Hunter: from Gaining the World to Beyond Heaven

First of all, I would like to praise that the description of the battle is good and very clear, but the battle process is a bit too cumbersome and complicated. It could be a little less one or two rounds of I predicted your prediction. The character and character setting are also in the middle and upper reaches, but the battle length is too long, there is no daily routine and training part, and the protagonist's strength improvement curve is too steep. The content of interpersonal communication is approximately equal to 0. The depth of content is also there. The next thing is the weakness. First of all, the original characters are introduced too frequently. I know that the author wants to write more characters involved in the battle. In this way, the collision between the combat IQs of the various forces will be very interesting. In this regard, the two villains at the auction in the first scene and the inexplicable mercenary group are okay. Their motivations are very simple. However, the motives and goals of the two groups of supporting characters in the Empire State Building in the second act (the Highway Robbery Group and Jack and the Sword-wielding Group) are very abrupt. The former group appears in a small number of chapters and their exit has long been treated as a foreshadowing. The latter group can be said to be super troublemakers, purely to disrupt the balance of the battle between the Hunter Guild and the Brigade in the Empire State Building. In order to allow the brigade leader to escape in front of the invincible protagonist, the "bull" was even written as a trap for his teammates. The same goes for the prison afterwards. The brigade was killed like scum in front of the protagonist, but there were always inexplicable additional accidents, such as the ever-present parade team and the inexplicably exploding sugar bowl. Your way of writing made me suffer from "0-08" PTSD again. It is indeed not easy to write an original story in a place where the original work does not exist, but the author's original characters are all characters that die in one battle. Isn't this a waste of pen and ink? Generally speaking, I would give it about 8 points out of 10. It is considered one of the top fanfics on hunterXhunter. Keep it up and there will definitely be high-quality products.

By the way, if you stop for five seconds, you can instantly kill five systems except the enhancement system. As long as the whole body is not strong, when the enemy uses flow to distribute mind energy, it can be killed instantly by stopping. After all, not all people with telekinesis abilities can develop their telekinesis abilities to a very abnormal level, and even oaths and restrictions are set subconsciously. There is no need to spend a lot of time writing about every enemy you encounter in the future. You can abbreviate it appropriately and it will be done in seconds. After all, most people with telekinesis abilities are at the same level as the Yin Beasts. They rely on their guessing abilities and intelligence games. Stopping at any time is equivalent to being able to flip the table.

To be honest, I have recently been planning to write a hunter fanfic based on the stand-in, but after thinking it over again and wasting tens of thousands of words, I came to the conclusion: Shizuo is not suitable It's not that it is not strong, on the contrary, Shizuo is too strong. If we follow the intensity of the original work, which takes a few breaths and a few seconds to start and stop, basically no one in the Hunter World can resist it. Even if he is as strong as the Ant King, he can be killed once the protagonist's physical fitness is improved. Even, only a tiny wound is needed to kill the ant king through non-stop attacks. Nitro's extremely fast attack is also a joke in front of Shi Zhan. It's so buggy, really. The plot is designed with time and stop as the core. Unless it is a restricted map and extremely short plot, it can be fully used. Once the map expands, the unsolvable nature of Time Stop will be revealed. This is a fatal weakness for hunters who focus on upgrades. If it is daily life where the collision of characters is the main focus, it is feasible, but the existence of pauses in the daily life plot is even more redundant. No solution. At least as far as my ability is concerned, the ability to stop is unsolvable. Strong. But it's too easy for the plot to collapse. Adding restrictions will greatly reduce the fun, which will make readers unhappy and the author will be constrained in writing.

The combat power is very annoying, and then it's really hard to watch when it's mixed up with Cajin in the opening scene. The length of Kajin Empire exposes Togashi's irresponsibility in my opinion. When reading novels in comics, he could just write some settings and draw a few pictures to make money.

