Become the Spiritual King in Naruto

Is it possible that we are actually in the world of Death, the system is fine, and the protagonist is a little crazy?

Playing sheep's heads, selling dog meat... Everything is reproduced, and all require the protagonist to guess and practice based on his own talent. Yes, the principles are not given to the protagonist, and it is up to the protagonist to figure it out. With this talent, wouldn't it be faster to learn the original ninjutsu? You still have to innovate one by one. In this ninja world where life is not easy, I only saw the protagonist squandering his talents.

I've written three books and I'm still at level 3, and the gold content is directly maxed out 😁😁😁

The Soul King and the God of Death have little to do with each other. If you still stick to the old Zanpakutō style, don't sell it like a sheep's head.

Laughing to death, how can a ninja school be compared with a Shinigami school? A Shinigami school can study for tens or even hundreds of years, and you can live a stable life. A ninja school can last for up to 6 years of normal life. If you graduate during a war, you will be allowed to enter school at the age of 6 and graduate at the age of 7 to go to the battlefield. It is not good to expose Tianbin. Konoha F4 will let Tianbin graduate early and go to the battlefield. The main feature is a Konoha seedling burning and dedicating himself to support F4.

This childish type of kid is no longer popular. It looked so embarrassing. An adult uses the tone of a child to coax a little girl. Isn't what you wrote embarrassing?

To be honest, when you watch this kind of subject, don't you just want to see the collision of the powers of two different systems? As a result, the ghost path of the god of death is localized and released using chakra, which is a bit low.

It is said to be a Death God, but the rewarded Death God abilities require the protagonist to learn them by themselves, and then use chakra to imitate them. It does not reflect the difference between spiritual power and chakra at all, so why is it called the Death God King?

Against the odds, the Kidō rewarded by the system needs to be released with chakra, and it has to be sealed. Then why don't you learn from the Rasengan Chidori? The rewards for working hard on tasks are not as good as local products.

I don't know if I can represent the general environment, but I feel that the Third Generation is the villain in Naruto fandom. I understand that tomatoes are generally related to Jiraiya, and judging from Naruto's age, there is no way he can be substituted for Jiraiya's so-called self-movation. .

There is a reason why there are so few comments. Look at the garbage you write!

The things rewarded by the system require the protagonist to explore, learn and create by himself. So let me ask you, what is the use of your system rewards? What is the use of the protagonist doing system tasks? Can't the protagonist develop it himself? What is the difference between his own development and system rewards? So what is the use of this system? Restricting the protagonist to the art of death? Forget it, and the underlying logic of the Shinigami has been changed. Instant cast ghost paths require seals. I can't even imagine what kind of ghost paths that need to be chanted have been changed. According to this statement, it is estimated that the soul-cutting sword's first interpretation of the swastika is gone. Then why don't you write a Gouba Shinigami system? Something that is of little use has to be changed from something that was meant for showboating and fun into something that is restrictive. I can't say what the author's brains are.

You have to explore, learn, try, form seals, and localize the system's rewards yourself before you can use them. Then why not just learn the localized powerful ninjutsu?

It was the Spirit King who appeared first, and then the God of Death

The writing is not good, and the imagination is not good either. What the hell is using chakra to release ghosts? It's so against the law.

As we all know, the Soul King is a wedge between the three realms, and he is as tall as the yellow man squatting on the toilet in Warhammer, but does the ninja world need such a worldview plug-in? What's more, from the introduction to the title, the protagonist is going to take the path of death. Is it okay to write "become the strongest god of death"? If you really want to write about the spiritual king who grew up as a weakling and became the strongest, why not write about Youha? Judging from Tensu Zangetsu's appearance, he was handsome when he was young, and he could also create all kinds of interesting sacred texts. What does it mean to go to school in Konoha, a country that has long been tainted by countless low-quality plots from Kishimoto? Selling dog meat over someone else's head won't last long, and none of the Dead Fire Sea fans will have any good results.

The early stage writing is good, but that is the only advantage of the early stage writing. The rest are all shortcomings. The writing style is childish, and the problems become more prominent toward the end. The collision between the two different power systems of Naruto and Death was not written. He wanted to use localized chakra to perform Death's moves, but he did not give a reasonable and justifiable reason. The more he read, the more unreasonable he became. That system is just a piece of cake, let's not talk about it anymore. In the early stage, in order to attract readers, the shit basin was decorated with gold rims. After it was put on the shelves, the shit basin was directly placed on your face. Look at your title, was it someone else's? Did you hire a ghostwriter or give it to a studio?

Go ahead and drive the screws, okay? You don't have the talent to eat this bowl of rice.

The ghost path given by the system cannot be used immediately and you have to learn it yourself. You even have to form seals. Where did the protagonist's spiritual power go?

A ninjutsu that transforms the shinigami ghost path into a form of chakra... The most interesting thing is the crispy skin of the ninja, and the strange power of the protagonist, the One Bone Master, which is destructive internally and externally. It has been described that the opponent resisted with both hands, but the protagonist's power still passed through, and the opponent's juniors all appeared in smoke, which means that the protagonist's power has passed through the opponent. Fang's body, this guy is fine, even his opponent's hand is fine and he can use ninjutsu. This is not pure nonsense... The combat power is just empty. The protagonist's eight gates + strange power can hit him with one punch. The opponent only needs to cross his hands to protect his chest. The battle will not be affected at all... I want to ask, when did ninjas become pirates? It's just pure bullshit. It either misses the target or takes the form of a shadow, and it's not Madara. Being hit by the protagonist's eight gates + strange power and one bone is nothing, it's pure bullshit.

The classic emphasis on daily life is to develop an invincible style from an early age (?), Starting from the Shinigami, then the rest of the system is probably a long-term pie; On the one hand, it is not as domineering as the Quincy, On the other hand, the lifespan of the Shinigami is not comparable to that of ninjas, but relatively speaking, the development time is longer 🙂 So, alas, system, alas [doge]

In the author's opinion, as long as Uchiha's emotions are in place, even a dog can open a kaleidoscope. He does not consider talent at all. This one has a kaleidoscope when he is stimulated, and the other one has hatred again. According to his nonsense, the Uchiha had dozens of pairs of kaleidoscopes that night when the clan was exterminated.

There are quite a few problems, so it's best to review them and correct them all.

It's such an embarrassing novel. The author may think that what he wrote is funny.

Md saw Chapter 69 and became more and more angry the more he read. I had just read the beginning before getting on the plane and thought it was a good idea. He also subscribed for 100 chapters. However, he didn't even finish the free chapters on the plane. I'm really curious about what the setting of Goldfinger is for? As far as I understand it, it belongs entirely to the uniqueness of the protagonist, but it is not reflected at all in this novel. It also does not reflect the research between different systems. There is a big section in the middle of making meatballs. Why don't I read the original work to see you when I read meatballs?

I've always thought that liking Tsunade, Yuhi Kurenai, and those with weird white eyes all have aesthetic issues.

I realized when I saw it🤣I have read the first three books

I heard that the author has completed three books, and I admire him Please read and support~

It's been getting slower and slower lately, so hurry up and end it

I've finished writing it, but I haven't explained clearly how to support the Three Realms.