The Legacy of the Supreme Dao

To be honest, I don't understand the protagonist. What does the fact that the Dong family's medicine shop is about to go bankrupt have to do with the protagonist? Why is he so concerned about it? The protagonist is just an employee, yet he's worrying about his boss and taking so many risks to help him kill people. The key is that the owner of the medicine shop doesn't even know. I don't understand the point of sucking up to someone like this.

The most important thing in the "Mortal Journey" series isn't just about surviving; it's about the gradual transformation from an ordinary person to an immortal. Besides strength, there should also be a gradual change in mindset. If you can't win and only resort to hiding when in danger, then even Han Laomo wasn't originally an old demon. He started as a seasoned old demon, or a petty thief. How pathetic must the original world of ordinary people who transmigrate from there have been!

The dungeon design is somewhat novel, but the protagonist is too naive; it feels like he's just playing a game. I wonder when he'll truly realize he's in a world of cultivation.

It's alright. Don't be too picky; not every cultivation novel can be like "A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality" or "The Legend of Haoyu Zhenxian." This one is alright; veteran readers can attest to its readability. The cheat ability is a bit different.

This plot is truly disgusting. The protagonist had just started working for the Dong family's medicine shop when it was being suppressed by other medicine shops using business tactics—and remember, it was business tactics, not murder for profit—and then the protagonist went and killed them. The main point is, the protagonist was just an employee, and he didn't even have a relationship with the boss when he transmigrated. I don't understand why this happened.

The protagonist's cheat ability is so good, even a pig can fly, while the main character is like a complete novice, his mindset remains unchanged, which is just speechless.

I need a dozen employees like the protagonist. Haha, I guess they have no business rivals left. All they need is a bone 🦴... No, not even a bone, they'll be treated like slaves, hahaha.

I can't understand the point of the protagonist's adventures in those dungeons. He practices swordsmanship and killing techniques there, but back in reality, he's afraid of everything and lacks the ambition to seek riches through danger. He even thinks about reporting someone fishing—did he live two lives like a pig? I don't know what kind of protagonist the author is trying to create. And those random dungeons, even one for practicing calligraphy, are just incomprehensible.

Does the author have some misunderstanding about Daoist alchemy? How could the word "Dao" not include techniques? Once you know it, you know it! Ha, just a puppet of the system.

I couldn't stand watching that outer disciple give the protagonist a poison pill; he died from the poison.