Some readers mentioned the problem of why they stop shooting from time to time The reason is very simple. In the seventh part of JOJO, Diego tried to stop shooting from time to time, but the gun misfired, so he definitely couldn't fire from time to time But there are other things that are not clearly stated whether it can be done, such as whether it is okay to throw away the bullet. , I think it is possible. This involves the issue of why telekinesis users consume telekinetic bombs after throwing them. The explanation will be given in the text In fact, real-time stopping itself is quite contrary to physics. If Araki hadn't explicitly mentioned that you can't shoot, I would think this kind of thing doesn't matter.

It feels like the world is too demanding and not as good as the Crimson King in a Wheelchair

I can understand the restriction that the author placed on the protagonist's long CD. After all, according to the settings of a few breaths in the original book (estimated to be only five or six seconds), in Hunter, as long as the protagonist keeps up a little, no one else except some monsters can resist. Even the time stop given by Araki in the original work is very restrictive. For example, the strong mobility ability of the Platinum Stand is cut off, and the time stop time is forcibly weakened.

I took a look at it today, and it was the first time I saw that I didn't awaken my nen ability myself, but had to be taught by others. It stands to reason that people who know the existence of nen and have talent can easily develop it, but those who don't know that they can develop it are even more monster-like geniuses. However, this doesn't mean that others can teach them. I mainly came to see Jojo. I wonder if the main character can have a Jojo style of painting. That is, he speaks exaggeratedly, has a wonderful metaphor, and has a handsome posture. No matter what situation he faces, he can solve it invincibly in the end. Yes, I just want to see that man, that invincible man. That invincible man would not behave like this after Nitro noticed that the protagonist had special abilities. If it were him, he would probably scratch the brim of his hat and say, "Hey, hey, hey, he's really a troublesome old man!" The unknown ability of the substitute is indeed scary, but so what if it is known. The invincible man will only say, it seems that we are similar substitutes! Jotaro didn't know how to use a substitute at first, but his courage grew through battles again and again. He was never afraid, no matter how strong Dio became in the future, he would keep up and get stronger. If the main character is in the Jojo style, I feel fine as long as I feel temporarily cheated. If I am beaten to a residual health during the battle, I will say one sentence. The war song of mankind is the war song of courage. Walking on the road of justice is the only way to break fate. World, let time pause. One second has passed, three seconds have passed, I have reached the limit, but now I will cross the limit. Five seconds have passed, I am in front of you. 5.2 Seconds have passed and you are dead. At this moment, time resumes its flow.

It is said that the protagonist wants to develop the stand-in ability of weather forecast. Then you already own the world, and weather forecast is redundant. It is better to develop and strengthen your ability to use the time-stop mechanism. For example, to develop fast mobility, it is best to use air dance. This increases the range of movement and attack you can make during a stop. If the enemy attacks from a range, you stop for 5 seconds and run 200 meters. Now you can fly 1,000 meters. Does this increase your ability to attack and evade during a stop? For example, the Turtle Style Qigong can be used as a killer in normal times, and when it stops, it is an unavoidable attack. You can also develop Sun Fist, Qi Yuan Slash, and Kaio Fist. These Dragon Ball-type abilities are even more powerful and are far more suitable for you than weather forecasts. To put it bluntly, weather forecast requires a lot of detailed combat settings, and is far less powerful than the simple and crude ones from the Dragon Ball series. Your Dia's brain is not that good, and you still have such a wheelchair mechanism and a world avatar with powerful values. Why do you need to develop such a complicated ability as weather forecast?

To be honest, it would be better for the author not to add props from the JoJo world. Unless they are exclusive to the protagonist, there is no need for a stand-in battle, right? The hunter's battle of wits is hard enough to imagine. Can the author of Hojo write that feeling?

