Pirate: Don't Let Him Draw His Sword

Such an old pirate novel, how did the author manage to write a 2014-style novel in 2024? The plot is so pure that you can see it from beginning to end. The gang goes to Capone, to the Navy, to the Kingdom of Flowers to find domineering training, and they also bring Robin (not a buddy) along with them. I have read this plot in eight out of ten books. The only thing I can praise is that he is very proficient in filling water. It would be good to write more books. After all, writing more means making money faster. It's really hard work to be able to write an early Tutu-ryu Pirates fanfic with a classic FL flavor in this year. I would like to call it Renaissance👍

The author did a good job, but it's just too few, just over 200 episodes.

Why are they all about small days? I want to see the flying immortals from the sky, the Thirteen Swords, spanning all directions, the eight-sided Han Sword

If a One Piece fan doesn't eat the fruit and just writes about swordsman, I wish the author won't dive through the bottom of the sea.

The more I read, the more boring I feel. In order to suppress the combat power, the author just writes it all randomly and adds points. If it is so rare, why forcefully suppress the combat power? It's really boring to read later. So what if your protagonist is invincible in the end? The protagonist in that novel is not invincible unless the type is different. It's a purely everyday and peaceful era or hegemony. When the protagonist gets excited, he uses the so-called general to suppress him. The protagonist is really speechless, the fighting power is as disgusting as bullshit, and it feels boring. You are beaten like this by a fool, and you are invincible. If you want to suppress the protagonist's combat power, why do you write so many bullshit generals and four emperors chasing the protagonist? The world is so big and I really want to hide, they chase me a few times

In fact, I have always wanted to complain about something, that is, it is understandable that Japanese swords are not differentiated, but as Chinese people, there is no distinction between swords 😥 It is not good to just call swordsmanship 😅

Pure running account. Stacking values, repeating the same plot, almost no characterization, fighting skills, and supporting characters with facial makeup. To be honest, if you can't, just buy an AI. AI is better than this

This writing is amazing! One thing keeps repeating, one fight keeps shocking and talking too much!

After reading more than forty chapters, I feel that the plot of this book would be the same no matter what the story is. . .

It's just a novel with a pirate skin. This template can be used not only for writing about pirates, but also for urban fantasy. And it's super watery...😅

As long as the protagonist's combat power is a little higher, there will be a lot of enemies that can overwhelm the protagonist. The protagonist always beats people, but he is just a little bit. He is either one level higher or the four emperors are chasing him, which is also quite boring. To be honest, unless the protagonist fights them relentlessly, they will kill the protagonist immediately and even ignore their own power. Only by constantly chasing the protagonist can it be possible. Don't read the manga first. The main character of Luffy fights every day and is constantly being chased. How could he be stupid? He will not hide from the limelight temporarily. Do you think that the Yonko, the general, is very idle and chases you every day? Why is it that the ocean is so big? It is too difficult to chase someone unless he is a person with territory like the Yonko. Otherwise, it is so outrageous. Look at how the red haired people grew up. Don't talk about whether he is a Celestial Dragon or not. When he was weak, I didn't believe that no boss could kill. If he really wanted to be a pirate, he wouldn't kill. I would dare to kill Luffy. As for the minions and the protagonist who met Luffy so hard, there were no shots of those who were defeated to show what happened to them. Ordinary people must be dead. There are cheats that suppress the combat power. It's really boring. These cheats are useless at first glance. It's a skill from another world. It's not a very outrageous skill. It's better to use a proficiency plug-in. Although the protagonist's skills can show the proficiency, but there is no trace. Those skills are completely like no progress. They exist to forcefully suppress the combat power. They are just to give the protagonist the so-called trust skills when he is about to die. It's really boring. No wonder your novel is not very popular.

Hydrographer. . . Che Luglu talked back and forth. .

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There's a lot of nonsense, I can't imagine how good the paid stamps are.

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One Piece is about fruit development. It looks good. You write that the swordsman is there to chop it with a knife:: It would be better if you find a factory and pay money to work.

Based on the defense, why do you make a second-generation plot so long? The opening sequence is awkward.

