Returning to the Golden Age

Sorry, I'm from rural Anhui and can't understand Shanghainese. Goodbye, this is a book for Shanghainese, 886

I suggest you don't always write in Shanghainese. How many Shanghainese people are reading your books? They can't understand many of the meanings. Use vernacular when writing. Don't write in local languages. Just make a few sentences. If you always speak the truth, more people will scold you later. I suggest you change the way you write as soon as possible.

The writing is okay, but I feel that as a Cantonese, I am not worthy of reading novels written by people from Shanghai!

I took a bus in Shanghai many years ago, and it felt awkward to play arrival announcements in both Shanghainese and Mandarin. The business trips that month included Beijing, Shanghai, Tianjin, Nanjing and other places, and it was Shanghai that made me feel special.

There is no main plot in this book. I was reborn and went back to college. I don't know why I didn't learn anything in college, and I didn't have any goals. I just lived my life. The protagonist handed over his business to a friend from the beginning and wrote a few chapters in a vague way. Then there are all kinds of filthy parents and irrelevant people appearing around them, and the protagonist helps them do business and make money, just like a rich man who is about to die is reborn and goes back to live in retirement. There is no goal, no focus, and I write here and there. I live my whole life for others and come back just to find a woman to get married and have children. I don't have any vitality at all. It makes me want to chant Buddha and chant sutras to support myself until I am old. The whole book emphasizes that the protagonist doesn't love money and has endless wealth. He doesn't mention a word about how much money the protagonist makes. He doesn't mention a word that should be written. He doesn't write a word that's vague and a lot of things that shouldn't be written. A novel with only side missions and no main missions feels like the whole book is just making fun of it.

Let me tell you a joke: The sea was banned in the Qing Dynasty, and the history of Shanghai from its establishment to the present is only more than 100 years. There are no real Shanghainese from generation to generation. They are all foreigners. These people got together and actually created a Shanghai dialect, and then collectively discriminated against foreigners. . .

The beginning was good, but when I got to college, I didn't have much to see. It was ridiculous to bring all the people I had good connections with into the same company, and each owned a share and gave away shares. Gu Jie, who paid from the beginning, got nothing, and Ying Caixia, who was halfway through poverty alleviation, forced to give away 10% of the shares. With this mysterious operation, a small family spirit arose spontaneously. I really regret that I ordered all of them. I couldn't watch half of it.

I'm dizzy. There is a right way. Hurry through the late Ming Dynasty, raise the flag of rebellion, overthrow the Ming Dynasty, drive away the Qing Dynasty, and colonize Nanyang. This is the right way. Why write about the city? There are many restrictions. You can't write this or that. Let's write history.

I was persuaded to quit by the book review before I read it. According to my reading habits, the dialect is not a poisonous point for me. The following points are very poisonous to me: 1. The protagonist has no goals, or has no strategic plan for his career. 2. There are no rules for doing things. In business management, take monetary shares as an example. When necessary, let alone controlling rights, even 90% of the shares can be given away. When it is not necessary, let alone shares, not even a penny of salary should be added.

Licking a dog? Want to lick a rich man in Shanghai? It's a pity that people in Shanghai look down on dogs like you. Isn't it sad? From time to time, the article describes dissatisfaction with the policy, vaguely wanting to lick the cold buttocks of Shanghainese but unable to do so.