This Jinyiwei Is Obviously Super Strong, but He Strokes Too Much

After reading more than 400 chapters, I still feel like I can't stand it anymore! The author's writing style is very good, but the protagonist he created is very different from my three views! Seeing it now, I feel that the protagonist is a demon who plays with people's hearts! In his eyes, there is no good or evil. Others are just pawns or consumables, with only purpose and no right or wrong! This is not the kind of martial arts I like. It has no blood and passion, and does not care about justice and evil... The supporting character who originally had a bottom line and conscience fell into a desperate situation and collapsed under the manipulation of the protagonist! Reading this novel is really depressing, and the more I read, the more depressing it becomes! I still hope to read a sunny martial arts novel, a humane world, even if it does not conform to reality! My heart is pursuing light after all!

This book is considered unique among martial arts. The first hundred chapters have almost been written about what kind of person the protagonist is, so it's no wonder that almost no one has read this book.

I don't feel anything about the writing style, it just feels like running water with no highlights. At one point, the protagonist is a cold-blooded animal.

How can I put it this way? I don't have much education. It's just because I can support myself financially after going to college to support genuine products. This is the first novel that I have read seriously in almost four years since I was a sophomore in high school. The ups and downs of the early stage of the story gave me a different kind of excitement, but the family chapter and the ending ended in an anticlimactic manner. It felt like the author was hastily finishing the novel as if he was rushing to meet a deadline, which made me feel that it was a pity that it was still unfinished. What you're doing is worse than being a eunuch! ! ! So angry! ! !

To be honest, this kind of pure chaos evil novel is almost impossible to see nowadays. Just by looking at the title, I thought it was a historical comedy. It is not easy for the author to write like this. I hope I can stick to it.

Yan'er is really heartbreaking. The oppression of women in the old society was heavy. In the context of romantic martial arts, there was endless darkness and a hell where the oppressed had nowhere to cry out.

This is already better than 80% of the novels with similar names It has a certain depth, but the expansion and entry points are a bit stiff in some places. The ambush pen can be slightly released to make the reversal more natural. Of course, this kind of traditional martial arts may not be so popular, and the depth of the content will dissuade a lot of novices, but I am very optimistic about this author. If some shortcomings are made up and ignored, this book is definitely a good work worth reading, so we can have high expectations for the author. Sooner or later, this author will be able to write something different from ordinary works.

Just see the current plot. I thought it was very interesting. If the name were changed, the main character Gou was searching for the password to immortality and returning to modern times. That would be exciting and meaningful. It's a pity that a small flaw has turned the pearl into dust.

Let me tell you something, except for the unorthodox title of this book, the content of this book, from the writing to the plot and even the title, is a complete mess.

