Travel Through Mortals to Cultivate Immortality in a Low-Key Manner

Dian Niang is becoming more and more promiscuous. It is really a recommendation from a dead Taoist friend but not a poor Taoist, allowing readers to try the poison themselves.

This book has become obsolete, and I have been reading it. It's been taken off the shelves. It's been taken off the shelves.

Your sword skills are perfect, your alchemy skills are perfect, and your fireball skills are perfect, but you still have one AFK position left. Can you practice Qing Kung Fu or horizontal Kung Fu without AFK? He said he looked down on mortal skills, just waiting to become an immortal, and then a brainless little boss who was on the third level in the early stage was demonically changed to the seventh level of Qi training. You lay in wait for so long, and then you went up with an instant fireball, and you were stabbed by someone else's flying sword that turned back halfway. As long as you cherish your own life, you won't be able to hang up Qinggong and exercise. Then the inner drama before being stabbed into coma is crazy and sensational. It's too embarrassing. How can a golden finger like you, who has been cultivating without bottlenecks, be made like this by the protagonist? Can you really survive in the real world of immortality without any brains? It's really poisonous in waves. It was the same in the early stage. You believed Dr. Mo when he pretended to beg for mercy. How could Zhang Tie not see you because you were so kind? You turned a living person into a puppet and pretended to put down the butcher's knife, but you still injured him. Do you believe that he became a Buddha immediately? He boasts that Han Li is influenced by your moralistic spirit. If you have a certain moralistic spirit, you will not learn other things when you are idle. You will pretend to be a masked man and threaten the leader or other sects. Use a fireball technique to make them surrender their most powerful Qinggong and horizontal exercises. You just hang around and waste time. Then you are stabbed by the magic dwarf. I can't stand the embarrassment and sensationalism. I just read Chapter 33. It's almost on the shelves. Why are people willing to subscribe?

How can I put it this way? I feel like the protagonist is so annoying. He is obviously weak as hell, but he still looks down on martial arts. Moreover, I feel that the protagonist is very useless. In terms of martial arts, martial arts, and alchemy skills, the protagonist can hang up on anything that can be hung up. Then the question arises, what is the protagonist doing in his spare time? The protagonist has done nothing. It may be a description problem. If you write it, the protagonist has tried hard and found that he can't beat the game and chooses to lie down. This is the most acceptable. However, the protagonist has no operations and only relies on the idle bar. Then the problem comes. Putting a pig on it is not necessarily worse than the protagonist. You said that you can make friends, pick up girls, drink, or check out the terrain in your spare time. Which one is not allowed? Just tell me directly. Three months have passed, and Han Zhu has done nothing except hanging up on the AFK bar. What a fool you are!

The book is called Low-key Cultivation of Immortality. As a result, I always wanted to pretend to be cool and slap in the face, which is completely unsuitable for ordinary people's style of painting. I suspect that the author has never watched Mortal Cultivation to Immortality, so he came here just because of the popularity of Mortal anime.

Until Chapter 9, the protagonist is dishonest and only wants to gain benefits. At the beginning, he is thinking about Han Li's Heavenly Palm Bottle, and then he is inexplicably disdainful of the people who come with him when he enters the Mountain Gate. As soon as he enters the Qixuan Gate, he can't wait to trick Han Li into obtaining immortality cultivation techniques. He only thinks about himself. This is not wrong, but it is written in such a disgusting way, so I'm sorry.

I hope I can write Han Li better. The previous one I read about his good friend Zhang Tie felt like the main character was written like a fool and was played around by him. When I read that book, I was speechless. In the original novel, Han Li was very obscene and underdeveloped, and he knew how to be tolerant. Damn, in the novel about him, it felt like the Korean language was written in such a silly way that he didn't understand anything. It was written as if he was joking. I hope this book can be read.

This author has never read a mortal novel. He has to change everything randomly. The thirteenth level of Qi training is changed to the ninth level. The Heaven Palm Vase still drips blood to identify its master and receives it in the Dantian? Do you like making random changes so much? Can't you just write an original novel?

In Chapter 18, the protagonist dies from a poisonous attack. This is not a matter of experience, but of IQ.

I like to watch porn, thinking I can survive some addiction. However, Wanwan did not expect that the protagonist would lick Han Li and also set up Han Li's future body to kill the protagonist. I have never survived this poison 😰😰😰😰

This author is poisonous. He wrote a fanfic without even reading the original work. He killed Doctor Mo without even writing about Yu Zitong's soul. There are a lot of bugs. The protagonist also likes to show off. He is not low-key at all. Let's go to work and stop writing novels.

