King of Pirates Snake General

Author, I'd like to share my little opinion. The book started out well, but after more than ten chapters, it became less and less exciting. In recent days, I didn't even want to open it. I personally think that there are too many descriptions of minor characters, and the protagonist is dispensable in the chapters. It focuses too much on the description of the powerful territory. The protagonist's fruitful abilities and domineering are almost lightly mentioned, and he stayed on an unimportant map for too long. In the world of One Piece, more emphasis is placed on one's own strength, and power can be developed, but I don't think too much description is needed in the early stage. This is my own opinion. Does anyone have any better ideas?

What the hell? How many chapters have it been? The protagonist is actually a snake fruit, and the form of the phantom beast species has not been revealed. Are you planning to hide it until the finale?

Apepp, also translated as Apophis, is a god in ancient Egyptian mythology. He is considered the embodiment of destruction, chaos, and darkness. He is also the twin brother and mortal enemy of the sun god Ra. He wants the world to be plunged into eternal darkness. Together with the Nordic Jormungandr, the Indian Shesha, and the Chinese Candle Dragon, it is also known as one of the four sacred snakes. It is a giant snake that hunts the sun!

Alas, there is a devil fruit hidden in it, which really persuades him to retreat. . .

I am really speechless, this novel makes readers feel confused while reading it.

Apep aka Apophis was the brother of the sun god Ra. Luffy is now the sun god Nika. The author is the brother who arranged for Luffy to fight against him.

Renren Fruit, Legendary Species, Snake Form

When I saw the title, I thought it was the King Snake in Dragon Rider

It feels a bit delayed. As a navy, I have been living in the same country. When can I go to the navy headquarters?

I thought it was this king of snakes

After reading dozens of chapters, I said that the protagonist is just an ordinary fruit, an ancient species, or a fantasy beast species with no special abilities, and the plot is too weak.

Brother, I watched some free ones and felt that the plot was a bit strange. Then the Devil Fruit has come out and you have turned into a human-animal form. You have not yet determined what your abilities are. According to the setting of One Piece, the first form, the basic form of the animal system is the big snake🐍. You can only transform into a snake and defend against basic attacks. The second form is the various skills of the snake. Ability, such as Kaido breathing fire and so on, and Yanyun. The third is that the human-animal form needs to be awakened and transformed into a huge snake. For example, Kaido's dragon form is as big as Kaido. To become bigger is a skill that needs to be awakened and evolved. Of course, what kind of form and skill evolution it takes depends on Noh's imagination. Generally speaking, I think the awakening of a big snake is usually a dragon or a dragon🐉

A good book, a serious One Piece novel. It's not the kind that's very enjoyable and you can't stop reading it halfway through. If you write slowly at this pace, you may gain many fans in one book. As long as it doesn't collapse, this book can be compared with those early Ice Dragon Legend and Thunder God Arrival, and it can almost be regarded as the God of One Piece book! Come on!

They are all snake-players, and they match the empress well.

Will this king snake finally come?

The writing is not picky, but the plot feels a bit bland and I always feel like something is missing.

Why isn't anyone commenting? I've read dozens of chapters and it's very well written!

This book will be a hit! Come on!

Add some finesse

I feel like I should write about the Three Kingdoms and leave it to the battle of wits and courage among pirates.

Can the author provide a picture for the main character?

Hal and Akainu's compatibility is so bad that they can't really fight with Akainu, right? Are you sure they won't fight?

Click in, exit, slip away

The death of the heroine is a bit sad...

Snake Fruit-Phantom Beast Species-Jörmungandr?