I've basically finished reading all the orders. In the spirit of supporting the author and talking about his thoughts~ Here is a guide for new book lovers and those who are just trying it. The synopsis of the story is that the male protagonist breaks the ceiling of force. While ensuring that he does not work too hard, he manipulates, divides, suppresses and kills the world with a playful mentality. Many people criticized Xiao Lu's "insidious" behavior, but ignored his position. In essence, the main contradiction faced by Jin Yiwei in this book is the natural conflict formed by the collusion between the aristocratic family and the "charlatans", the official group and the imperial power. The Jinyiwei is the sword held by the emperor in the multi-party game; our male protagonist, the leader of life + the person who nurtures him, is the most loyal to the emperor's leader of the Jinyiwei. From this perspective, what the protagonist does is relatively reasonable. Another: In most feudal societies, "jianghu people" are not engaged in production, form cliques, and are disobedient to discipline. If you want me to give you a definition: people who fill the gap in the management of violent institutions in the absence of unified power. They have their own rules, and at the same time they are obedient to unified management, and are naturally opposed to imperial power and centralized power. This is the image of Jianghu sects, aristocratic families and "Xia" in this book, rather than "the great Xia who serves the country and the people" in traditional novels, which treats imperial power and government power as an imaginary background. What the protagonist brings to readers is a vision that is superior to traditional martial arts novels: My official status is destined to be untouchable in the world; No one can match my strength; My backstage is the best in the world; These determine the protagonist's attitude towards the good and evil factions in the world: "I am a swordsman and you are a fish and meat", and he does have this strength. Then here comes the point: How can I kill these flies, complete the above tasks, and have some fun at the same time without getting tired? This is where most readers' expectations for the plot diverge: Are they going to follow the traditional "princes, princes, generals, and generals are willing to be kind" route to becoming king? Or is it the pretentious line of "I am the greatest under the emperor"? Or is it to display martial arts among the people and take the route of "smiling proudly"? After understanding the protagonist's life path, it is not difficult to find that none of the above seems to suit the protagonist's wishes: About rebellion: The head of the family has a lot of help. Even when he chose the most deviant path, he still stood behind him and tried his best to point out a good path. The leader of Jinyiwei not only taught him martial arts, but also raised him. Rebellion usually requires a motive, but the protagonist has no motive at all: as a vested interest of the imperial power faction, the people he cares about are because the current emperor is at the top of the country, and rebellion will not give them better things, but will lead to death; secondly, the male protagonist's lazy personality will not want to rebel. About the route of powerful ministers: the male protagonist is too lazy to die Finally, the road of rivers and lakes: the male protagonist once had a dream of rivers and lakes, but he finally discovered that rivers and lakes are just muddy ponds. No matter how upright the heroes are, they are just a bunch of people who have nothing to do with production, who absorb the people's fat and anointing from the standpoint of "anti-government", and who live with the insects and bugs. And with his martial arts prowess and background as hard as diamond, does he really need to hang out with this gang of underworld? How can they be equal to themselves? After confirming that there are no three paths to take, the protagonist shows the most interesting path: The Fun Man (How can I happily kill the gangsters and let them bite the dog as much as possible?) Not only did I help the elders who care about me, but I also gained happiness (not By the way: The narrative writing in this book is excellent; The characters are not facially portrayed Characters with different temperaments will also meet when they meet) Produce some interesting chemical changes; Overall, I give 90/100 points It would be better if the villain could show more methods besides concealing clues and arranging hidden personnel. At present, it seems that the protagonist is more like a puzzle game. The author can pay more attention to this aspect. The above is a sharing of some thoughts on this book. I hope it can help book friends who want to see the analysis and evaluation of this book in the book review area

The article has no theme, overemphasizes the so-called game life, and feels like a corpse in the world.

I clicked on this book because it was recommended by the martial arts category. I found a treasure. Mr. Lu is really a role model who only allows state officials to set fires and does not allow people to light lamps. According to the routines of previous novels, Liang Benlang and Huangfu Jade Book are probably not dead in a short time or not at all. Even the old routine of the protagonist being both a teacher and a friend, even if he dies, it should be a big scene. In the end, none of them ended up well. When Chi Cangping appeared on the scene, I thought he would be a friend and enemy, but he turned out to be a tool man and a fun-loving person, and even became a clown on his own in the end. Compared with Lu Hanjiang, the protagonists in some novels that I read in the past advertised as villains were not on the same level at all.

It's not interesting, the minor characters are well created, but the protagonist is very cliched, with the scheming behind-the-scenes invincible flow, which is quite boring. Nowadays, the protagonists in novels are becoming more and more the same. They are nothing more than refined egoists with the attributes of a fun-loving person, which is quite boring. Now I start to like Guo Jing-style protagonists again, or characters like the first generation Spider-Man. After living in society for a long time, I want to read some fairy tales.

I've almost finished reading it, and I can't accept the protagonist's character. It sounds like he's acting under orders, but in reality he's killing innocent people 😂😂 But the author's writing is very good, and it's a rare good book. The protagonist has so many neuroses and secondary characters, mainly because when Huangpu and Shangluo become black, the protagonist is happy (describing something as blooming). It's a bit unacceptable. Anyway, the writing is very good.

Too bland and without passion. Don't say that it is not a fast food article and is not suitable for beginners to read. In today's fast-paced society, novels with no ups and downs in the plot are not exciting, the writing is not bright, and the character settings and dialogues are not distinctive. It is difficult to sell novels.

I couldn't stand it. The writing was obviously good and the framework was okay. I thought it would be a piece of cake at the very least, but it ended up being sprayed on me. If it had been written according to a routine, at least it would have established the main character, but in the end, there was not even a trace of pure evil or "love". After reading hundreds of chapters, the motivation was still inexplicable, and some people were trying to prevaricate it for fun. I don't know what happened later, but what I felt at the beginning was that one child read the basic thick and black science, then persuaded another child to skip class in the kindergarten to make a fool of someone, and then told me that the point was not to kill people, but to skip class.

