Revelation of the Road to Doom

First of all, I watched it on the recommendation of a friend. Let me tell you my own opinions first. First of all, the expression of your characters is not complete enough, and the relationship between them is not clear. Then I don't understand the appearance description and psychological description of the characters. I don't mean to say that your plot is really not for people to watch. There are so many foreshadowings. Is this suspense or science fiction? Secondly, in the apocalypse, people feel afraid, but I don't see fear in the protagonist. You need to work hard on character description, rather than just writing whatever comes to mind. You must understand the horror of the apocalypse. I recommend that you read more apocalyptic novels written by other people. There are some excellent points in your novel, but I still can't see the worldview. The protagonist is not invincible like other games at the beginning. I don't like to read cool stories. I hope you can write better and better