
Stars in Ming Dynasty
群星在大明
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 427k Words
- Genre
- Sci-Fi
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Time Travel
- Updated
- 3d ago
- Source
- Qidian
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133Monthly votes
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11.6kFans
192Chapters
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How Are Zerg Made?
Start with a Colossus Riding on the Face
No, Zhu Yuanzhang can counterattack Jackie Chan from a white body. After the protagonist has shown his unique individual strength and helpless group violence, facing this kind of dimensionality reduction attack, what Zhu wants is to compromise and join or stay away. With a head full of confrontation, can such a person build the Ming Dynasty?
Let the author take a look
I think you haven't figured out your positioning. Shouldn't you be the one to set the rules when dimensionality reduction hits? It should be that the protagonist develops normally and inadvertently kills these Confucians, local tyrants, evil gentry, and flower monks by kicking them to death on the side of the road.
Have you deliberately avoided a group?
What about plowing holes and sweeping holes? I do doubt your composition
Thoughts after reading
The plot of teasing the ancients is very blunt. What is the protagonist's purpose in teasing them? It might be better to develop directly from primitive society, and you can completely shape civilization according to your own ideas. The time in the early Ming Dynasty was not chosen well. The protagonist wants to dominate civilization. The current ruling class of the Ming Dynasty and the order they established will definitely be opposed to the protagonist. Now in the early stage, the protagonist is at a loss, and the communication with the ancients is embarrassing. 1. It states that Zhu Yuanzhang cannot be avoided in the early Ming Dynasty, and this era was dominated by him. Even if the protagonist now wants to play the game of king and minister, engage in immortal education, and finally usurp secretly, how do you write the end of Zhu Yuanzhang? Kill? Control? Or force him to obey orders by force? Extract personality to serve the insect swarm? If not handled well, it will be a piece of cake. Don't tell me that you want to drag him into space, then who is the protagonist of the story, Zhu Yuanzhang or Li Yang? 2. If you want to take drastic measures to gain points to promote the development of the Zerg, the protagonist will definitely confront the feudal dynasty. Cannibalized all the high-level officials of the Ming Dynasty to be put down. Then the description of them in the early stage is redundant and unnecessary. If you push it for too long, it will be disgusting. Stars is about watching space battles and the development of civilization. If you play with the indigenous people on the surface for too long, it will be disgusting. 3. If you want to write about going to space in ancient times, it is better to choose troubled times. The Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period, the end of Qin, the end of Han, the end of Sui... The protagonist nests in the corner of the corner to develop technology, recruit people, use the insect swarm to conquer the world, use technology to pretend to be gods and ghosts to win people's hearts, establish a new order, and gradually combine the development of the insect swarm with the development of the ancients and then rush into space. There are a lot of things to watch and enjoy. Troubled times basically have no constraints on the protagonist. Generally speaking, time is freely controllable in the world. Wouldn't it be better to describe any character creation during the period? 4. I have read the author's previous books, and I hope you can write better. 6 Recommended votes and 4 monthly passes have been given, which is considered my support.
We are all star players, so don't be so pretentious. What kind of woman are you writing about? Don't you know what you are?
We should just write the protagonist as someone with similar Gestalt ideology. It feels weird to write it as an individual.
Cannons hit mosquitoes and tortured Lao Zhu's family
Brief review after reading: This novel made me feel very awkward I just finished reading this novel, and the overall impression is a bit complicated, mainly from the aspects of character creation and plot advancement. 1. Character aspects 1. The protagonist's character design lacks a sense of excitement The protagonist has the dual powerful setting of "Time Stop + Star Zerg" at the beginning. He is in the background of the early Ming Dynasty and develops extremely fast (according to the time in the book, he can banish insects in about a month). But even so, the protagonist's acting style is very "diaosi", and he is procrastinating and not crisp enough. Although I also like YY-oriented content, when I substitute it, I don't want the protagonist to behave so mediocre, which will greatly reduce the overall enjoyment. Of course, part of his behavior can be understood as him exploring the system and developing his capabilities, but the results are still unfavorable. 2. The image of Zhu Yuanzhang has been dwarfed As the founding emperor of the last Han dynasty, Zhu Yuanzhang is portrayed in the book as a character who is prone to rage and is almost a clown. When the protagonist faces him, it's more like "teasing a bug", with a joking mentality. Although I understand that the feudal system will be overthrown and the imperial power will be eliminated in the follow-up, this approach makes the characters feel too thin. 2. Plot aspect 1. The emotional line is blunt and instrumental The plot of acquiring a daughter is suddenly inserted in the middle. Although I do not reject the harem setting, this section does not mean much in my opinion. At the most serious level, it may be intensifying the conflict with the Zhu family; at the most minor level, even if it is deleted, it will not affect the advancement of the main plot. Moreover, the images of these female characters are highly facialized, and they are more like "tool people" serving the protagonist. 2. The conflict handling with the Zhu family lacks tension The protagonist obviously has the power to change society, but he always adopts a "teasing" strategy in dealing with the Zhu family, with a slow pace and vague goals. Since we already have such power, it would be more straightforward to conduct a "people's trial" directly. The entire line does not look like a real revolution, nor does it have clear political opinions, but more like a dictatorship game played by the protagonist - under him, everyone is "equal", but the so-called equality is just turning everyone into a "human flesh research site." To be honest, after watching it, the protagonist said he entered shzy, but that's not true. It was just the live broadcast that Lao Zhu broke the feudal imperial power, and neither did fjzy. After all, the emperor is gone and the material level has been greatly improved, but what about the landlords inside? To be honest, this part was not written. Of course, the protagonist can support all mankind on his own. It feels like a fun drama about torture of Lao Zhu. There are some things the protagonist talks about about future science and using technology to show off. I like to read some novels that promote the progress of civilization, but here, because the technology of the stars is too high, there is no need for ordinary people to promote technology. The people in it are basically human flesh scientific research sites, and there is no independent plot. And to be honest, social thinking has not changed much. If you want to read it, you can read the free chapters. If you like it, you will continue reading it. If you don't like it, you will be persuaded to quit. I have read the author's Amoeba Zerg before, and I have read basically all the other books. To be honest, this book is not to my liking.