This protagonist is neither a good guy nor a bad guy, he doesn't care about anything, he is a chaotic protagonist. After reading about ten chapters, there is no main line or goal, just dawdling. He said that he was the best in the world. In order to pretend to be a pig, he was afraid of all kinds of troubles. He didn't dare to care about anything and didn't dare to mess with anything. He betrayed his teammates, betrayed his subordinates, lied to people, ghosts and parents.

The author said it was an invincible article. After reading it for a while, I felt that it was not an invincible article. I exited and looked at the comments. Half of them said it was not an invincible article, and the other half said it was a happy article. Then let's call it a fake invincible novel. For example, a man ran up on the roadside and gave the protagonist a mouthful, and the protagonist watched happily. You may ask is this invincible? The protagonist was not dead or injured, and even received a slap in the face without breaking his skin. He was "invincible". You may be thinking about having fun? The protagonist thought it was interesting to be slapped, and felt very happy, which attracted its attention and "fun".

I hope that everyone who has a good protagonist will meet such a protagonist. I wish you can meet such a protagonist in your life.

This book is marked as invincible, which drives away readers who don't like invincible. As a result, the protagonist is weakened in the article every day. I can't do crossbows, I can't do bows in two chapters, and then I can't learn Qinggong. Is this deliberately disgusting? Whether you like Invincible or not, you feel uncomfortable watching it now. How about changing the settings of the protagonist and making him disabled, unable to do anything other than release his inner strength with high output.

There are all kinds of mysteries coming up, it's awesome👍

This protagonist is not a human being. He has no human feelings or human values, whether they are ordinary people or strong people. Even if it is a ferocious wild dog, if you pass by it several times, it may not bark at you. But the protagonist is not. No matter if you throw him a piece of leftover meat or kick him, he will bite you twice.

By the way, if you want to do bad things, you have to at least give the protagonist a reason. Either for power or profit. You can do it even for women, right? After watching it for a long time, I still didn't know why the protagonist became a royal guard and why he wanted to offend those people in the world. Are you full?

I have read Chapter 60 and specially subscribed to comment The feeling given to me by the protagonist right now is that today I will go to Shanghai to eat Lanzhou Ramen, tomorrow I will go to Shandong to eat Hot Dry Noodles, and the day after tomorrow I will go to Guangzhou to eat Chongqing Malatang. It's messy, very messy, I don't know what I want to express, but it does things that ordinary people can't do. One idea comes out and one comes out, and readers are confused. They are all Riddlers, but I don't care about their riddles at all, because I can't stand it anymore. Anyway, no matter what the secret is, it can't attract me. I have no desire to read anymore. Even if you give me a little bit of positive feedback, I can continue reading. I won't say any more. I wish the author will write better and better. Maybe this is not my cup of tea.

It's a good novel, but it doesn't look like a martial arts novel. Moreover, the male protagonist does not behave like a happy person. When you bring in the male protagonist, you will find that the male protagonist is cold-blooded and ruthless, and his emotions seem to be fake. More like a perverted serial killer in a detective drama (compared to those detective dramas where the portrayal is more accurate...

After reading more than 100 chapters, I probably understood a little bit. After the hero's dream was shattered, what the protagonist wanted to do was to only look at the results and not the process of heroic actions. In addition, he was already "invincible", so some "informal details" were added to the results to satisfy his bad taste of playing with chess pieces and watching the show. The so-called "the evildoer was punished in the end, I just added some color." The early plot is really well written, and the behind-the-scenes text with smooth logic and careful layout is so comfortable to read. But it's really uncomfortable to see the protagonist's "blackening" of the two girls, and it was done deliberately... As written in the article, Huangfu or Shangluo are rare pure whites in the world, and the ending of falling into the hands of a pure black like the protagonist is self-evident... Have you seen what happened to the two girls in the latest plot of the boss? (´･_･`) In the beginning, the behind-the-scenes layout of the pure protagonist plus some humorous scenes was very good, but the occasional humorous scenes later could no longer be substituted for laughter. The protagonist's behavior and the funny part formed a strong sense of separation, which made the more relaxed the plot more uncomfortable to watch... In Bandit, the protagonist uses tricks to kill people and kills his heart while talking and laughing, and then chats and laughs with Shangluo heartlessly... I can't stand it anymore, so I posted a message to ask. It's really painful to find a good book that you can't accept, and you're going to be short of books again (┳Д┳)