As a fan fiction, the second setting is acceptable, but adding too much of your own stuff and changing the settings of the original show is a bit disgusting. The bottle can be dripped with blood to identify its owner and be stored in the body; Han Li did not get the bottle, and he reached the peak of the third level of Qi training in one year; Doctor Mo seized Han Li in advance, and the protagonist did not attack him secretly, but also shouted, let him go, I will spare your life... And then forcibly poisoned him; Master Jin Guang A minion with three or four levels of Qi training was changed to seven levels of Qi training, imposing difficulty... What's ridiculous is that the protagonist (who has eight levels of Qi training, perfect fire bomb skills, and almost perfect sword skills of killing immortals) was attacked by a backhand during the battle with him, and almost died... I have to say, it's really amazing. Other fan fictions are as enjoyable as they come, trying to make up for the regrets as much as possible, but this book ends up being suppressed (Goldfinger is awesome). I know that creation is not easy, and the reason for giving a second design to a fan is out of my own views and love for it. However, I sincerely hope that the author will consider the above issues and avoid similar problems when writing this fanfic in the future. I hope the more I write, the better it will be and become a hit. …… I have seen it on the shelves so far, and there is no problem with the plot. Worth a look.

I saw that this book had 250 monthly votes, and I didn't want to vote. Just keep this number of votes, unless the author breaks the update

I thought I was the only one who was so disgusted that I secretly read the comments. It turns out that you have also been fed the golden crap... And I instantly felt relieved.

The author should be a newcomer, and his writing skills need to be improved. The character setting of the protagonist is not likable, and there are too many inner dramas. I hope the writing will get better and better!

Change the word low-key! I don't know where I am low-key from beginning to end.

Has the author read novels before? Anyone who has read novels for a long time should know that when fighting, don't be too pushy, don't talk so much, don't give your opponent time to react, and just kill him as soon as he comes up. But the protagonist in your book talks too much and makes too many wasteful moves during the fight. When fighting with Doctor Mo, he even reminds you aloud. Isn't that stupid?

The protagonist is Han Li's licking dog and Han Li's nanny. You have to say that you have a deep relationship with Han Li since you were young, and you can barely explain the principle of being a dog-licking nanny. But a protagonist who knew the plot and traveled through time and space licked Han Li like this, talking about changing Han Li's character while protecting him and licking him in every possible way. It's basically the idea of ​​being both important and independent Where does the deep feeling come from? Huang Fenggu hasn't seen him for a year, but he died directly for Han Li for 12 years. The concept of this book is good, but the author is not low-key. You are so high-profile during the Qi training stage The plug-in is good, but the protagonist is too useless. As a time traveler, you clearly know Han Li's achievements after that, so let him develop on his own, hide and hang up, and when you have the strength, you can look for opportunities to find treasures, and then help Han Li during several critical periods of time. This way you can write fan content as well as original plots. You work as a nanny and a dog licker all day long, and you still find excuses for yourself. If you continue to write like this, your future will be worrying. I hope the author's grades will get better and better.

I very much suspect that the author has not read the original work, but only read some fan fiction, or that the fan fiction has not been read much. The settings of the original work have been changed a lot, but I don't care if you are a fan fiction, but ha, to be low-key, to exaggerate, I don't see any low-key aspects of the protagonist. And if you want to write about character improvement, you can't write in such a way that you are smart. You obviously have bombs in your hand, but you let a person who has a single card in his hand and it is not a straight almost win.

Let's put aside whether the plot is good or not, everyone has their own preferences for carrots and vegetables. , But please read the original work first before writing a fanfic. . .

Why do I feel that this person's mentality is really extremely selfish? In order to familiarize myself with the plot, all kinds of bottomless operations, saying kind words, but not taking human life seriously in action, after reading this novel, I always feel that there are all kinds of conflicts and contradictions, which is really awkward. Either it is evil to the end, or it is kind, and sometimes it is kind and sometimes it is cruel.

The protagonist is so stupid, I'll comment after watching it

The writing is good. Reading your book makes me feel like I was chasing mortals back in the day. Can you update it more? I will give you the recommended monthly pass.

Come on, it's best if you can update hundreds of times a day🤓🤓

Good book, but I just can't get enough of it, update soon

The author's writing skills have improved recently and he hopes to continue improving. There are too few good ones written by mortals nowadays. I hope the ones written in the future will get better and better, and don't let us down.

It's really rubbish. It has no system and is no different from rubbish. I didn't even read the original work carefully. I even guessed and lied about it.

I haven't finished reading Chapter 3 to comment. To be honest, the bottom line of this platform is too low. Can this writing be put on the shelves? The first is the issue of setting. The setting is a person who has no survival experience and does not have rich life experience. It is set that when you become an adult, your parents divorce and you live alone. You rely on your parents' money to study through college. In college, you are withdrawn and have no friends. I'm afraid I haven't been in love either. My parents divorced when I was eighteen years old, and my personality is withdrawn. This shows that the family was not harmonious in the previous years or even more than ten years, and my personality was developed since childhood. After graduation, I make money by playing games. I stay at home playing games all day and go out once a month. Then, after time travel, there was a lot of inner drama. This is very anti-setting. Thinking too much, and: very stupid! Whether a newbie in life can survive in this cruel world of cultivating immortals? Really, if there is no golden finger, he will not be able to survive the first time he meets a cultivator. I only speak for myself, I don't want to see the protagonist in such a setting. Besides, I'm not here to see Goldfinger.

Whether it is well written or not is another matter. I just feel that the author is not familiar with the original work enough.