Start with Mechanical Hunter

After reading dozens of chapters, I feel that although this book is a data flow, it does not have the feeling of clear combat power like a data flow. The feeling of increased combat power through upgrading is not obvious. Before each game is played, it is completely impossible to tell who is stronger and who is weaker. The settings are a bit too complicated. Each upgrade is a layer of nesting dolls, and the tree-like strengthening route is as complicated as it is unsaid. I don't understand the relationship between level and strength at all. I know that the protagonist at level 20 is stronger than the protagonist at level 10. But who is better than the level 40 BOSS or NPC depends entirely on the author's mood. The restraint between the various systems is completely unsolvable. Although it will definitely be changed in the future, it currently feels like it affects the experience. Also, it is now a first-level civilization, and the author has already mentioned all the technological power that I can think of. I am very curious about the gap between level 6 civilization and level 9 civilization and how the author plans to distinguish the individual differences between the same civilization in the future? I feel like the author wants to make the frame very big, but the opening stall is a bit big, and I'm a little worried about filling in later. I hope the author can control it. Overall, this book is considered a very good one among similar works, but it is still far away from "The Super Mechanic".

The book is a good book and has the potential to become a god. Unfortunately, it has not been updated steadily since then. There must be many book lovers who have given up reading, and it feels very painful to spend money to subscribe.

A social structure that burns the lives of individual extraordinary people but ignores this important resource of many ordinary humans is an abnormal wartime structure. To consume the potential of the future and force a civilization to temporarily burst out with powerful power to deal with many natural disasters and even the social structure of alien civilization invasion. What a waste! Whether it is ordinary humans who should all become professionals and use cyber skills to study the cyber world, explore the mysteries of the stars, and the truth of the universe, they have all become mediocre ordinary people who don't know where to go. Mortal... This is a concept that only a backward technological civilization can have. Educated scholars look down upon monkeys from above, powerful executives look down upon ants, and powerful professionals can knock down dozens of ordinary people alone. Those extraordinary people who have mastered special professional knowledge, have extraordinary power, and possess skills beyond ordinary people can naturally despise the commonplace. But only a backward civilization would have such a concept of waste. Humans... Not just humans, but an incredibly powerful race with subjective initiative and the innate ability to change the world - actually let ordinary people of intelligent races waste their brains, give up their bodies, and not get the education and training they should have, and they can't master the professional skills they should have mastered, and they are not allowed to get the power and knowledge they should have. What a waste! It's just like pouring good milk into the river. The waste of backward civilization on human beings is just like this kind of behavior. Only the society that takes the lead in utilizing more humans and making more humans non-mundane can become the ultimate winner. And this is also the secret of the ascension of civilization (ordinary humans in civilization also have the lowest level XXX)...

It took too long to lay the groundwork. I hope you won't write too fast later. If you sort out the outline carefully, you may become a god!

It jumps too fast, it doesn't feel overdone at all, and the plot jumps around a lot.

The writing can vividly describe the power of civilization, which is in sharp contrast to other individuals who conquer everything with great power. It is much better than other writings about civilization.

I wonder if the author filled in the values ​​with his feet. I now see that the protagonist sets off from the planet to the asteroid belt and captures a group of Shinto. Then the problem of quality came out. He found a star map inside the planet and said that it was 2.5 Light years from the planet to the underground black market he was going to. It would take two and a half years to fly at the speed of light. Then he caught the star. To be honest, if it weren't for the fact that his imagination was pretty good so far, he filled in a lot of debriefings. It really looked like he was being beaten and then said that the distance was 300 light years. It would take 300 years to fly at the speed of light. But with super-light technology, it only takes dozens of days. It's not a contradiction.