I just read a dozen chapters, can anyone explain what the plot is like? The protagonist, as a dignified Qianhu, was attacked outside. Many of the officials around him died, but he went to Huashan as if nothing happened? A thousand households died on Mount Huashan. What do Jin Yiwei mean? The fifth rank is on the same level as a county guard, or in other words, Jinyiwei is more than any other sect but smaller than the sum of Jianghu. Qianhu is equal to the elder of a first-rate sect, or the leader of a second-rate sect. A good guy was attacked and died in the main hall of Huashan. How can it be considered without turning Huashan upside down?

The author can just write according to his own ideas! I think the plot at this stage is still very good. It's good that the character of the protagonist is acquired. I think it's more comfortable to get used to being the mastermind behind the scenes. After all, according to the character of the protagonist, the last one who knows his true face should be the junior sister (the princess is not counted, that is the big boss). However, the senior sister is unfortunately dead. Now there are the disguise technique and the minor Wuxiang Kung, which basically makes the shady story infinite. As for many people complaining about not saving their colleagues, there are two reasons. First, because of his experience (no spoilers, you can read more than 200 chapters about the protagonist's past), the protagonist does not do any "good things" that are not beneficial. Secondly, the dead colleague was not one of our own. The protagonist used Qin Yu's identity to test him when they first met. After discovering that he is not one of his own. Naturally, there is no need to save him (and it is written later that the imperial guards sent are not his direct subordinates) And in this book, the temple and the rivers and lakes are completely different styles of painting. There are many people in the rivers and lakes who are self-sacrificing and foolish enough to make people like them, but colleagues in the court are not life-or-death friends. How can it be so close? Finally, I look forward to the future plot. There is no doubt that there are two main lines now, one is immortality, and the other is the victory or defeat with the Crown Princess. However, the two lines have basically overlapped. After all, the secret of longevity is also related to the Crown Princess. The decisive battle between the two should come to the end The protagonist is very He rarely takes any action, but he is really strong. I found the showdown with the leader of the Beggar Clan extremely satisfying. I don't know much about his record, but it doesn't matter to me. The protagonist never likes to show off, and sometimes he is rewarded with someone else's name after killing someone. There may be some explanation, but it's just not written so I won't make any guesses. In short. This is a great book, the only problem is that the author is too lazy! It's ironclad that we update twice a day! 😡

Speaking of which, I have always liked reading the stories of various supporting characters in novels. One thing I like about this book is the beginning and end of the supporting characters. Hu Qianzhong is a character who appeared very early. When he first appeared, he felt like a clown, provoking Xiao Lu and then being knocked down with one move As characters from the Wuyue Sword Sect appeared one after another, Hu Qianzhong's image also became fuller. He, the great disciple of Hengshan, was more mature than the previous ones. There was nothing he could do about it, but compared with other disciples of the Five Sacred Mountains, he became even more powerful At the Five Sacred Mountains Conference, Hu Qianzhong showed his ruthless side when he broke the back. In order to slow down Jin Yiwei, he ran behind him directly. A group of people who were too slow were left to wait for death As the plot further unfolded, Hu Qianzhong became more vicious, sitting back and watching his mentor die, targeting Tianquan, killing fellow righteous men, and massacring Taishan Directly Incarnate as a villain, a hypocrite wearing a mask, From the perspective of others, there is no doubt that this is a bastard thing, but from the perspective of Wuyue Hengshan, it is difficult to say that he did anything wrong One thing to say, although Hu Qianzhong has almost no bottom line, what he did was to strengthen his sect, with almost no selfish desires And the highlight moment when he finally woke up is also embarrassing. Hu Qianzhong's death is more like a The irony of evil being rewarded After Hu Qianzhong's death, Lu Wen's performance in the latest chapter is simply unreadable. This young hero, who is well regarded by others, has no ability to resist in front of the Wudang Shaolin sects. He has no use except incompetence and rage The sentence written by the author through the voices of the major masters really makes me feel ridiculous and sad - what kind of virtue do you have in Wuyue now? Why should I offend the Qingcheng sect to support you? ……

Black-hearted, ruthless, cunning, and a little perverted, this is the protagonist. If you like villain protagonists, you can pay attention. The author can add some details, 😁