Writing about ancient times is quite boring. What about the promised giant ship sailing over the ancient people? How to fully describe the interaction between time-travelers and ancient people?
It's weird, I feel like I don't know what I want to write
If you ask me to say that the protagonist is raped, the People's League is still too authoritative.
Holding the stars, that's it? Use a cannon to play with mosquitoes
As with Zhu Yuanzhang, the Zhu family is like annoying bugs, just shoot them to death. Throughout the ages, everyone has ruled the dynasty. In the end, people have selfish motives for governing, so there is no need to pity them.
When writing this kind of article, you need to be objective and don't include personal information.
Good
Let's just take a look at it. There are a lot more starting points now💩. This book is okay.
Just describe the first few dozen pictures. You are already playing with the stars. You are also involved in the ancient dynasties on this land and are playing house. Just because you continue writing does not mean that you will have the patience. I followed the previous books. After reading the author's previous books, I found that they are only suitable for writing serious, uniform and macroscopic stories. Big background, civilized stories, cosmic technology, but this one only seems to involve emotions, psychology, characters, demeanor, weak writing, and a lot of space. There is a bit of psychological anticipation at the beginning. I really want to read it, and read it to see what happens later. I can't wait for the next book.
Explorer: You actually eat people! Cannibals: You don't eat but you kill so many people!
Chong Lian is the pinnacle, and Colossus is average. This is just a mindless novel. Lao Zhu's behavior is not worthy of his status. The other characters are also highly stereotyped. The author cannot write about people, and his understanding of history is also stereotyped. In ancient times, it was just technological backwardness, not stupidity.
It's all written about the stars
I've already written about Stars, so let's write about what Stars players should do.
Although Yan Ni succeeded in his temporary rebellion, Jianwen's descendants later regained the country.
In the state of Jianwen, the banner of Chongba entered the pass to put an end to the chaos and replaced Yanming to unify China again.
Comments section is very harmful
I have seen stars in groups. I came across this book when it was 140,000 words long. I just clicked in today. .
No, when you open a new book, why don't you mention it in the old book?
Is there a Shennong? Is it licking? Or should we get rid of Zhu Baba and start socialist construction on our own? Or do you want to be the emperor yourself?
It's true that the comment section is really harmful, I almost missed it. Feeling good now
I have an idea, what if the Warhammer Emperor time-traveled into the body of the Man in the Iron Mask, who was suspected to be Zhu Cixi, broke free from the shackles, returned to the Ming Dynasty, led the Ming Dynasty into the universe, and liberated the human races on other planets.
What a masterpiece😠😠😠
Mingfen is so outrageous that she raises her flag at every turn
I have been observing the historical circle for ten years, and I can only say that the more followers a character has, the faster the person's reputation changes. In the past, Yang Guang was touted as the emperor of the ages. The protagonist of a novel was dressed as Li Shimin's son. They belittled Li Shimin and praised Yang Guang, and finally made Li Shimin angry. As a result, Yang Guang became notorious within a few years, and Li Shimin's reputation became better. Qin Shihuang was once praised to the sky. Nowadays, you can see people criticizing him everywhere, including Wu Zetian and Emperor Xin. I think the Ming Dynasty is fast approaching. The more extreme fans there are, the more people will refute it. It's just that he is pure and pure, but the more dirt is dug up about Zhu Yuanzhang, he loves the people and loves Empress Ma. Even if you dig deeper, it's not right. There are also recent pseudo-historical theories, which can be said to be roasting the Ming Dynasty on the fire
Intelligent Brain Punishment If the brain-computer interface of corpus callosum communication matures, could it be used to execute or replace death sentences, prison sentences, fines, compensation, etc.? Victims, close relatives of victims, ordinary people who win prizes (those whose brains are not connected to the Internet are more common than those whose brains are connected to each other as prosthetic brains, those who are connected to each other are more common than those who are connected to their own replicant prosthetic body or cloned prosthetic brain or machine prosthetic brain, and those who have fewer prosthetic brains are more common than those who have more prosthetic brains), etc., May be required Strengthen three views, desensitize training, use mice, monkeys, chimpanzees, your own cloned fetuses, etc. To train and strengthen the opening; Prisoners, infringers who have not paid enough money, etc. May weaken the opening by falling asleep, anesthetized, disconnecting half of the brain, etc. When the brain is connected to the Internet; Can Ability to start with multiple brains awake and connected to anesthesia, disconnected half of the brain; Indefinite brain punishment, defined as execution or substitution of death penalty, is related to the definition of death; Different levels of punishment, compensation, computing power rental, free players of brain-connected online games, etc., Corresponding to different starting strengths , duration, etc.; The signals communicated by the corpus callosum may be analog signals or digital signals. Different people's brain signal encoding is said to be different. In addition to the human brain's computer may not be able to decode the signal, the human brain may have to decode the signal in person after undergoing training similar to reading pictures and learning language in preschool education.
Salt water bed (film, concentrated salt water, film, bracket, waterproof room), buoyancy mode with as little elasticity as possible
Existing technology space-time curvature observation, laser interference array
It should be sinking into the universe. If you don't go to the heavens, the heavens will come to you.