The experimental field at the beginning blends well together When I read this book for the first time, I happened to be playing the Borderlands dlc and found that it matched well. You can see the following: Horizon, Cyberpunk 2077, Ghost in the Shell, Transformers, Beast Man, Mad Max and the shadows of some other works. All machines and punks are mixed together. (Well done) Enter space to develop civilization and start a star war (I personally feel it is a bit fast. I also wanted to see the cosmic organization lead the development of players. As a result, the protagonist directly did most of the astrological ball and started to develop civilization) After the galaxy is finished, he will be the Khan of the universe. You can wait for your ascension After ascension, don't speed up. You have written so much for your last ascension 4-6 7-9 acceleration is too inconsistent The frame is a super god mechanic (because of fire, I also like it, so I use this as a representative.) But on the contrary, it highlights civilization and personal force and does not push civilizations of the same level equally. Although they are similar, the mechanism is still different. Ability composition Professions Sub-professions Attribute points There is a special mechanism for attribute values ​​to reach certain values ​​ Drawings Civilization tree (This is similar but different) It's a bit messy to be honest. In the end I found it is not as good as a lottery. The lottery has everything How is the level calculated? Is it the sum of the main profession and the sub-profession (I didn't read it very carefully and I read too many books. If it's more complicated, I don't remember it) Attribute points (there is a mechanism to a specific value) I will also mention it before, but I haven't said much about the third-level civilization after fighting all the time. The final memory is an average of 450+, character -1000+ Lottery (everything has architectural drawings, lineage, equipment, attribute points, good-looking books, good-looking Mewtwo, useful props) Bloodline (bloodline ability) Equipment (this is clear) Props Relics Treasures Megastructure Drawings —The current progress is just after killing the bugs to let the small bug eggs escape— Civilization Protagonist fusion (machine + carbon base, upper limit 9) Current 3 machines (killing the rich woman) Carbon base 2/1/0? Didn't say anything (I always said that I don't have a technology tree and can't bet on blueprints. You've already played level 4 carbon-based by yourself. Why can't you produce blueprints? Niuma Dashu, Sister Yu really doesn't have a foundation?) It's said that it's fusion, so why can't the protagonist fuse by himself? There's no fusion within the civilization. Will there be any problems with ascension according to the settings? Cheap Sister (Information Upper limit 6 (protagonist direct)) Current 3 Gao's Apeman (Engineer upper limit 6 (occupation upper limit)) Current 2 Three-eyed α (information (sister takes flight)) Current 3 It would be too weird if the members of the main civilization do not integrate and ascend directly by then It can be expected that the current map leveling machine should be at level 3. After the protagonist cleans the carbon base, use bugs to strengthen it. As for the radiation beast, it is probably the food of the bugs. Khan of the Universe (this is so fun) Peak Level 3 - Half-step to Level 4 Dzogchen. Evil Flesh Nomad Civilization also has a carbon base when he comes over. I guess there may be matching gadgets behind the converter, so he can ascend ———— This book is the most incomprehensible. The only thing I don't like is that there is no description of the cohesion of the camp! The protagonist does not play any role between the player, the protagonist, and the camp. He is really just a pure NPC who runs a small stove for fun. He is also a pure NPC out of the planet (the big rich woman sacrifices to the sky, the small rich woman lays ashes) and is incompetent in internal affairs. He said that he wanted to build a civilization and lead the players. Then what? He doesn't care, the senior management only takes him seriously. Technician Han has already done the proofing and just avoided it? (Afraid of comparison? Afraid of cliché? But it's really stuck in your throat. It's really uncomfortable to see this.) The first dog leg and Lao Lie died. After the war, they didn't even have a shit, and they didn't use formalism to clean up the players. They just said that they were not nannies. If the player cannot control it, he can only use tasks to hang him. Now he has the intention of making a can. I didn't mention the camp before, but it's better now that I've mentioned it. Whether players stay or not depends entirely on their own consciousness? That's all. Of course, the fourth natural disaster in this world is not very invincible, but the reincarnation position is really untenable without unity. Personal opinion, just take a look, welcome to discuss

I skipped through about 500 chapters and didn't leave the novice village.

I feel like the author has a little ingenious idea. The world is big, but it's not a cliche-style infinite universe. If you want to describe all these systems and plots, it will have to be a super long novel. You can simply put more energy before ascension and write the best you can and the most acceptable to the readers. In this way, you can fully develop it and have the least regrets. Anyway, I think it looks good.

