After Ten Years Undercover, I Became the Leader of the Five Sacred Mountains Alliance

Your introduction and the name of the protagonist are far inferior to Xiao Lu 😂, it smells like a novice's writing

After reading the introduction, I no longer have the desire to open and look at the table of contents.

Zuo Lengchan asked you, what the hell did you reply to Senior Brother Yue?

It's only now that I've written this article, and I don't even know what to say.

It's pretty good after reading it so far. I can't tell much yet, but it's just too little. The author should work hard! 😡

The name of the protagonist just put me off, hey, I'm in trouble The bullet point is a small print, hey

Xiaobai seems to be following the same path as Xiaolu, both of them are all-rounders and play important roles well, but there is an essential difference between the two. The relationship between Xiaolu and Shangluo Xiaoyuan is based on mutual honesty. Xiaolu will tell you clearly that I killed your father and plan to kill your whole family next. If you are unhappy, you can leave, and I have no objection to staying if you think you can. But Xiaobai is different. Xiaobai looks "cowardly" than Xiaolu, and he is more like an ordinary person. His method of holding Lan Fenghuang, Ren Yingying, and Linghu Chong back is all based on lies, but lies will be exposed one day. No matter how good the relationship between a group of people is now, when the truth is exposed in the future, how ruthlessly will they kill each other! Looking forward to the follow-up, I always feel that it is not easy to have a happy ending in this book, 😡😡😡

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The author can just cut it if he wants to, and forget about opening the next book. Wouldn't it be worse to keep dragging the data like this?

Let's change the name of the protagonist, Luo Xiaobai… I don't have the desire to continue reading if he's not a boy or a girl…

The quality is quite high, no worse than Xiaolu. When will it be released?

April 4, 2025, today's update: None!

Feng Qingyang's writing here is good. It's only fitting that the protagonist is arrogant. It's really outrageous to see Xiaoao licking his face when he saw Feng Qingyang through time.

I originally wanted to read it, but I saw that you didn't want to read it anymore, so I cut off the next one because it couldn't be done anymore, which made everyone feel uncomfortable.

If you can't write it, you can just continue writing Xiao Lu's follow-up. I think you can also write a lot of follow-up episodes.

Just like this eunuch? I have ordered all of Weiyang Flute. I have also ordered this one. I have ordered half of Xiaolu's book. I don't like the style at the end. Weiyang Flute was very painful to update and ended in a hurry. Although it is not too bad, you are like this with this book 😅

As title. The novel, like the protagonist, has no goal. Or maybe the protagonist's goal is to bring chaos to the world, and then the novel seems a bit chaotic, and I don't know what I want to write. A few suggestions. 1. If it is daily writing or travel writing, just deal with whatever you encounter. It is best if there are other people who often go with you. Writing alone will be very boring. 2. There must be a heroine with a harem (saint, Yue Lingshan, etc.), Otherwise it will be boring 3. It is best to increase the suspense and advance the plot by solving the suspense or achieving the goal. Now this problem is obvious, or there is no suspense in the writing, and there is no motivation to pursue it. 4. The characters of Linghu Chong Saint and other characters can be kept unchanged, and subversive arrangements can be made for their encounters. Most of the pen and ink must be placed on the protagonist. There is really no need to write too much about the personal experiences of Linghu Chong and Lin Pingzhi.

When did the two girls from Penglai get killed by the protagonist and kick me?

Whether you want to write or not, just say it if you don't want to.

Hello author, I really like Xiao Lu you wrote. I have read the two new books you wrote, but unfortunately the results are much worse than Xiao Lu I have an idea💡 The protagonist needs to kill the target with the following skills to obtain one of its most powerful techniques, talents, skills, etc. The completeness obtained is based on the trust level. The final The best thing is to automatically choose the strongest one. The protagonist needs to know the target's information and design it to trust him This story can be written very excitingly. It just so happens that the protagonist Xiao Lu is not a good person. This golden finger is very suitable for this kind of protagonist. I believe that the author's writing power will definitely make it very exciting. Each target protagonist can be described in detail, and the group portrait will fit more closely with the general environment Hope to adopt it

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Come, come, take a walk, talk about what you dream about? 😆😆

Like it very much! Still reading "Shang Chen's Sword Journey" is following a unique creative path: 1. Write fantasy and highlight the martial arts style. 2. The protagonist's status is humble, starting as a servant's son, but he reaches the top of the world. 3. There are thousands of roads to enlightenment, but the only way to achieve enlightenment is through business. 4. There are multiple levels of planes, but there are no settings for time travel, rebirth, or reincarnation. 5. Pay attention to suspense, reversal, unpredictable direction, combination of business and martial arts, and emphasis on power and strategy. 6. Pay attention to martial arts, but avoid endless detailed descriptions of fighting. 7. There is a cheat, but the protagonist never realizes it. 8. The female protagonist appears late, but she is extremely shining. There is no one male and multiple female characters. I hope book friends will criticize!

Did the author encounter something? Why isn't it updated?

I really like to watch it, but there are too few. I want to keep it up.