The Rise of the Prince

The prime minister's granddaughter, Gillian, and his wife, Gillian, did not make him the queen, nor did he make He Qian, but she said she wanted to make Shiyu, who was born in a brothel, the queen. Is there something wrong with her brain?

I don't know if the author has ever looked back at what he wrote. He first wrote a story about Kai Yin and Fu Yin, and suddenly the emperor dared to scold him. It was really awesome. The little people were scared to death, but the big people had no scruples.

I hope my suggestions for this book can help the author—+^_^+—! I finished reading this book in one sitting today. I originally thought I had found bread and butter, but because the author dragged on in the plot, I felt it had been reduced to hay, so I complained. Let me talk about my views on this book. Please forgive me if I don't say it well. Judging from the plot, the author's writing is smooth, but there are some problems with the plot. A book of grain and grass was literally written into hay. This book starts with a conventional counterattack on the routine of popular historical novels, and then the male protagonist Goldfinger has outstanding knowledge of psychology and courage. However, in the early and middle stages of writing, the plot could not unfold quickly, which resulted in the feeling of depression being too strong when the desire to rise was first suppressed, and then too lightly when it was raised, and it quickly moved to the next plot. Writing this way can certainly make the plot compact, but it also reduces the reader's sense of accomplishment. This kind of writing method was okay once used, but later on, it was always a layout for the protagonist. The protagonist was targeted over and over again. It can be said that it can be solved lightly, and the protagonist really has nothing to lose. But if you look carefully for a long time, you will find that none of the people who cheated the protagonist have been retaliated against. This will inevitably lead to the loss of readers. After all, many people read novels just to feel refreshed. The protagonist has been cheated many times without knowing how many times, and has no way to retaliate, which makes him feel upset. The author probably wanted to give the protagonist a chance to show off in several poetry meetings, but there were too many tricks like this, and he didn't feel anything at all, so he persuaded him to quit. Regarding this kind of plot, I just want to say that if you want to write poetry to show off, write it quickly. Don't have to be targeted to be forced to write poetry. Readers all know that you want to copy poetry. If you want to copy, copy it quickly. Do you have to have others push the protagonist to a dead end before you are willing to write poetry? His reputation has been questioned so many times, and the protagonist himself feels annoyed, so why doesn't he write more poems to prove his reputation as a talented person? The protagonist doesn't care about fame, and the reader doesn't care after introducing his identity? It's not enjoyable to read, so many readers don't want to read it. It won't be popular. As for the typos, forget it, but the character of the protagonist fell apart in the later stages. Why would a smuggler in the previous life know the manufacturing technology of gunpowder, forged iron, distilled liquor and other things? ! ! I am currently a sophomore in high school and will soon be a senior in high school. I only know a little bit about it in theory, but in fact I don't know how to control it at all. So it would be nice for the author to give an explanation, and whether the protagonist likes articles or martial arts. In the first article, it is said that he likes articles and has good calligraphy, but in the second part, he doesn't like articles and likes martial arts. . . But in short, I have made some suggestions, and I hope the author will adopt them. I hope the author will get better and better as he writes more. This book is much better than most novice historical essays nowadays. Come on.

The writing is really good. I hope more people will pay attention to this book 😆

There are so many unreasonable places. For example, I gave Shiyu's contract of sale directly to her and wanted her to help manage the store. This place is very poisonous! After getting the prostitution contract, she still hates the protagonist, why should she help the protagonist?

The writing is very good, the plot is the most attractive, and every monthly pass is free. Come on, author, I look forward to you! ! ! Prophecy can bring about great achievements! 👍👍👍

It's well written, but it's a pity that there's not much more to it.

I saw a lot of comments saying this and that. I think this is quite good. The previous book was also well written, but it was too short. Continue to support and come on author.

He Qin wrote so well

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I almost burst out laughing while reading your first novel, come on

I've read a hundred chapters now. This poem just came out. The emotional line between the protagonist and Shiyu is still unclear. But Pig's Feet's feelings for Gillian and He Qin are, in my opinion, more than just friends. I'm talking about the protagonist's inner thoughts💡. In my personal comparison, the author's He Qin is a very vivid and likable type. When facing these two girls, Pigfoot behaves like an uncle or a big brother, and he has not yet shown his life-and-death love for them.

This novel is so contradictory, so tiring to read, and distracting.