How should I put it? As of what I have seen so far, the main plot of this book, including the part about returning from the Cybertron armed satellite and replenishing supplies and building new ones, is quite good. I just feel like the author didn't create a document every time the protagonist's abilities were updated. Many of the details of the teacher are completely inconsistent with the previous documents. For example, in this new document about capturing Cybertron, he said that constructs have 10 times the damage against mechanical life, but he also said before that constructs are only special weapons used by mechanical civilizations against other civilizations, which is quite contradictory.

Author, you should know how many chapters you owe. Either add more chapters, or fulfill your promise at the beginning of this month and help us out!

I have a question I would like to ask. In the chapter I am reading now, the intelligence attribute among the protagonist's basic attributes has exceeded 2000 points, but it seems that I have not seen what skills the protagonist has chosen, including the basic intelligence attribute breakthrough, 100 200 1000. These do not say what skills are selected for the intelligence attribute.

I've read the first 70 chapters. I've played 2077, and I can still understand many parts of it, but what about people who haven't played it? It's easy to get overwhelmed by the setting. I feel that the plot should be explained clearly at the beginning. The plot of the article is incoherent. After reading a short paragraph, it will be a long paragraph and then forget what happened before. Also, was the chapter about beating the chimpanzees deleted? Why can't it connect to the next chapter?

Come on

It has been raised for a long time. How is its combat strength now?

Nowadays, the rules of the book review area are corrupt and traitors are everywhere. This is due to the lack of updates. If the author diligently updates 10,000 words every day, then the traitors will be afraid and retreat, and the moral gentlemen will rejoice. This is a feat worthy of praise by Yao and Shun! I have heard that calves born in sheep pens do not behave like sheep when they grow up. You are in Qidian. You use your computer keyboard frequently, but you have lost interest in updating it. Is this reasonable? The reason why Qidian is strong is that it has inherited the etiquette and skills of its ancestors. Stop updating, the pressure has nowhere to release, and you become tired. Isn't this the same as abandoning the roots of the tree and pursuing the treetops? If it goes on like this, great disaster will definitely happen! The reason why Bai Jin can have tens of thousands of royalties and not be hurt by villains is precisely because they are willing to listen to what upright gentlemen have to say! Poujie cannot get royalties, and is even looked down upon by his girlfriend. This is because they are close to evil villains. I hope you can think carefully about the difference. There is one thing for which the author can cry bitterly, and six things for which the author can sigh. Since ancient times, when performing actions, the words are often very passionate. If they are not passionate, they will not be able to move the actor's heart. Harsh words are akin to slander. Author, you should think carefully about whether such a thing is right or wrong. Those authors who updated less, delayed, or missed updates had no time to feel sad about themselves, so they were drowned in the torrent of works, leaving only later authors to feel sad about them. Later authors felt sad and did not learn from it, and future authors felt sad about it.

Hehehe

I'm reading the Warhammer series recently. What level do you think the emperor sitting on the toilet can reach in this book? Is it considered full level? I don't know whether the emperor sitting on the toilet is an energy system or a carbon-based system (psionic energy should be regarded as a universal energy of energy)

Name collection activity It seems that the name "Starting from the Mechanical Hunter" is indeed not a good one. I am notoriously incompetent at naming. So please help me think of a good name. The main thread of this book is the cybernetic social ecology, the interaction and collision between different civilization routes, and the mechanical abnormal route of pig's feet. Everyone please feel free to express yourself, I humbly accept it A certain boss suggested naming it "Cyber: Who is the Natural Disaster" It seems to be better than ours. What other good ideas do you guys have?

Hehehe

If the author could get rid of the bad stuff in the book, it wouldn't be much worse than The Super Mechanic.

Westworld is a very good show. It creates a group of mechanical androids to form a western cowboy world NPC for players to explore (a group of real rich people). The main plot is the awakening of the consciousness of the androids (probably, I just watched the sixth episode of the first season, but I haven't finished it yet). It's very good to watch, and it suits the style of this book very well. The only pity is that the plot is suitable for people who have just arrived in Sin City and conducted group experiments, and it is not suitable for the current plot. A great addition to the ancient android awakening background

This is a work I saw on GGAC called "Do No Evil, Do All Good". It's very similar to the style of this book!

