Everlasting Fairy

The writing of this woman (Li Xiu'e) makes people feel disgusted. I feel that the author wants to use her as the protagonist's human anchor, but the writing is disgusting.

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ Current Chapter 12? There are some parts that I don't understand, so I'm going to complain about it. Miaoyu, is she in the temple, next to the protagonist, or has she turned into a dialogue bead and is held by the protagonist? This point has always been very vague and has not been explained clearly. Then I will assume that she is in the temple. I really don't understand how the wonderful desires in the temple can be communicated with the protagonist outside the temple through beads?        ，， Not to mention, Miaoyu can also help the protagonist identify items through a contact bead. Can I say that this is how Miao Yu touches the items through the beads and then identifies the items? The author provides no explanation for this. So, the question comes back to this point. Why? With such a weak desire, he can casually contact the protagonist outside the temple through a bead, and even identify items through the bead's "spiritual thoughts". And the terrifying power who is countless times more powerful than her is still imprisoned in the temple? So, can you give me an explanation?

When I was browsing the list, I saw that the author had a platinum salary, and I couldn't sleep at night. I haven't seen such a good book in a long time

I accidentally discovered that it suits my taste. Although my level is not high and I don't have many votes, I still have support and recommendation votes. Don't dislike it.

I have been writing for a long time, and I have many things to say. The protagonist is obviously a monster like Gokailiu, so when will my sister-in-law die? I can't keep it in my body in the future. At the end of the dynasty, all the heroes dominate the world of Zhuolu. An ordinary mortal woman can show up once or twice in the early part of the book. The protagonist will not stay in one place for a long time. The two people you are writing now are in love with each other. What do you plan to do in the middle and later stages? Is it a passerby? Or do you directly use death to bring conflict to the protagonist and dramatize the plot?

The quarrels in the chapter are actually quite funny. This is a studio article with modular writing and assembly line production. There is no need to have questions or even quarrel with several of the modules. The advantage of studio writing is that the quality of things on the assembly line is somewhat high. The shortcomings are also obvious. They are dull and the same. There are traces of splicing of industrial production everywhere, and there is no aura. So don't expect too much from him.

Let the protagonist become a real God of War like Yang Jian.

After reading the table of contents, I can only say that the author wrote it carefully. There are many reasons for the lack of popularity, but women are a forbidden area. The female supporting character will kill her by herself, or it will be the food for the male protagonist to become a demon in the future. He must kill decisively and plan his supreme path. I will travel the world with only the sword in my hand during the long journey. There is no woman in my heart, so I draw my sword to the God of Nature. Control your desires and unleash them on your enemies. If you can't do this, it will be difficult to become popular.

The author changed the image of the bald man. Erlang Xianshengzhenjun is bald, which is too dramatic. As long as you don't give the protagonist An Erlang the title of God, I don't think there is anything wrong with being bald.

I feel that when the protagonist's skills are gathered together, there will be chaos in the temple.

Let me remind the author to think about how to end it The setting is apocalyptic with man-eating demons and the entire country and sects are in ruins. Although it is very enjoyable to write, the protagonist only needs to kill and kill. If the later stage is anticlimactic, it will be ugly. Don't just kill a few casually and then explain that the people have enough food and clothing to live and work in peace and contentment According to the current situation, the protagonist has to destroy the sect and make the family prosperous. Only by killing the clan can we achieve the level of saving the people. Don't say that if you kill the boss and replace him with a good person, they will change. It's impossible. You have to kill them all from top to bottom Now it belongs to the protagonist. Even if he rebels and becomes the emperor, there is no one available because the setting is that all members are evil. The setting is so excessive in the early stage. In the later stage, when the protagonist becomes stronger and bullies others, don't think about only dealing with those who are against him like a normal world view.

I've read over a hundred chapters and I can't stand it anymore. The author always messes with the settings. The preface and the follow-up are inconsistent. The more I read, the more disgusting I feel.

After so many chapters, the protagonist is still suspicious, worried and frightened when encountering danger. My mentality has not improved at all.

Just crush it, don't make it just right, almost, just right, it's just like that at the critical moment, it's not flattering at all

Make a plan. The protagonist fits the label of "reckless" very well. It's quite speechless. He has well-developed limbs and a simple mind. It's legendary that there is such a protagonist.

I really don't know what the author is thinking. It's just a girl, a childhood sweetheart who can explain why he doesn't. There is also a twist, his sister-in-law, and then the relationship is not clear. Isn't it interesting? I think the first few chapters are quite good, but when it comes to this relationship, I would like to thank you for your insensitivity. I specifically clicked on one chapter to give a paid review, but I didn't get past five chapters.

Ever since I started practicing Taoism, it has become boring after I planted a demon in my heart.

I don't understand. The plot is obviously pretty good, but why is it so awkward when the second mother comes in? Is it because I'm single? Even if you don't want to hang yourself, you can always make sure of your status. And if you don't think about Er Niang, the protagonist will live forever at first sight. Is he planning to wait for Er Niang to die of old age and live alone in a hundred years? It seems reasonable that many of you like the heroine now.

This book is already on the shelves, and the author is so awesome that he updated twelve chapters in a row. Where can I find such a powerful author in the whole starting point? I hope all book friends will support me. Just vote for recommendation. Subscribing will give the author the motivation to write. Of course, if the author has some shortcomings in his writing, you can also actively make suggestions. If you see the latest chapter in the future and feel it is not well written, or something that makes you dissatisfied, you can complain under my post, and I will give a reply and report it to the author. If you can subscribe to the latest chapter, you must be looking forward to this book and want to read it seriously. Your abuse can easily mislead everyone. I also know that after all, you have to subscribe to read it. If the writing makes you very dissatisfied, you will also feel very angry. I am a bit blunt in my speech. If I speak too harshly when replying to you, please forgive me. After all, there are many comments and they will all be treated as negative fans. You can comment below any of my posts, and I will respond seriously and report it to the author.

It would be perfect without the system panel. The most annoying system novels

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