Pirate: I Will Subvert the World with My Magic Hands

There are a lot of characters' information in the life cards related to the work (the main characters all have them), you can take a look. The life card will be updated in real time as the novel progresses.

You can retain the abilities of several fruits at the same time. It's so cool. 😃Transparent Fruit + Silence Fruit + Teleport Fruit + Childlike Fruit. It's silent. Teleport over and touch it and it will be GG.

Relatively speaking, the author's writing is good, better than most pirate novels 👍, he is a master, his writing is mature, and he doesn't look like a newcomer. It's just that the novel is generally mediocre and falls into the original Aboriginal routine, which didn't satisfy me. The plot is a bit draggy and the links are not smooth enough. The description of the combat is average, but it needs to be described in large lengths, so it needs to be detailed. The protagonist's behavior is not steady and neat enough, and there is no good arrangement for future planning. The author's imagination is too small 😏, and he is slower than writing the plot of this novel. Author, come, come! The outline is combined with the sub-outline, and the coding speed is extraordinary. So, this novel is dispensable to me. But I like to read pirate novels. In pirate novels, short people choose tall people. It was a pity that I abandoned this novel, and it was not enjoyable enough to read.

Chapter 20, smile wryly, scratch your head, and touch your nose, all three of them

Does the author think he is funny? Nose bleeds frequently. If this were a comic, I would have nothing to say, but in a novel, seeing a woman constantly spraying nosebleeds is really depressing. Sprayed twice in two chapters, do you really think it's Sanji? What I fear the most is this kind of self-pleasure author, whose nonsensical descriptions are so embarrassing that I don't even feel it.

The part about absorbing poisonous smoke is too sensational. The protagonist can actually sacrifice his life for the people of an island. If someone else threatens the protagonist with the people of an island, should the protagonist just die obediently? How can the poisonous gas produced by coal harm coal? You might as well have written that your brain was injured after being hit by Blake. Generally speaking, it's okay, but I always think that kind people are full of weaknesses. As long as the author keeps the protagonist kind, it would be too easy to suppress the protagonist.

Every book has to say that the protagonist is a good guy or something, especially a pirate or a bandit or something.

I don't want to watch adventure pirates anymore.

The author, you said this novel is for practice. Therefore, be bold, jump out of the original plot frame, and let the protagonist "attack" in the background of the pirate world. "As we all know", the development of Devil Fruit in the pirate world relies on imagination. This is the basic setting and one of the sources of the protagonist Goldfinger in the unsystematic novel. As for the basic setting of the original work, what readers like to see is how the author uses what the "protagonist" wants (pirate dream theme) to do, like playing chess, to arrange the direction (the author's pen). The law of the jungle is a time-travel novel. The first rule of the protagonist is to save his life, the second is how to "become stronger", which is "capital", and the third is fun. Side effects cannot affect the first two. It's well arranged, and it's fun to put it all together, a fan fiction WIFI password.

Chapter 43 about the work made me crazy. .

How to write a fanfic with a bunch of original characters

The ability of your fruit is so extraordinary that it is almost invincible. Limitations mean there are no limits. Anyway, one fruit is equal to any three fruits. It can still be developed, and you can use two at the same time, and you can also copy it remotely. You are so exercised, find a way to get the flower fruit and the childlike fruit to make you invincible. No matter what the four emperors are, just gg if you see it.

It's very good. It's well written. It has its own opinions. It's not like the protagonist in a fan novel. It has its own main plot.

It doesn't look exciting at all, it's just plain boiled water.

Wouldn't the protagonist team add a few original characters, such as Airy Road, who have a good reputation? Unfortunately, the timeline is too late, and I feel that I can't recruit characters with strength and potential.

Your bounty in the South China Sea is too high. Even the overlord of the South China Sea can only get around 100 million at most. There is also a great sea route! Kidd only had 310 million after completing the Grand Route to Xiang Island. You have 300 million overlords and 200 million ancient species in the South China Sea. Those seven great shipping routes are worth about 500 million each? The reward is a bit exaggerated

In Chapter 23, did the author force-feed me in the duel? Does an archer not even count whether he has arrows or not?

After looking at the table of contents, this is the Grand Line, and we met the New World Aunt cadres and Kaido cadres?

I saw Kizaru when I looked at the catalog. I want to watch it, but I'm busy right now, so I'll make time to watch it tonight.

It feels like another kind of Straw Hats. You can go wherever you go and hit the local tyrants. To be honest, your fruit can give you more abilities, but the level of development is like starting over. To put it bluntly, it is equivalent to the multi-fruit ability users who have to be re-developed. It is better to use a more powerful phantom beast fruit to increase the body.

Author, you have too little follow-up reading🤐😐😰

One thing to say. Copy the fruit if there are no restrictions. Definitely the most buggy fruit. It is equivalent to ALL OF ONE. In the end, it is the omniscient and omnipotent God.

I have only read more than ten chapters so far. The plot is compact and not procrastinating. Many crew members have appeared in more than ten chapters. Although some have not yet boarded the ship, the background stories and character portrayals of each crew member are good. I was moved by part of the plot 😭

Go and see, I had a dream, how to write "The Richest Pirate Man",

Hey, I can't see what happened with Pony at all. I came here for Pony.

Ashina Isshin's Gun

The more you watch, the smarter you become. You can't beat Black, the overlord of the South China Sea. You beat three of them, and even got beaten and injured so that House could lure one away. Those three fools can obviously kill you.

It's really over, it's still April Fool's Day 😰😰😰