The combat power is extremely broken. A branch colonel has the strength to suppress the leaders of the five major mafia families. Then the Pirate King should be renamed the Navy King.

There is no need to subscribe to this book. The protagonists' personalities conflict with each other. The author wrote a short story, killing one to make a slightly stronger one. A pirate wearing fantasy tricks

I just want to ask who is Lan disaster? The three major signs are drought, inflammation and epidemic. How can there be an extra person? I spent money to watch it and then suddenly got sucked into it. I advise newcomers to run away.

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It can only be said that the protagonist is really a fun person. While thinking about whether he can defeat the general, he does not challenge the strong ones to gain points, and keeps traveling slowly. I'm a little tired. Every time I get hurt, I get more points. It doesn't add much. I might as well challenge more strong people to get more points.

The author definitely chose the name cancer~ From the name of the protagonist to the title~ it is hard to look at it~ Blood Blade~ I think it is better to just see it as Blood Blade~ Maybe One Piece is a Japanese comic~ So the author wants to make the title more Japanese-style, but Blood Blade, what the hell is this? Hahaha, such a bad title😂 Then some of the protagonist's actions claim to be uncomfortable~ Titles are usually given or called by others, and the protagonist introduces himself to everyone I meet, I am Blood Blade, I am Blood Blade , how can anyone introduce themselves like this? When I put it in, I feel like I can dig out three bedrooms and one living room with my toes. It's like a nouveau riche who keeps emphasizing to others that he is rich. He has no real character. He loses his character every time he doesn't say it. Then some plots keep emphasizing that the protagonist is very young~he is so strong at the age of 18. Repeatedly and repeatedly, it feels very strange I basically jumped to watch it All I can say is I can read it, but the writing style is too naive~ It's okay for some new bookworms~ But for those of us old bookworms who have read online articles for several years, it's a bit hard to read directly. It's okay to take a look at the book shortage

It's quite interesting. You can write a longer story, form multiple forces, and lead supporting characters to fight in multiple worlds. After finishing Death, you can write spells to return to the war.

After reading the first ten chapters, I feel that the protagonist's personality is very split. One moment he says that he is a salty fish, and the next moment he wants to sail on the Grand Line. After solving the Capone family, if he really becomes a salty fish, he will be strong enough to dominate several small islands. I feel that the writing style and the protagonist set by the author are very split.

Suddenly I discovered that the current pirate king Luffy's combat power is not as strong as the aging Demon King Piccolo, and Nika Luffy currently does not have the strength to sink the island in one strike.

Recommend a pirate fan novel: "Pirates: Becoming the King of the World from the Age of Rocks" [Decisive Killing + Dominance + Great Swordsman + Pirate Group + Age of Rocks + World Domination] Return to the Age of Rocks, join the Rocks Pirate Group and become a cadre, grab the gold from the sky, massacre the Celestial Dragons during the Battle of the Valley of Gods, and form a pirate group after Rocks' death to dominate one side. During the second celebration of the Celestial Dragons, all the pirate groups in the new world of the Alliance once again launched the Battle of the Valley of the Gods, snatching the Celestial Dragons' treasures and devil fruits, massacring the Celestial Dragons again, killing Lord Garin, Army General, and CP0 Chief... Hawkeye Homick: The world's greatest swordsman? No, no, no, this is not me, but Li Yuan. Ever since I started learning swordsmanship, I have been pursuing his path of swordsmanship. Whitebeard: The strongest man in the world is not me, but Li Yuan. That guy is so outrageous that even my ability to awaken the Shock Fruit cannot defeat him! Five Old Stars: Obviously I am immortal and can passively teleport to save my life. Why am I still being killed?

The sky is blue. Looking at the blue sky, Wayne couldn't help but sigh: "The sky is so blue." ————The whole article is full of this style of structure, it's really hard to listen to it.

A Capone Becky solved 33 chapters. In the middle, he pretended to be a pig and ate a tiger. He stood still and made people laugh. To put it mildly, my writing style cannot keep up with the changes of the times. It is better not to write a book. Who can read this mentally retarded novel that spans 10 years?