter and read the wedding section. When I saw the protagonist's embarrassing poem at the end, I lost the desire to read it.

It's a pity, such a good subject matter... If it were written by another master, it would be absolutely wonderful, it's a pity, it's a pity

Specially reward paragraphs for comments. I just read the first dozens of chapters, and they were very toxic. . Not to mention that the pretentiousness is unnatural and even disgusting, there is something wrong with the character of the protagonist. To put it bluntly, it is just a piece of cake. The subject matter is very good, I think it might be better if someone else writes it.

Nine out of ten are poisoned by the chapters on getting married.

First of all, I think as the heroine, she has very few scenes, and most of them revolve around Cang. Then the maid has more scenes than the heroine, which is a bit poisonous. Then the author writes amazing poems but always gives them away. She still thinks it's nothing, but it's a bit outrageous, as if she has no brains. Later, during the wedding, the heroine was humiliated but didn't show up. If it weren't for the hero's skills, he would be damaged. It's quite poisonous to be honest.

To be honest, I didn't look at it later, I just saw the marriage part. I asked, was it written using a face-rolling keyboard? A big family, a duke, or one in charge of the military You described it in the previous description🉐It's a lot of criticism, and getting married will bring a lot of slaps in the face Yes, your husband's family is a down-and-out family, you wrote this Then what? Is anyone in the woman's family dead? Dear, in this case, just a woman, send it directly Even ordinary people know that the person sending the bride must have a family member, but you seem to have nothing but the bride. . . . I tried to make up for it later, talking about the personal behavior of the son of the Minister of War My dear, a son of the Minister of War came with an old man Mo to show off and slap him in the face, a Duke, a family in charge of military power, a big family Oh, I vomited blood

The protagonist is too weak, there are messy conflicts, and all kinds of people come to kill the protagonist. The protagonist relies entirely on people to save him. The improvement of his strength is ridiculously slow. It takes more than 30 chapters to reach the ninth rank. It takes more than 170 chapters to reach the eighth rank according to the table of contents.

Chapter 26: Persuasion to retreat, a bunch of excuses

How can I put it... I suggest you overhaul the previous chapters, even if you stop updating them. The plot of getting married and entering that study was so mindless that people died of poisoning. Since it is a sacred item, it is allowed to be taken away casually without anyone repaying it. It only matters if one gives one back. And there are couplets, and so is that one. It's useless for a girl to have a little bit of psychology. This couplet is essentially not hers. Once she takes it away, she takes it away. The second time, she has to rely on others to get in and not get anything out. hemp. There is no need to say more about getting married later. The author will know it by reading other people's comments. Now that I have seen the marriage episode, I am extremely addicted. I'll see what happens next. If it doesn't work, I'll have no choice but to run away. Really, the author should overhaul the front. This book still has potential.

No matter how the previous plot was written, the marriage ruined the entire book. How could the son of the Minister of War have the confidence to offend both the male and female protagonists' families? If you wanted the male protagonist to gain favor in front of the female protagonist, you wouldn't write it like this. Seeing the enemy knocking on the door, and the two families being humiliated, the female protagonist who still has strength actually remains indifferent and hides her strength? Aloof? Do you really think you are a cold fairy?        ，？

The heroine got married in a different room, so why did you come all the way to get married? Want to find a quiet place and can't just go there to live in seclusion? The reason why you have to get married is eighteen. The male protagonist is also a complete licker. Others will not bother to care about you after you get married. You still have to stick to it. Are you cheap?

Man, to be honest, if you don't know how to write emotional dramas, you don't have to write them. If you always have a single female protagonist, your book may not be able to achieve this result. Obviously, one female protagonist is enough to write, but you have to add a dragon, and the harem is also a mess.