I saw Chapter 540, and I don't know how I persisted. To be honest, I recognize the author's efforts and believe that the author definitely wanted to write it well. However, seeing it now, I really have something to say. 1. Regarding the names of the protagonist and supporting characters in the book, I feel that the author just rolled the dice and came up with it without any intention at all. Many of the names are incomprehensible. 2. There are so many typos, and some are even wrong from beginning to end. The most impressive ones, such as "None of my business", are typed as "It's none of my business" from beginning to end. I won't mention the others. I believe readers know what they are. 3. There is almost no military common sense. For example, when we went south to counter the rebellion, a team of tens of thousands of civilians was able to quietly reach the edge of the rebel camp without being discovered. Moreover, if the rebel scout was killed, just kill him, but did the rebel camp of tens of thousands send just one scout? ? Then I was also drunk when the rebels fought back. They fought back to the camp only to find that the camp had been burned to rubble? ? Even if it is a surprise attack, a small number of scouts should be sent out to conduct reconnaissance first. Furthermore, 200,000 troops attacked the city of Nanjing and were defeated by a surprise attack by a few hundred men. But when the vanguard of the former army or the commander of the Chinese army got the news, didn't they immediately send three to two thousand men to support them? ? If you think about it with your knees, you can understand that it is difficult for hundreds of people to maintain order in the huge city of Nanjing, let alone guard the four gates. Is it the coach who is arrogant or the author who is arrogant? 4. Ancient class common sense is too arbitrary. As a time traveler, it is understandable that the protagonist does not care about some ethical things. However, as an authentic ancient person, it is too casual. For example, Gillian, even though she is engaged to the protagonist, she has not paid a visit to the court for one day. They can only be regarded as the rich young lady who has not left the court. She gets tired of being with the protagonist from time to time, but she can actually stay up all night. This is going to break the spine of people, and not counting one of them, there is also He Qian, who is completely nameless and has no status. The protagonist can not care, how can others not care? ? ? In addition, the palace steward passed away, and the protagonist, a nobleman from Tianhuang, King Pingnan, and a general, actually kowtowed and knelt down. Was he trying to scare the steward and his family to death? ? 5. The timeline is confusing and unclear. For example, Jiangzhou was pacified. Judging from the time, the protagonist's army is still escorting the prisoners on the road. Although they have been told to send people to send the good news back in advance, in the blink of an eye, civilians are already spreading the story of the protagonist's achievements. What, did anyone in the team call or send text messages to their relatives? ? Brother, that was ancient times, ancient times! Even the latest report received by the emperor may have been a few days ago, or more than ten days ago, or even a month or several months ago. How did the common people know about it so quickly? 6. Hiding strategic materials privately. There is nothing wrong with hiding some strategic materials secretly. However, first, the protagonist has mastered such big weapons as muskets, grenades and even artillery. The emperor actually didn't send anyone to supervise him? ? The author describes how suspicious the emperor is, and how neurotic he is at the same time. Even if the protagonist is his own grandson, the royal family has been ruthless since ancient times, so it is impossible to achieve this level. In addition, I have read a lot of fictional farming stories like this. They all come up with strategic-level new technologies and first equip the frontline troops. However, the protagonist here first thinks about arming his own troops. He can clearly use his new technologies to capture cities and seize territory, but he has to hide them and let the soldiers who are really on the frontline bleed and die. What's even more ridiculous is that you have better steel, so you can first think about replacing the frontline troops with better swords, guns, swords and halberds, but it is actually used to produce agricultural tools first? ? ? What the hell kind of operation is this? ? ? To be honest, there are many shortcomings about this novel, which I won't go into here. I am not saying this to belittle the author, but I just hope that the author can write this novel more rigorously.

In fact, the previous book was very interesting, and I couldn't understand why I entered the palace.

This book is generally well written. The author was only in his twenties when he became emperor. The emperor who expanded his territory had a granddaughter of the prime minister as his fiancée when he was still the prince. Later, he married a matchmaker. Why did the courtesan in the brothel finally become the queen? This is the most poisonous point of this book. This oiran is also a very scheming and skillful woman.

The protagonist is super awesome. He doesn't kneel down to worship the emperor, yells at the emperor, contradicts the emperor, and is angry with the emperor. It's totally fine.

This book was really okay at first, but He Qian appeared and started to turn into a licking dog, apologizing to the maid? The licking becomes more and more intense. How many of you are willing to be a licking dog? There is no sense of immersion at all.

Don't show off your psychology in front of the ancient people. The few books you have studied may not necessarily make you better than them. The great people in ancient times understood psychology. Fortune-telling and calligraphy were all psychology. Not to mention that the emperor was a monster. In the feudal dynasty, the ancients had great advantages. In reality, politicians were very good at turning lies into reality.

I really don't understand what the author is doing. Under the premise that the male protagonist has a wife whom the matchmaker is marrying, he instead makes a brothel girl his queen. This is the first time I've seen such an outrageous operation.

It's not easy to write so poorly.

I've seen episode 49. The protagonist is a dandy. He can talk and laugh with the prime minister when he sees him. He even dares to fight a third-rank official. Are you really afraid that a governor will cause trouble for him? Drunk or not? I kept building a restaurant and gave it up. Trash within the trash, poisoning me to death

I personally tried the drug, and the protagonist was handed over to a prostitute for the first time, which disgusted me to death🤮🤮🤮. Goodbye

Haha, a gangster who went to college and is proficient in psychology, but he can't even control his emotions. Even the emperor dared to scold him casually. He also likes poetry and playing chess. The character is really broken.

To be honest, this book is a good book, but the problem is that the updates are unstable. If the author writes it carefully, there is no problem in ranking among the top 20 historical texts! 🪖🪖🪖

When the protagonist sees a beautiful woman, he kneels down and licks her... No matter whether she's good or bad... It's so disgusting that I won't watch it anymore.

God, if anything happens, you can make an announcement first.

The illness is serious. Go to a psychiatrist as soon as possible. If you delay it any longer, you will have to go to a mental hospital.

The guide pushed me any stinky fish or rotten shrimp, any fishy, ​​dirty, smelly or rotten stuff can be uploaded to the guide.

I think this book is good to read without thinking. It's basically a cool article. The shortcomings are as follows. 1. It's not very realistic. I traveled back in time and told the maid some basic mathematical knowledge. Within a few years, the guns and steam engines you told me about were made. 2. It is a historical fiction. There are no group portraits as there should be. The male protagonist is the most awesome and listens to the male protagonist in everything. The group leaders have no independent opinions. Too much modern theory has been substituted. 3. Isn't the timeline of the male protagonist turning from a gangster that everyone yells at to a hero that everyone admires too fast? 4. There is a little bit of political game, and it can even be said to be too simple. This book is pretty good without thinking about it. I can only say that it is pretty good, with a score of 6.5 Out of 10.