I'm very curious about why time can also stop. Instead of writing about Platinum Star, this book should write about the world... Obviously the world has lost... 😅 I'm even more curious about why it doesn't write about weather forecast, gold experience, Crazy Diamond... Well, forget about Crimson King... 😜 To create a self-healing idea, Crazy Diamond can cause more trouble than time stopping... 😁 Speaking of which, the Hunter's Thief Tips also go well with the substitute White Snake... 😏

This setting is really difficult to write. It is really not difficult to kill someone in the Hunter World without talking about technology. It means cultivating dead soldiers, customizing oaths and restrictions, and even chanting curses to kill you after death. You can't stand it. You can withstand one or two. With the ability to eliminate ten or eight, you can block ten or eight. But according to the size of v5, you can definitely build a cursed army. The protagonist's ability is very buggy in frontal combat, but it's not that difficult to kill him. Not to mention that there are things like wishing machines. I don't say if there are buggier creatures in the Dark Continent. But there are definitely a lot of monsters with similar mechanisms. A reckless man like the Ant King who is purely numerical is not dangerous. He has no competitiveness in the Dark Continent.

I remember a very good point of the author, even if the avatar is set to be invisible to those with telekinesis, some authors like to set the avatar to be exposed to non-stand users, and I don't know why.

I don't want to read about romance, but I'm still reading free chapters. Why do I always want to have a harem? It affects the reading experience so much🥴

In fact, the protagonist Dia's ability development is also wrong. On the surface, he is a person who releases abilities of the special type. In fact, he is a special type, with a super powerful three-type ability with 100% development rate. The most suitable development method for him is to fight hard, with faster reaction speed, stronger output, and longer attack distance. To put it bluntly, it's just like Dragon Ball. Turtle style qigong plus flying, when you are not sure, you will make waves. If you can't release the wave, use Kaioken to increase the size of the wave. The protagonist's mind beast abilities seem complex and diverse. But in fact it only compensates for the lower limit, but does not increase the upper limit. To put it bluntly, enemies that cannot be defeated by stopping time cannot be defeated by your telekinesis ability. Now the main output is still killed by the world time stop mechanism. In addition, various characteristics of corrugation are used. The development of mental abilities is actually of little use.

The writing is good and can be food for others. I personally don't like it very much, I respect the original work too much. The plot is too dense. Whether it's the original character or the oath, I'm too respectful.​ ​ Personally, I don't like dogmatism.

I still hope that the author won't make Nitro too strong, and there won't be any inexplicable interruptions or the like.

Will the heroine be Qi Duo? 😭 I think the author's portrayal of Qi Duo is very interesting, and it feels good to have someone to accompany the protagonist on his journey as a hunter.

I don't want to say more about anything else. The only thing I can say is that the author's ability is really fake. What the hell is it to release a telekinesis beast that is connected to the clouds? How can it make rain if it is released? The telepathy beast is really used as a wish-making machine. I can only say that at least you need to understand your telekinesis ability.

The evaluation is a fairy grass level full-time hunter fanfic. Come on, the author, subscribe and support it.

Don't watch any hunter with multiple abilities. The hunter has no fighting essence and relies on the mechanical deity with multiple abilities.

The pace is getting faster, and it's fun without stressing out the combat power.

The author is a master if he stabilizes it three times a day, so hurry up and code.

Is there a female protagonist? Single and more than nothing? If there are multiple heroines, how many? Good-hearted people have a safe life

Very pretty. Just updates slowly. . . It's hard to collect the chapters. It was gone all of a sudden.

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It's easier to write the Dark Continent chapter when you feel that you can use any imagination. You can use some monsters from One Piece and other anime. Writing according to the plot feels a bit restrictive for the author. When you look at it, the protagonist's abilities are not that supermodel! Especially the weather forecast! No matter how great your ability is, you still need to use mind energy. If the mind energy is gone, it won't work. Come on and update. I feel like the author has liberated your mind, as long as you don't jump too much. Logic is very important. The most important thing about telekinesis is not its ability. Oaths and restrictions are the most important, especially restrictions. The equivalent exchange in Alchemist is the same in nature. The previous ability of Dark Continent was indeed too suppressive to the surroundings, and the combat power was too explosive.

Single or multiple, does the ability only have time to stop, has the Ant King been defeated, has the Phantom Troupe been killed?

Added it to the bookshelf before it was put on the shelf. I finished it in one go. It's so cool 😍

I changed the title of the book 😁 No wonder I thought I had read it