One Piece: Beginning Awakening Death Template

Daily Guide was attracted by the name and subject matter At present, I have read five or six chapters after it was released. Let me talk about a few uncomfortable points. First, the Goldfinger Achievement Points are obtained at will. It costs 350 points for subduing the Vinsmoke family, 150 points for killing a 50 million beli pirate, and 500 points for defeating Doflamingo. I feel like I will give you as much as you want, depending on the scene, and I will give you more if you write more about this character. The second is that the progress is very strange. I see that the progress of slaying the fist ghost has not been completed yet. Most of them are at 80 proficiency level. I only clicked a few ghost roads, and then I opened the second vest very early. In many places, it inevitably violates the author's statement of "not using the same skills". Third, the characters are written very intelligently. Take the plot of Doflamingo's fight as an example. A Lieutenant General of the headquarters attacks a bounty hunter because he is greedy for the military merits of a Shichibukai. Moreover, the Shichibukai was originally created by the navy to stabilize the world. You pushed a neutral camp to the opposite side? There are also elite training camp assessments. If you lose, you will be given small shoes? Is it necessary to engage in so many political struggles? Is this One Piece or some kind of workplace drama? Fourth, the plot is outrageous. At the beginning, the protagonist's reason for taking action was that her savior was killed, and he took action in order to avenge her. However, after writing the plot, the benefactor was not mentioned at all, and it was not mentioned after the reply was obtained. Maybe I haven't seen it yet. Then there is the above mentioned, writing about One Piece is like writing a career movie, it is all about military glory; and the description of pirates and the grassroots of the navy is very hypocritical. When the leader of the pirates dies, the rest will disperse in a hurry. This is reasonable, maybe it is just a group of mobs; the key naval vice admiral dies, and the rest are like headless flies, running away. Is it the same with the navy and pirates? The adjutant is also dead? Are all the remaining rear admirals, colonels, lieutenant colonels, etc. Gone? These can all serve as base commanders all over the world. It is really outrageous to say that there is only one person who can command a warship. It feels like the navy was deliberately written to be so mentally retarded just for the sake of the protagonist's advancement; even the description of Zefa, a general who has experienced large and small battles, will be furious because of the casualties of soldiers, and in order to kill the enemy, he will leave a boatload of students in a battlefield where the strength does not match. Is this Zefa? ? ? The fifth point is that the wording used to describe it is very fantasy and martial arts. You can use '' to break it for me! The sudden appearance of words like '', ''understatement without showing any expression'' destroys the fighting atmosphere. When I first started writing, it was a passionate fight, but when I wrote this word, it suddenly turned into a martial arts fantasy about casting various spells.

I still like to "eat it all over the world with one trick". Too many abilities/the soul-cutting sword is too complex and boring - and there is no sense of accomplishment in watching the protagonist grow. Personal opinion

Tips about pirates

Akainu's fruit really doesn't deserve to be put together with Ryuken Wakahu. Akainu's fruit is like lava when it bursts through the sky. The initial setting of Ryūrenruohuo is the temperature on the surface of the sun. The temperature of the swastika directly reaches the interior of the sun, burning mountains and boiling the sea, vaporizing everything, and the entire pirate world cannot eat it.

After reading the introduction, I came in and said that I like this kind of writing but don't like it being too complicated (a soul-cutting sword would be much better and I don't want to read it).

The compatibility between the Shinigami and pirates is really not that good. The battle between the Shinigami is the battle of spiritual pressure. Even the body is a spiritual body. If you use any number of swords, as long as the spiritual pressure crushes them, you are still a chicken and a dog.

Another book about pirates being criticized for their combat power (anyone who has read the original book knows that their combat power has long since collapsed. As long as the author comes up with his own combat power system, he will be fine. Why are you complaining?)

I'm just annoyed that no matter if you have the Shinigami or Hokage ability, you have to learn the Six Styles or Haki in One Piece. None of them rely on pure world power. The combat capabilities of these three major comics are almost the same. The power of one world is enough.

What the hell is Bucky? There are so many things he can do. He is a scumbag in the face of absolute strength.

This book is considered one of the best among the Pirates fics I have read. Of course, it can be ranked in the top 30, but the premise is not to delve into the details. For example, I still remember a few points relatively clearly, including the time and place when the Red Earl's bat fruit appeared, Zefa was attacked by Weibull, all the students were wiped out, and only Ain and Binzo were left, the arm-breaking incident (Zefa was 65 years old at this time, Ain and Binzo were the only surviving interns), and Tina and Ain at the same time? The navy hawks, including Akainu, are a little brainless, and the male protagonist is a eunuch, and the male protagonist doesn't care much about training his subordinates (the protagonist has many opportunities to get powerful devil fruits). So far, there are only two that can be seen. Plus some other problems, I don't want to check. Of course, I read the paid content on the channel website. I read too many books and ran out of money. I hope the author's next book will be better.

Forget it, the protagonist's sword was changed to "Yanluo Jingdian". It just so happened that 98 gave him a sword that can copy all the abilities of the Zanpakutō.

Just looking at it, the limited exemption is gone, and there is still this operation at the starting point

In the first few chapters of the rubbish review, the author has eaten books and become fat. As mentioned before, the protagonist was silent for three lines and then started talking a lot of nonsense. What about the character? Eaten? Talking about considering the navy is nonsense. I don't think it's surprising at all that the protagonist is wanted in the next chapter. Don't say shit about readers who have the vision of God. If you write like this, everyone has the vision of God!

Does the author have a female protagonist? If anything, I hope it's Nami Robin and Ein. The Empress has a love brain and Yamato is a fool. I don't like these brains that are not normal.

The update is too slow, this book is easy to wear out

From the moment the aunt was killed and the four emperors and one king were formed, the book was finished, and the rest was full of water.

In the world of One Piece, the navy branch is not as weak as in the article. Each of the four seas navy branches has many battleships. It is still possible for three or five branches to join forces to make Vinsmoke. In Paradise and New World, one branch is probably enough.

The word count of Tiantianshui becomes more and more boring the more I read it.

Personally, I don't really like the setting of clones, it feels a bit out of place. Overall not bad. Come on, author, and look forward to the follow-up!

Quincy's abilities are suitable for developing power

This is a very good Bleach fanfic, after all, there are very few Bleach fanfics.

Who stole the Piaopiao Fruit? I've been watching it recently.

I'm borrowing a building to recommend this word game novel that I like. The adventure of this word game is really mysterious. The world view is set on a full moon night. It is combined with various fantasy elements and the plot is well designed. The collection link is below, you can try to collect it and watch it.