The Great Rebel at the End of the Ming Dynasty

Because the outline of your book is written in exactly the same way as it was written 10 years ago, which is outdated. I read many of the protagonists, their imaginations, and various conspiracy theories more than ten years ago. Today's readers simply don't accept this. They are not like those noobs who didn't understand history more than ten years ago.

You're not progressing at all in the tech tree. In that era, the Qing Dynasty was the strongest military force. Given the current situation you've described, how many days of training would it take you to defeat the Qing? How many chapters do you even need to write now? Tech tree, you should at least start progressing! It's a complete generational gap.

When you first know that troubled times are coming, you should consider preparing for rebellion. If you can have a stable life, you can also consider adapting to the environment without rebelling. If troubled times are coming and you cannot live a stable life, you should consider how to prepare for rebellion. If you have money, use money to win over people's hearts.

Give the author some advice on how to write the best beginning. Please refer to the July new work of the author who died young. After reading the three golden chapters at the beginning, I have no desire to read on. There are too many elements in the beginning.

It's pretty good. Although some people say it's formulaic and cliché, I think it's alright. I don't find it cliché. Isn't it a kind of nostalgic classic feeling? The tech tree didn't really develop much, but that's okay. You're reading a novel for the story and characters, not to watch someone forcefully climb the tech tree and dominate weaker opponents. You should definitely climb the tech tree when necessary, but it's not fun if you can't use cheat codes or system-wide advantages. 😜

This way of time travel really makes me nervous, and what do you do with your ancient household registration status and accent? Ancient Chinese is different from modern Chinese. Every time I see you guys writing and wearing clothes, it's really hard to express yourself. There are too many loopholes.

There is no halo of the protagonist at the beginning. He is as helpless, incompetent and speechless as the lower class people in ancient times. It is hard to believe that the boss has traveled through time...

It can only be said that the author made the mistake of being too irritated again and didn't see anything interesting. You either start to advance the rebellion quickly, or you just skip some unnecessary grinding. The pace is slow and the protagonist's performance is average. You might as well just write the beginning of the refugee rebellion. This is the disadvantage of the previous book.

So the protagonist is not the dominant one??

"The Great Rebel" is great; I love stories where the protagonist directly rebels! It's satisfying to read. I don't like stories about sycophants—those who fawn over the Ming, Shun, or Qing dynasties. They build their own armies and fight on their own.