There are several questions. 1. The settings are too complicated. 2. Players appear too late. 3. The nurturing flow reduces the feeling of pleasure. 1. There are too many settings, too complicated, and there is no explanation when they appear, so you can't understand them at all. There are levels, attributes, mechanical energy, biological energy, skills, templates, machinery, organisms, and especially cyber (this is the most complicated). There are so many skills that the panel cannot be viewed at all. For example, if readers want to analyze two characters, who is stronger and who is weaker, there is no way to tell. I even don't know what the protagonist's attributes are. For example, when the protagonist arrives in the cyber city, how much mechanical energy is there, how much biological energy is there, how many attributes are there, what skills he has, and what level of enemies he can fight. Don't know anything. It all depends on the author. The author will do whatever he wants. Especially the chapter of Cyber ​​City. 5 or 6 settings that were not available before appear. Has the author ever considered that many readers don't know what the word "cyber" means? 2. Players appear too late. The biggest highlight of this book is the players. Similar novels such as "Black Star Mechanic". You, the player, didn't come out until so late. After reading the free chapter, I didn't even see the player. 3. What I want to see is that the protagonist is awesome, not the rich woman who is the protagonist. The protagonist is the reincarnation of a level 6 civilization boss, and the plot relies on the help of a rich woman. The rich woman helps too much, and the ratio is too large, which makes the protagonist's efforts seem to be in vain, and the protagonist's sense of achievement is reduced.

In one word, messy, the plot is messy, the settings are messy, and the writing is messy. I read more than two hundred pictures, and I was very confused. Did I not read carefully? What is the current strength of the protagonist, and what is the highest level of the planet's combat power. It feels like the protagonist is just wandering around, and then he sees something that feels good. , I went to take a look, and I saw a mission that I thought was okay, so I went to do it. What is the division of forces on this initial planet and the level of combat power? Before Night City, I felt that the protagonist's combat power was quite powerful. He had killed all the A-level radiation beasts, but then why did he feel that each individual was stronger than that A-level radiation beast? Damn, what is the status of that lieutenant general on this planet? What is the combat power and status of the security corps on the planet? Why do I feel that after entering Night City, the forces are more powerful than the security corps? The three mother cities that dominate the power of the planet now are not. What is the level of power in Night City? Why is it so small? Not to mention, the protagonist was a big boss before we met, but after we met, he was a noob. It's not bad, but it just felt weird. I always felt like something was missing. It made me uncomfortable. I felt like I had watched it but not watched it. What is the main plot and what is the protagonist going to do? I didn't see it at all.

At the beginning, I created the image of a virtual dominating boss. I thought he was so powerful when he was reborn, but I didn't expect that he was still just like a soldier fighting for life 🙂 and turned into a mediocre person.

I haven't posted for a long time, so I would like to express my thoughts on the author's small questions 1. Humans are social animals after all, and civilization requires a mainstream trend of thought. In other words, under the premise of infinite individual differences, there must be a broad and inclusive trend of thought that can allow both parties to understand each other. Unless there is a collective hardware upgrade, a more advanced template replaces the native system. 2. Is the civilization taking the biological + mechanical path, or is the protagonist taking the biological + mechanical path? If it is a civilization, can the protagonist's previous abilities be fully released, and the technical reserves should not be too much, and at the same time, sustainable, low-cost, and extensive advanced resources must be found (or solved through technology). Civilization must be reflected in all aspects. Can the protagonist promote this unique trend of thought through events (your civilization is so unique in the universe, how to solve cultural confidence and how to persist). When ideological trends are strong, whether it is possible to carry out reverse civilization erosion requires a large number of talents and cannot be solved by just one civilization leader (I have not mentioned cultism, unless the protagonist is omnipotent). I hope that group portraits will be described in the future. 3. Player issues: Can the ideological issues brought by players be solved? Are players part of the civilization (assimilation or employment)? What are the unique roles of players? That's about it. If you have any ideas, please add them.

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